manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank god pari k tum wapis aa gai ...!!! hats off to you no words for this awesome update pari .. i loved that scene when uday was hiting akash and loved manveer scene and jb uday ko pata chalta hai k woh papa banne wala hai aur manyata ko kehta hai thank you ...!!! thanks pari for my daily dose of ur updates 😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, finally Uday knows about Manyatas pregnancy, so happy for both of them, and this Akash😡, abhi bhi puri nagar se dekh raha hai Manyata ko🤢. Continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Pari: Will start reading this FF regularly soon... have heard a lot about this FF but haven't given it a try it because you were already so far ahead in terms of updates and I have exams pretty soon but will read it defo after getting free...

P.S: Don't stop writing...sometimes it takes time to get a grasp and to evoke a response from people. Please give my post a read on the first page of this topic. Thank you!!😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3166783/disappointment-disappointment-n-disappointment

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb dear..jaldi se is akash ki akal tikane lagao...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-64

Akash'mere 7th bhai ne aisa kiya,dad puri party me sbke samne unhone mujhe maara.
Komal'pr uday ne aisa kyn kiya?
Jay'wo pagal ho gya h.
Manyata k 7th dance kya kr liya akash ne isliye.
Unanti'kya bhabhi bi thi,wow
Akash'shutup unanti,
Us ldki ki wjh se hi sb hua h.
Ds'uday ne aaj tk akash pe hath ni uthaya or manyata ki wjh se
Vijay'dadi,aap manyata bhai ko kyn dosh de ri h,ye bi to ho skta ki inki hi koi glti h.
Jay'shutup vijay bhai,dance krna gunaah h.
Unanti'dance krna gunaah ni,bhai k hote hue manyata k 7th koi or rhe wo glt h..
Akash'or pta ni aaj to tara ne ek or bat btai..
Meneka'kya?
Jay'aunty uday ka jaldi se manyata se divorce kraiye,wrna wo ldki alg-2 plan kr ri h is ghr me aane k.
Ds'kya bat h?
Akash'tara ne btaya manyata prganant h...
Meneka'wht?
Jay'ha,ye ab pta ni jhuth h ya glt..
Menka'or agar h bi to kiska.?
Unanti'enogh.
Had hoti h ek limit hoti h gandi soch ki bi...
Aap logo ne to had par krdi h..
Ds emotional'manyata prgnant h,wo akeli h,is halat me use wo akeli..
Unanti'ni dadi,aap kyn chinta kr ri h,wo sambhal legi apne aap ko.
Br'unanti,jao yha se,tum bat krna bhul gai ho.
Komal'uday to phr use le aayega is ghr me...
Br'ni komal,aisa ni hoga.
Ds make a emotional face..

Akash gusse me'main use choduga ni..

Uday'akash tum use chodoge ni, or main use kuch hone ni dunga...

All look uday.
Unanti'bhai cngrats..
She hugged hm
Vijay'mujhe bi hug kro uday,cngrats,tum papa bnne wale ho..

Komal'uday beta wo main..
Uday'ni maa aap Chinta mt kro,aap ka beta bi aapke pas rhega,aapki bhu bi is ghr me dubaara ni ayegi.
Unanti'bhai bhabhi akeli keise.?
Uday looked komal'
Aapki kasam mujhe bi or manyata dono ko yad h,aap chinta mt kro.
Jay guse me'kitna aacha kam krke aaye ho na,uski wjh se akash ko pit diya,use mil bi liye,baatein bi krli or khte ho maa aap chinta mt kro.
Uday'akash ko pta h wo kyn pita h,uski jagh koi bi hota to yhi krta main.
Manyata mere saamne udas ho,ho ni skta..

Uday bolke jane lgta h,tbi komal bolti h
'uday,manyata ko wapas leaao.
Uday stop..
Ds,unanti,vijay happy..
Nd other angry after listning komal 's words.

Uday bckturn hota h
'kyn?
kisliye?
Ds'uday.
Uday'ni such me kyn leke aau main yha use,dad,bua,jay,akash ye sb uski insult kre.
Ab to mujhe aap pe or dadi pe bi bharosa ni h.
Pta ni jb uski situation 9mnth ki ho tb aap mujhe kasam dedegi ki ni uday tum abi manyata ko ghr se bahar nikalo,phr kha jayegi wo.

Komal cryng.
Uday'ni maa
Aapko mujhpe bharosa ni tha,or ab mujhe aap pe trust ni h..
Manyata ab jha bi h chain se h,lekin yha iske dushmano ki kami ni h.
Ds'uday komal ko apne bete ka khone ka dar ho gya tha.
Uday'ni dadi jo bi ho manyata is ghr me wapis ni ayegi,main leke ni aauga..
Komal'main apni kasam todti hu beta,plz use jrurt h hmari.
Uday akash ko dekhte hue'ni maa,wo agar yha rhegi to uski jan ko khtra h.
Wo bol ke chala jata h...

Menaka'bhabhi aap ye..
Komal'bs kro,aaj ehsaas ho rha h us bachi k 7th kya kiya h maine.
Mujh se is baare me koi bat ni krega.

Sb guse me chale jate h..

Manyata Apne stomach pe hath rkhke'pta h chotu uday,main aaj aapke papa se mili.
Pr unhe bta ni paai ki wo papa bnne wale h...

Uday apne rum me
'thanku manyata,aaj jb tara ne btaya ki main papa bnne wala hu,i feel ki shayed main duniya us tym ka sbse khush insan tha...

Manyata'chotu uday,papa k jeise hona ekdum,bs gusa alg chod k aana...
Ha ni to.

Uday'manyata,tum such me ek angle ho main jb bi jyada dukh me hota hu,tum hmesha mujhe khush krdeti ho.

Manyata'chotu i want ki aapke papa mera stomach tumhein touch kre...

Uday'i realy want touchng ur stomach..
He s vry emotional happy..

Manyata also vry happy..

Ds cum uday rum
'uday
Uday'dadi aap.
Ds'ek bat khni thi.
Uday apni files check kr rha h'boliye.
Ds'manyata ko ghr le aate h.
Uday closed d file'ni dadi,main ni lana chahta use...
Ds uday k saamne hath jod leti h'plz beta mujhe maaf krde.
Uday'of oh dadi,aap ye kya kr ri h,maa ne aapne jo kiya main wo smjhta hu,lekin main agar use yha launga,yha use khtra h.
Ds'kaun sa khtra?uske 7th main hmesha rhugi..
Uday'dadi,jaldi hi sbko us khtre k baare me pta lgega.
Lekin main use.
Ds'plz uday beta,main uske pairo me bi gir jaungi.
Uday'dadi aap.
Ok,main phle use bat kruga..
Ds'pkka.
Uday smile'pkka..

Akash bahar se sb sun rha hota h.
'manyata tum apne din ginna shuru krdo...


SUN rises and shines beautifuly. Last nite ws beautiful nd horible 4 both.bt it ws a new day,gives new hope 2wrds lyf.

Uday clang tara'helo,tara mujhe btao manyata kha rh ri h?
Tara'bhai,bhabhi se wada kiya h na btane ka sry..
Uday'
Mujhe usse bat krni h.plz.
Tara'bhai plz zid mt krna,bhabhi naraj ho jayegi...
Unanti ek paper pe wo addres likh k uday k samne lati h.
Uday looked hr'ah,ok tara main dhund lunga...
Bye.
Cal cut.
Uday'ye kya h unanti?
Unanti'bhai,addres h jha bhabhi rhti h..
Uday'tujhe keise pta?
Unanti'main bi bhabhi ka promise tod ri hu,qki bhabhi ko sbke 7th is ghr me dekhna chahti hu.
Uday smiled'thank u.
Nd don't wory manyata bura ni manegi..
Unanti'bhai malum h,aap jaldi se bhabhi ko leaaiye..
Uday'risky h..
Mere lye bi manyata k lye bi,bt i wil try..

Jagat met maya
'maya tumhein mujhse milna tha,q?

Maya'jagat mr.choudhry ne ek paper pe sign krwaye h jhuthi gwahi dene k lye.

Jagat'wht?
Maya'meri beti ko bchalo,jb tk main gwhahi ni deti tb tk wo meri beti ko ni chodege.
Jagat'its redeculious,mr.choudhary i wil kil u.
'u don't wory maya main akansha ko bcha lunga,abi case ka tym dur h..
Maya'hope so..

Uday feel vry happy ki wo manyata k ghr k door k aage khada h wid roses buke..
Uday ring d doorbell
Manyata open d door.
Uday smile
Manyata surprized

Both in lovely eyecntct...

Uday looked hr cntinuosly,nd sitng s hm knees nd say buke dete huye'thanku,
U cum my life.
Thanku,
U make my lfe
Thanku,
Main sad hota hu,or tum mujhe khushi deti ho.
Nd
Thanku
Life's big happines,mujhe bi ab koi papa khega...

Manyata cryng'tum mujhse naraj ni ho?
Uday'ni,kbi ni ho skta..
Manyata pick up roses flowers bucke..
She s Emotinaly smile nd uday ka hath apne stomach pe rkhti h'chotu uday apne papa ko miss kr rha tha..

Uday
Happily cryng nd touched hr stomach'tumhein keise pta chotu uday h,choti manyata bi to ho skti h...
Manyata'ni ye chotu uday hi h.
Uday kissed hr stomach,nd wo stomach se hi huged krta h he say'i m sry manyata...
Manyata nicely picked hm head'ni uday,tum sry kho kbi aisi koi glti ni krte tum..

Uday'ni tumhein dukh na dene ka wada kiya tha or.?
Manyata'or kya?
Or jo ye chotu uday ki khushi di h wo.
Saare dukh alg ye khushi alg..
Ha ni to
Uday'jo bi ho chotu ya choti hoga to hmara hi..
Love u.

Uday ghr me aata h
Nd wo surprized hota h.
'manyata ye kya h?

Manyata'kya h?
Pure ghr me tumhara hmari yaadein h..

Manyata ne apne pure ghr ko uday ki images lgi h.
Uday'pr ye kyn?
Manyata'qki jha tum h wha meri liye srf khushiya h..
Uday'or jha tum ho whi jeene ka mja h mere lye..
Manyata huged hm.
Thank u uday tum aagye,lekin maa naraj ho jayegi.

Uday'main tumhein ghr lejane aaya hu.
Manyata'uday..
Wha wo aka..?
Uday'nam lene ki jrurt ni h,i 9 bhoot mushkil h wha rhna,lekin dadi ne kha mujhe lechal main uske pair pdke use le aaungi...
Or manyata tumhari mrzi,zbrdasti ni kruga...
Mera jo mksad use pura krke rhuga..

Precap-uday manyata romance.

Pari

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Pari.👏 👏 👏
I loved UV-M Scene.😛
Fanatastic, superb.👍🏼
Thanks for the regular updates n PM .😊
LOVE YOU.🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww Uday and Manyata are so cute 😛, and I'm so happy ki Jagat knows about Mr chaudry and Maya, now he can save Akansha also and Maya can speak the truth also.Gosh Please keep manyata safe from this akash😡, I want that Akash and Brijraj also as he supported his son to rot in jail.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the PM dear..

Awsome update dear..

Thankgod ki Komal ne woh kasam wapas le li..

N ur Precap has made me
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome da...its so beautifully written...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update pari. I can't wait for manveer romance and baby. But tell me one thing chotu uday hoga ya choti manayta?

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