~A Manveer SS-Ishq kabhi kariyo na~Part two30/6/12

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys,
i've been a silent member of the forum mostly till now..seeing you ppl write so many nice stories, i too decided to let out my tiny creative mind..this is my first attempt at writing anything substantial n also this is the very first topic im posting in the forum..ok enough about myself now..the story is mostly ManVeer centric, but 1st 2 parts are mostly introductory so please bear with me if i don't start ManVeer romance right away...for now im just posting a trailer, lets see how the response for this part will be... suggestions and criticisms r welcome...



Part-1

She let out a wail'..

No response'.

This time she howled louder'.

Again no response

Now she howled enough to awake the entire household'..

Her daddy dearest heard her cries and entered the nursery to pacify her'

He bent over her crib and picked her up, her cries immediately stopped'she flashed him a dimple chinned smile.

Though she was only 4 months old, it seemed she already knew how to revolve the entire household around her little finger... this was no big deal because after all she was of royal blood'it was pure royal heritage running through her veins'

He gently put her on his shoulder so that he could rock her to sleep'his efforts paid off after 5 minutes n she finally went back to sleep. He carefully lifted her into her crib and looked lovingly at the face of his darling daughter'and remembered the day when he had seen her angelic face for the first time...

end of trailer...

so this was the trailer guys...this is it for now, i'll be posting the next part in 2-3 days...i know it was not so good, sorry if anybody got bored...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start!! Plzzz do continue soon n plz pm me once u update!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it:) finally tumne post kar diya :)baby girl toh bohoth cute lag rahi hai:)thanks for the PM eagerly waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asmimelody

loved it:) finally tumne post kar diya :)baby girl toh bohoth cute lag rahi hai:)thanks for the PM eagerly waiting for the next part..


Haan finally post karne ki himmat ki,😊 yeh tumhare wajah se possible hua meri pyaari behna..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Nice start!! Plzzz do continue soon n plz pm me once u update!!:)


Thanks for the comment fizza😊 sure i will PM you...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesone do cont soon...who z dis baby girl ...manyata or manveerz baby girl
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start da...pls pm me next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Awesone do cont soon...who z dis baby girl ...manyata or manveerz baby girl


To know who she is you'll hav to read the next part...😛keep guessing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowdream

nice start da...pls pm me next update


sure da...i will PM you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start..😊

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