ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153 - Page 122

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

wooow just tooo much minblowing and romantic update...all the scenes were nicely written...👏 keep it up...and update the next part soon...



hey thnxxx sweetie...😳
i m glad u liked the update nd found it romantic nd worth reading😳
will update next parts soon dear😳
Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Pls Update the mehendi ceremony
eagerly waiting waiting
i have edited my comment as promised


dont worry will update soon yaar,,,,,
Edited by coolsaloni.nira - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

res😉😆😛


hi nira i am commenting for each chapter one by one so reply back after the whole comment is done😃
lets start😆
the update was awsome
manveer ahem ahem was so☺️
one query when manyata was standing at the window at 5 am in the morning she was naked right?😉
loved how u decribed the emotion
the feeling
i loved the foreplay
i could literally imagine it
i read this update at 5 am in the morning ironic right?😛😉😆
i was in the garden on the swing so i could see at setting completely😳
i loved it how the elders are also having fun in the wedding and teasing manveer
manveer kiss romance and everything else was super perfect👏

please update soon

chapter 2 comment res😆😉😛


hey saira...🤗
its ok dear...i have reserve this post for ur reply...
will reply here on this post fr each nd every comment of urs...😳

WELL thanxx alot saira,,,i m glad u liked the chapter 1.🤗 nd found manveer ahem ahem ☺️,,,,if u are saying this,,,thn i m sure it must have been hot yaar...😉
ok, now answer to ur query
whn she was standing by the window side she wasnt in her clthes thts why she had draped blanket around her nd whn uday came to her thn tht time they they just talked , dint do anything like u mentuoned (foreplay) ,,they both fell asleep in each other embrace, sitting on the windows parapet...

quite ironic...yaar tht u read the chap 1t 5 in the morning
,,,but wait a minute...u get up so early yaar ...mai toh apne exams ke liye bhi kabhi na uthu this early😆
abhi toh bahut sari teasings hona baki hai dear...just wait nd watch...
will post all the parts in one go...by saturday...ok dear
thnxxx once again fr ur amazing comment...enjoyed reading it😃

RESERVE FOR REPLYING FURTHER...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira


hey saira...🤗
its ok dear...i have reserve this post for ur reply...
will reply here on this post fr each nd every comment of urs...😳

WELL thanxx alot saira,,,i m glad u liked the chapter 1.🤗 nd found manveer ahem ahem ☺️,,,,if u are saying this,,,thn i m sure it must have been hot yaar...😉
ok, now answer to ur query
whn she was standing by the window side she wasnt in her clthes thts why she had draped blanket around her nd whn uday came to her thn tht time they they just talked , dint do anything like u mentuoned (foreplay) ,,they both fell asleep in each other embrace, sitting on the windows parapet...

quite ironic...yaar tht u read the chap 1t 5 in the morning
,,,but wait a minute...u get up so early yaar ...mai toh apne exams ke liye bhi kabhi na uthu this early😆
abhi toh bahut sari teasings hona baki hai dear...just wait nd watch...
will post all the parts in one go...by saturday...ok dear
thnxxx once again fr ur amazing comment...enjoyed reading it😃

RESERVE FOR REPLYING FURTHER...😉


yes i woke up at 4 am
then at 5 i thought of taking a 2 minute break
then saw your update and started reading until 6 because i was reading super slowly thinking
about the whole thing then at 6 when sameer came he saw me smiling like a fool
i was so embarrassed he thought i was some super duper hot thing
so that is why i must say that your was HOT
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nira baby that was super romentic and hottt...hayeee...kya part thaaa...hum toh bilkul flate ho gayeee mardala hume bhi thoda romance sikhado plzzz...apni student banalo ...romentic update kaise likhate hai ye toh koi tumse sikhe plzzz...ab jaldi update karo nahi raha jata ab...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Nira baby that was super romentic and hottt...hayeee...kya part thaaa...hum toh bilkul flate ho gayeee mardala hume bhi thoda romance sikhado plzzz...apni student banalo ...romentic update kaise likhate hai ye toh koi tumse sikhe plzzz...ab jaldi update karo nahi raha jata ab...


hey thnxxx shweta...
i m glad u liked the first sub part...
nd thanku very much itna achcha chcha bolne ke liye...
ok hum apko apni student bna lenge,,,lekin fir baaad mei aap bhag mat jana😆

will update all the parts tomorrow dear
i hope you will like
nd yeah will be waiting fr ur comment after tht...ok😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow I am super duper late.

Alright so reserved for the last set of chapters!

Omg I can't believe this SS is ending 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
where is the update
u said u will update yesterday
this is not fair 😭😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear apka tommorow kb ayega?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

where is the update

u said u will update yesterday
this is not fair 😭😡



Originally posted by: =Fantasyangel

dear apka tommorow kb ayega?


sorru dears
... actually my laziness is coming my way ,,,just because of this i still have not finished writing the ending part...
so this is what is taking time...
once i finish writing it...i will update soon...ok yaaron🤗

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