'Life and it's circumstances' ManVeer SS chp5 pg11 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
very nice but super short please update soon woth more manveer romance please this part was fantastic 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
rocking?...woakk please upd8 nxt part soon...n amazing part.thanx fr pm👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Loved it update next part soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Intersting Update! I would love it wen u will Pair Unnati & Vijay... Pls Update a longer one! Ty 4 d pm & Update as soon as possible 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Intersting Update! I would love it wen u will Pair Unnati & Vijay... Pls Update a longer one! Ty 4 d pm & Update as soon as possible 😃

VB already has a wife in this one! And Alok is Unnati's fiance
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5Manyata and Uday both were descending the stairs. When, Alok and Unnati stopped them in the middle.Alok: Unnu c'mon quick get me a fire extinguisher isse pehele ki hum... Ahhh (laughter medicine😆)Unnati: Arre yaar Alok hummein toh iss ki aadat hogayi hai 😆Uday: Tumlog khali hum dono se jalte ho. Right Manyata😉Manyata: Right Uday😉😉Giriraj: Beta Alok bas abhi kitne jokes. Staff bhi jor joro se has rahi hai😆Alok: Hum hai hee lakhon mein ek😎Giriraj: Woh toh sahi hai beta tabhi toh humne aapko apni beti ke liye chunna (get's emotional😔)Alok: OMG. humare hote huye koi emotional ho raha hai.. kaise hogaya yeh anarth (tragedy)😆Uday: Ji agar aaplogon ka drama khatam hogaya ho toh hum jayein? (in a hurry to go😆)Giriraj,Unnati and Alok: Ijaazat hai (together) *****Recess was going on in the school. Sonia and Alok both were having their lunch. When, some girls and boys came there.A girl: You are Solanks best friend na. Can we be friends? Sonia: Sure. May I know your name?Girl: My name is Tammana Sonia.Sonia: Hi Tammana. Come join us.Just then a charming boy came there and started shooting daggers at Solank. He looked at Sonia and saidAnkit: Hi Sonia, I'm Ankit. Sonia: Hi Ankit. Come join us.In the whole break time. Ankit impressed Sonia and they were now good friends. Solank and Ankit somehow didn't like each other and Solank burned with jealousy. ******At the restaurant Manyata and Uday both were having some wine. Both were lost in each other. Between these two, eyes communicated more than words. Manyata's hazel brown eyes and Uday's chocolate brown eyes. Finally Manyata spoke up.Manyata: Uday, you know what I feel like the luckiest girl in the world. 😃Uday: Why so?Manyata: Do you believe in angels?Uday : You didn't answer my question.To be continuesd...Hope u like this chapter.I know this was not ROCKING wala rocking.I'll update next part soon.Tanvi:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
wonderful but too short please update soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Gud Update! But very shor :( :( pls update soon & a longer one .. Ty 4 d pm 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
dat was awesome tanvi really loved this part update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved alok he is really a nice guy... loved the kids scene and hayee maveer r just out of the world update soon and thanks for the pm

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