~A Manveer SS-Ishq kabhi kariyo na~Part two30/6/12 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

interesting start..😊


Thank You So much😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is really very good
plz do pm me the further part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 start gud work...continue soon
ps pls pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Great Start
I think its either Manyata or Manveer baby girl
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesum start dear...do continue soon...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seems intresting...please update soon dear and if possible please PM me...thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is Part-2 guys😊
Hope u all like it...

Part-2

He remembered the day when he had seen his darling daughter for the first time…

Flash back(4 months ago)

He had just returned to India after 15 days, if it wasn't so important he would never have gone abroad leaving his pregnant wife home considering she was in her 8th month, but it was only him who could handle the sudden crisis that had arisen in faraway London.

Nevertheless he solved the problem in record time and flew to India as soon as he could.

Just after landing he got the news that his wife had been admitted to hospital last night. He dashed to the hospital without going home. The Hospital was 2 hours away from the Airport, he cursed the traffic, cursed the fellow drivers that came in his way, but no avail. As it happens in the movies he reached the hospital only after the disaster had struck. Ironically It was both happiest and saddest day of his life..

End of Flashback…

Urja suddenly stirred in her sleep jolting him out of his thoughts. He rocked her cradle slightly so that the baby could sleep undisturbed. Then he bent forward and kissed her forehead. Thinking about London he remembered that again he had to go to London In a few more days. The thought of going to London scared him, not that he was scared of flying or he was a first timer or anything. The thought of not being near Urja for 10 days was what scared him. Ever since the tragedy stuck he hadn't left her side for more than a day. He couldn't let her be with the other members of the family too, they couldn't take care of her as he did..

Urja the four month old Cherub was quite a handful. Why wouldn't she be when she had such a mighty man for a father….

End of Part-2

Tell me how was it by leaving your comments😊

n thank you so much for all those who commented on the first part...if anybody wants PM please send me buddy request...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear it was so good but I m confused that who is urja and who is her father
I never heard this name in DEK but I know u r going to do some different blast
ssooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzthakur

dear it was so good but I m confused that who is urja and who is her father

I never heard this name in DEK but I know u r going to do some different blast
ssooo


urja Is ManVeer's Daughter...more i will reveal in the next part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKfan2012


urja Is ManVeer's Daughter...more i will reveal in the next part😊


loved it yaar...its awesum 👏👏👏
cant wait ...do post soon nd its a req plz post a long update yaar...
nd really hope wht i m thinking or predicting whts gonna happen next doesnt come true...😕.
but will wait fr ur next udate

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