'Life and it's circumstances' ManVeer SS chp5 pg11

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Anny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Aww awesum update...but dnt make manveer old...yyy didnt u pm me huh

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udaymanyata07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

👏👏thanks.awesome...fantasric...brillaint...👏👏

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

omg that was awesome totally loved it hmm wondering y manyata was scared please update soon cant wait for the next part and thanks for the pm

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Thanks alot guys. I'm overwhelmed. Thanks alot. The updates will take time. Love you all...!!

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Promo: Manyata shouted " Idea..." And Uday said " nooo manyata.." what can it be? Stay tuned...

My chapter got deleted 2 times,...😡😡 I'll be updating tomorrow if possible... Now I gotta hurry for my classes... Sorry for the delay...

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Chapter 2The Uday Niwas group pf hotels was reaching the sky! All the bussiness holders in the city wanted to join hands with Uday Niwas. This was all possible because of his hard work. today was very hectic for him. He was exhausted. He saw a huge toy store and asked the driver to stop. He stepped inside the huge store and was personally greeted by it's owner after all he was a Yuvraaj. " It's great to have you here Udayveer" he said " Thanks Dharamveer. But I must say your shops are doing great!" Uday complimented. " Dude your my friend and I don't want to say that but I feel jealous of you" he frowned. " Why so? " Uday asked. " I'm a regular visitor of your hotels and I wish they were mine " he said " In your dreams smartie" Uday said arrogantly but yet friendly. Uday's eyes fell on that silver sword. With fake gold around its handle (dont know whts tht called isiliye handle) He immideately went into flashback and stopped at his childhood when Manyata accidently got hurt because of his sword. " Uday" Dharamveer snapped him out of his memories. " Can I get 2 of those please" he asked one of the sales girl who was standing next to Dharamveer. " Uday I don't think Sonia will like this " " Dharamveer she's my daughter she will love it " he said " But the other ones for? " Dharamveer asked " For your son " Uday explained. " Anyways come have dinner with us solank bhi ghar pe hai soo come along" " Perfect" Dharamveer said. The two friends ran inside Uday's car. But Uday noticed a WagonR was following his Audi from a long time. " Kya hua ?" Dharamveer asked him " kuch nahi" *********Manyata was already there with the kids in the playroom. Dharamveer and Udayveer entered and both the kids jumped into their father's arms. " Hiii daddy and Hello Dhamu Uncle" Sonia wished them. " When will you stop calling me Dhamu uncle beta?" Dharamveer asked " She will never stop that Daddy" Solank said. " Ohho stop this now.. Baccha's we've brought a gift for you'll " Uday announced " Sachii " Manyata said excitedly " Manyata it's for the kids not for you " Dharamveer teased. Dharamveer and Manyata were good friends too. " I know that " Manyata said. They two kids jumped here and there because they were too happy for the gift that they got. " Yipee Yipee" Both of them shouted. the whole family along with Dharamveer and Solank were there on the dinning table. All were eating quitely and Solank hated silence. " Hayee Sonia tumhe pata hai kal maine apne ghar mein tumhari Dollly ko chal te hue dekha tha" . The table burst into laughter because of Solank's innocence. Only one thing was different between Sonia and Solank. Sonia was tikhi mirchi just like Manyata and Solank was very innocent. *******Later on the trio. Udayveer, Dharamveer and Manyata were enjoying coffee in the garden. Uday said " You know Dharamveer humein Solank aur Sonia mein chote Manyata aur Uday dikhte hai " " I know Uday iss badbadi ne mujhe sab bataya hai " Dharamveer always tried to tease Manyata and Manyata always used to get angry " Dharamveer teri toh... " Manyata said. " Accha shant tum dono firse mat lado... I'm being serious here" Uday said. The three friends enjoyed the rest of the evening. *******It was night time Dharamveer had gone along with Solank. And everyone was off to sleep. Manyata came out of the shower and Uday was already there sitting on the couch and reading his favourite book. " Uday mujhe na ek baat bolni hai tumse" Manyata said. " Mujhe na ek Idea aya hai.." she gave the naughty smirk. And Uday said " Kya idea aya hai?" Uday asked. " Uday aaj tum bol rahe the na ki Solank aur Sonia chote Uday aur Manyata hai... " Haan bola tha kyu?" " Chalo unka bhi Roka kara dete hai..." She said excitedly...To be continued...next part will be up soon...Tanvi:)

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

so dis was d idea...buh y do i feel ur gonna make sum1 kidnap sonia...plz temme dats nt ur idea...but i loved manveer scenes...gr8 update👏

ps thanx for pm

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

L0vd b0th chptrx swty i h0pe uday d0esnt getx kidnapd

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Anny

@SyedAinah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Tanvi awesum update...i think sonia kidnap hone wali hai, but plz ussai manyata ki tarah 16 yrs tak kidnap mat karna,otherwise ye phire wahi story repeat hogi,bas kuch dino k liye hi kidnap karna...finally kidnapng,i think i had talkd abt kidnapng earlier...aur plz manveer romance,dnt make dem old...thanx for giving such a fantastic update

Edited by annysyed - 13 years ago