ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Gowri05

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Part - 1

Finally the big day had arrived'whole of the Rajmahal was beautifully decorated with flowers, lights, candles, lanterns with the beautiful shamiana on the top etc'. Each and every person in the rajmahal was happy for this day, except for one person and that was none other than our very own stubborn princess Manyata'..

She was not at all happy, infact she was very sad, depressed and was feeling restless'.nt knowing the reason why she was feeling that way whn everything tht had been done was being done according to her's own decision'..then why the hell she was not happy???? Her brain and heart were continuously fighting with one other resulting in making her totally confused and astound'

The clock had stuck 9:00 of the evening'.weather had turned extremely pleasant by then'as rain was pouring very softly'.and then she was called downstairs as the shubh muhurat had finally arrived'.

manyata who at tht time was sitting in front of her large dressing table in her room was continuously looking at herself in the mirror with moist eyes... she was looking ultra gorgeous and beautiful wearing red and maroon lahenga' Her light and subtle makeup, her beautiful danglers, maangtika, necklace and Bengals were was also enhacing her beauty'her hair were left open'.it appeared as if some angel has arrived from heaven to earth'she was looking amazingly beautiful'. some girls including unnati and jaynandini came to her room to take her downstairs'.while she was coming down everyone was left with their eyes and mouth wide opened seeing the classic beauty..

It was her engagement today'.she came and stood there where everyone else was standing ..she had put up a fake smile on her face in order to show tht she is extremely very happy but her eyes were depicting something else'there was not even small a chunk of happiness in them'.her eyes had almost driedup because of her continuous weeping 'but still she was smiling for sake of others'

She came and stood by the side of him and gave him a smile'.he also returned her smile with a smile and by winking at her'

Someone from the guests tht were present there said ''''oh my gosh..they look so beautiful with each other'he is so good looking and she is so beautiful'..jodi ho toh aisi ho varna na ho'.. "

She was standing there with everyone and everyone was smiling, laughing and blabbering with one another but still her mind, her heart, her gaze were placed only at one thing and that is - the entrance gates.

She was continuously looking at the entrance door with a hope tht ' "He would return back to her'.yes he would come' thts y on her engagement day also, she was wearing His fav colour dress, that is red'and was dressed up in the way he liked her that is her hair left open not in a bunch'..."

but no one showed up'.she was still looking in tht direction totally lost whn she noticed tht someone was calling her.

Panditji - the shubh ghadi has finally arrived and now we should not delay it further'.so each and everyone plz gather around this couple and shower your blessing on thm'

With this panditji started chanting mantras and then He placed the ring on her ring finger'.she closed her eyes while he was putting the ring on her ring finger'.

Rajmata ' manyata ..nw its ur turn' put the ring on his finger'

Rajmata's words just shook her from within and then she immediately looked once again at the entrance door but again all her hopes dreams and thoughts dashed into ground once again as no one was there'.

she was still lookin at the door with her moist eyes whn unnati and komal in order to tease her asked ' y she is taking so long'.and making him wait this much'.thn ultimately she slid the ring on his ring finge and a drop of tear slowely rolled down frm her eyes but she quickly wipes it off''

Everyone was very happy and the guests had welcomed the ring ceremony with a big round of applause'.

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It was indeed a beautiful early morning'the sun has rosen and was shining bright and light..but still a tinge of coldness was there'due to yesterday's night heavy rainfall'.manyata was sleeping peacefully but her sleep got disturbed whn the beautiful sound of chirping of bird kuuckoo (koel) fell on her ears'.she got up smilingly and yawningly very cutely like a child'.

While yawning only, her gaze then fell on the left direction of hers'and then automatically a big flash of smile came across her face as soon as she looked towards her left'.

she took her hand out and then very lovingly starts caressing and patting his hair...she all of a sudden started smiling unknowingly and then placed a kiss on his forehead and said ' "it does bother me'..it bothers me a lot"

With this, she moves her face away from him, and then she ties and clutches her open hair into a bunch'.while she was doing tht she noticed tht he who was lying on her left side had started to awake slowly as he was getting disturbed with the sunrays that were directly falling onto him'.as he was getting disturbed with the sunrays so he was turning his face very cutely and childishly sometimes left, sometimes right'.. she kept looking at him in awe and was smiling coz of his this cute childish behavior'.atlast she take her hand out and then covers his face in such a way tht sunrays don't fall on his face again'.due to her such loving gesture towards him, he went to sleep once again as nw her hand was givind her the much needed shade to him from those sunrays'.

She for sometime kept looking at him lovingly while he was sleeping their childishly, whn all of a sudden a major blow completely jolted her from top to bottom whn she looked at her left hand'..

she felt a major shock whn her gaze fell on her engagement ring'.she was sitting as if she got numb and kept looking at her engagement ring shockingly'..whn tears once again started rolling down from her eyes'..she completely altogether got out of her earlier loving moment whn she look at her surrounding'her eyes fell on her clothes that were lying somewhere on the floor...alongwith his clothes'..she was instantly taken a back whn she realized tht both of them were draped under one blanket''

as soon as this harsh reality hit her, she started sobbing and crying like hell'..she looked at her ring and thn at her clothes and started weeping hardly remembering "What the hell she has done"?

she immediately dresses up within minutes, take the car keys'.and zooms her car from that place rashly'.she was driving her car at a jet speed and remembering what she has done and side by side crying hardly thinking what she has done''.so does it mean tht she still loves him, that's y it all happened between them''she was still in "DILLEMA""'not getting wht she should do and what she shouldn't do''..""""""

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that's it guys''this is the first part'I know it's a small part but next part is going to be a bigger one'

plz do tell me, how is it ????? u liked it or not????? whether I should continue writing further or not''

plz do tell me'and plz don't hesitate to give ur views ''

I have written the next part as well and I will post tht too very soon'

i am sure you all will love the second part a lot''.trust me 😉

but for nw plz do tell about this one'

Your suggestions, comments, criticism is always welcome''.😛

yaar with whom she got engaged and with whom she was

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

yaar with whom she got engaged and with whom she was

plz disclose it

i cant digest this much suspense

u has written it fabulously but plz tell us who r they both

Your OS is just Amazing!!😃 just hope the person whom M spent her night with turns out to be UV⭐️please continue to the next part soon...i love reading stories about ManVeer...if possible PM me😊

Nice one.hope that the person whom with M spent her night is Uv not that majnu.nyways cont soon n pm me if u can.

Hey! I jus read ur first chapter of ur ss n I found it jus so superb yaar...pls don't create much suspense n reveale man to whom Manyata got engaged ...pls pm me if u can & update as soon as u can 😛

Originally posted by: imkool

...you will get to know very soon in the next update...it will either surprise u or will shock you...newys

thnxxxtht u read it...hope u enjoyed reading it...

.BTW. i really like your ff alot...😛

interesting chapter... plz cont soon cant wait longer😍