manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice yaar.M in jail.she is prison ha ha ha.yeppi my dream comes true.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice and different concept!! Looking forward to it!! Plzzz pm me when u update!!:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue Continue
Jaldi Jaldi :D
Very Interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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uv as a lawyeer interesting...do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manveer SS...
WITHOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE
Part-I

"WE LOVE OUR SOUL,OUR SOUL IS ALSO OUR HEART..."
..
Pyar ko ek word me ya ek sntnce me define krna difficult h..
Pyar krne walo k liye
Pyar krna easy hota to bat hi kuch or hoti...
Shayed,log such khte h..love is blind..
Love kisi din ka,tym dekh.Rich-poor,gnda-bura kuch ni dekhta.

Love s a grt feeling in ur heart.


Mr.singh jo duniya k bhut bde businesman h..
Lekin unhone kbi apne bacho pe apna busines ko sambhlne k liye ni kha...
Mr.brijrajsingh's elder son mr.udaysingh.
Jo busines me bilkul intersted ni the,unhe lawyer bnna tha,or wo ek famous lawyer h...

Komal:uday beta tum apni life k bhoot cases jeet chuke ho,or aaj phr ek case k liye ldne ja rhe ho..bhagwan tumhein hmesha kamyabi de...

Jay cuming uday home..
J:sure aunty,uday kbi ni harega..wo hmesha jeetega..
Tbi to mera haara dil is winingman pe aa gya...
Meneka:jay,aao beta,jis din tum is ghr ki bahu bnogi,us din mujhse jyada khush koi ni hoga..
J:sb khush h mere aane se,lekin uday ki chahre pe mujhe wo shining ni dikhti..
Uday:aacha,tumhein aisa lgta h,mujhe bi..
Phr bi hm fiance h...strang na...
J:o,vry funny...
U:mom,main chlta hu..
J:tum mujhe mere ofice chod skte ho..
Br:jay beta,isme puchne ki kya bat h,ye to haq h tumhara..
U:hmmm..chalo..
J:bye everybudy...

Jay nd uday jate h..
J:uday mujhe aisa kyn lgta h,ki tum mere 7th khush ni ho..
U:jay,tumhein hmesha aisa kyn lgta h.?
J:u 9 wht,tumhara kam hi aisa h..,itne dngrous case solve krte -2 tumhara dil pather bn gya h...
U:jeisa tumhein lge..tumhara ofice aa gya..
J:she kis on uday chick..bye uday..bst of luck..
U:yar,ye parents bi na jo abi ni krna(enganment) tha,wo phle kra diya h..wel,she s my responsibility...

Uday coat phuchta h..
U:hello mr.chaudhry,how r u??
M.C:i m fyn mr.singh.so again 2day u win i m dam sure..becoz saare prooves tumhare pas h..to tum hi jeetoge..
U:wo to mujhe pta h,aaj tk kisi case k liye dra ni hu..becoz pta hota h,ye jeet meri h..or jo such h wo such..kisi begunha ko sja ni ho skti main jiska lawyer hu to...
M.C:ya i know..mujhe bi tumse ek case k silsile me bat krni h,i hope tum interstead hoge..tym mile tb bat krege.
U:ya sure..mr.choudhry.tc...

Br:komal,hmein akash ki bhoot yad aa ri h...hme usse bat krni h..lekin wo to...
Ds:brij,bharosa rkhiye sb thik hoga..
Apke chilane se sb kuch thik ni hoga...

Menka:hmein to us insan se nafrat h jisne aisa kiya hmare akash k 7th.

Komal:ab to jb wo ayega,tbi sb pta chlega...us insan se mujhe bi nafrat h jisne...chiii

Ds:aap sb chup hojaiye,jisne akash ka aisa hal kiya h,use uski sja mil gai h...
Jruri h us din ko yad krna...

Sb chup ho jate h...
Unanti:gud mrng dadi..gud mrng everyone...main collage ja ri hu,dad aap mujhe chod donge...
Br:ofcourse..chalo..

Uday once again wining d case...

Lady:thanku bete,aapki wjh se hmara beta jail se bahar h..
U:meri wajh se ni,usne kuch kiya hi ni tha,to wo ander bi keise rhta...
L:god bless u beta..u r all wish come true...
Uday smile krta h...
Again mr.choudhry milte h...
Mr.c:so,u r win..pta tha mujhe,maine phle hi kha tha..
Uday smile:apne kha tha,or mujhe pta tha...

Inspector jagat wha se jate h..
Mr.c:oh,hello mr.jagat..itne din bad..wel,ye h famous lawyer
J:mr.udaysingh,inko kaun ni janta...
U:hello..
Mr.c:kya krne aye ho idhr.?kuch jruri kam.
J:ah sir,wo ek prisnor ki peshi h,to mujhe to hona jruri tha..
Mr.c:aacha..jagat us ldki ka kya hua?jisne..
J:mujhe pta tha,aap jrur puchege us case k baare me,bt aaj bi us case ko koi lawyer ni mila..
U:lawyer ni mila kyn?
J:bhoot criticl case h sir..use solve krna sb lawyers ki bat ni h..
Mr.c:ye bilkul shi kh rhe h,main khud wo case har chuka hu...lekin wo ldki ne jo kiya kya wo such me glt kiya...uski jgh koi hota to whi krta...
U:agar law me emotions aajaye to kisi ko jail hi na ho...

Mr.c:ah..uday emotion jb ane hote h,tb aa hi jate h...

J:okay,main chlta hu,meri nai-2 job h is city me to 1st impresion aacha hona chahiye..
U:ok,bro..gud luck..tc..

Jagat chla jata h.
Mr.c:mrng me isi case k bare me bat krne k liye kha tha..lekin aapka interst ni h..
Mr.uday main us ldki ko justice dilana chahta hu...lekin ab tk to wo...chaliye chodiye,aap na shi koi or hi shi..gud luck.tc..

U:tc..
Uday thinkg type face bnata h...

Jail scen...
3ladies locked on one jail..
Ek ldki dari shmi,ek cone me headdown kiye huye bethi h...
Or ladies baatein kr ri h..
1stlady:arey itni bar pucha aisa kyn kiya kuch bolti hi ni..
2nd lady:koi fayeda bi to ni h,iske 7th bhoot bura hua h,or aaj bi ho rha h...
Iska case to ab koi lete hi ni..
1st:abi to iski puri
Jwani baaki h...
2nd:aacha hi kiya,mujhe bi aisa krna chahiye tha,jo is ldki ne kiya...
Lekin sja kis bat ki h iski..apne aap ko bchane ki ya...stop..
Ye jb inspector jagat jb se aye h tb se is jail ka sudhar hua h,wrna phle to bhyanak tha sb kuch..
1st:ha,fasi chadne se phle hi mar jate the..
Both lday laughng...

Jo cone me ldki beithi h wo headdown krke roye ja ri h...

Precap:uday nd mr.chowdhry meeting...

Continue..
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nicoo haye titally in love with it and damn ur FF names are too good yaar kaise soochti ho aise naam mujhe bi class de dena but comin to the FF its how wow loved it do continue soon and did i told you that ur another FF love feeling : give new birth is a total bang on do continue that soon and do pm me when u update both okk

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
lipika thanku darlng.

I think u r also writer in the vampire diarie...

Main dar ri thi ki,is stry k cmnts
ko leke..becoz isme manyata ko prisoner dikhaya h..means lawyer prisoner love stry h to...
Kisi ko gusa na aajaye isliye.

Bt thanx 2 u...i m realy glad u lyk my stry...
Nd clas lol...
U r also brilient..darlng...

I love al types lovestry,or jisme uday ho wo to..awosum h.

Nd yes lipika main pm snd krdungi..don't wory.
Love u

pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏nice concept 👏
it had alot to reveal awaiting for an update cont soon⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice and well written...loved the story concept...but can't wait for next part...please update soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh i m so sry sweetheart for the late reply.wo actually aj main 12 baje uthi thi aur ab forum main ayi hoo.anyways nice one yaar.bohout sare suspence hai isme.aur tu darr rahi hai.C'mon yaar tera ss sachme acha hai.M ko toh sab tarapte huye hi dekhna chahte hai.specially main.aur mere liye toh prison seh behtar aur kuch idia dikhayi nahi diya.so daar mat aur likhte ja.aur mere 2nd fruit ke bare main bhi mat bhulna samjhi.acha chal egarly waiting for the next part.cont soon yaar.

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