Right to love Manveer SS Note pg 43

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DEK_girl

@DEK_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

hey it was so touching...felt so bad for manyata😔...and DS is so cruel...nd j nd especially vijay r awesomeee...seems like uday is going to fight fight fight for his right to love...and please pm me if u can..

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Hi cham, I have been reading all the updates but was not finding time to comment., I know that is a very lame excuse😕, especially when I keep re-reading this ff.😃 ur checkmate was a masterpiece and this is also one of its kind👏. I loved it, I love that fact that you are very meticulous in your writing approach.With every chapter, you have something in your mind to tell the readers, you just let them know that and rest you keep them guessing and dreaming😍. Though I might now comment that regularly, but I still love it, so continue soon dear.

And about checkmate, I have saved that link, so that I can keep re-reading it 👍🏼, one question there, you never clearly mentioned what happended between aditya and manyata, Akash left the party, leaving manyata alone with aditya, but did he molest or rape her is not clear.In one chapter you mention how she feels him touching her in darkness, but clear my doubt dear!! or have I missed something them let me now!

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

This story is amazing!!! It's quickly becoming one of my favorites!! Hope you update soon!

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Oh Cham this update was fabulous though there wre no manveer scenes still it was fabulous update...pls don't make DS so cruel ...&let manveer finally meet.. TY 4 d pm& update soon 😃

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Wow awesome Cham.loved it.oh poor M.i feel realy bad for her.

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Awesome update!! I feel so bad for Manyata:( Anyways, plzzz do continue soon:)

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IshaAkbar

@IshaAkbar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Oh wow amazing update thank for the pm and I hope udhay is not mad at manyata for not replying

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

yay finally u update... i felt so sorry for manyata vijay bhai made me laugh... really cant wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Absolutely wonderful update cham. I just adored checkmate and now I love this too.. Really loved the update. Pls never ever say that it is boring update or sorry for wasting time. Each and every update of yours is most awaited and very interesting to read. I anxiously wait for your updates.

Love it cham! Superb!!