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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ilvuday

snow i loved ur upd8 buh y d cliffhanger yaar.i h8 clifff hangers.buh gr8 upd8👏


cliffhanger...da i couldn't write more thats the reason y i stopped there...sorry 4 that
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Posted: 12 years ago
H8 DIS ABHI !! WAITING 4 DA NXT CHAPTER
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sarah_kelly

superb update!!!

cont soon"!!!

Thanks da😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
yup i 'll
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
2mrw evening perhaps...mrng i need to update FF..soon after i'll try with SS
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Posted: 12 years ago
i'll try to update 2day evng da😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
iam working on that da..probably by 10.15
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 36


Uday 's face all of a sudden got dim.

thn all of a sudden Uday pushed back Manyata to bed..

Manyata was really afraid thn seeing Uday's angry face..

He leaned in..Manyata tried to speak'

M: Uday'hum wo'

Uday:sshhh''..

Uday came closer and bit her lips'His bit was enough hard to hurt Manyata..Blood was coming from her lips..

Uday: Manyata kabhi bhi aise baathein mat karna'I would never ever hear such words from ur mouth.

Thn seeing Manyata's painful face and blood Uday realized his anger and hugged her sucking the blood of her lips'

Uday with filled eyes of concern:iam so sry princess for hurting u I didn't mean to pls'..

Manyata almost crying: its k Uday'Shayad humne bhi kuch zyada bol diya..Uday hume hamesha apne paas rakhna ..

Uday(smiling): woh aapko kehne ki saroorat nahi hain'aapko to har pal hum apne paas rakhenge Princess manyata kumari..

Manyata: ab humme chodiye aap humme fresh hona hain..

Both stood up

Uday: haan chalo hum chalte hain.

Manyata: chee besharam'

Uday: aapne hi to kaha ki aapko hamesha paas rakhta aur ab humme besharam bula rahi hoon not fair princess..

Manyata: awww humari prince charming'hum ek na ek din aaphike banegi toh zara intzaar kijiye na..

Uday: haayyy intzaar karoge toh kya milega'

Manyata: jo aap kahe..

Uday:mmm nice move princess dnt worry I will take all that I want from u'

With a smirk Uday left the room and Mnayata with a naughty smile went to fresh up'

After having wash she went to temple'

Once she left Uday's friends came home with Ranveer and Meghna..

All sat down to talk..

Meghna: Uday whr's Manya'

Uday: She went to temple Meghna.

Ranveer: thn y r u here?

Uday: ahh Vijaybhanna and Unnati did joined her..Its long that they spend time together so I thought to stay home..U knw their relation.

Meghna: yup its lot fun whn all three are togetherVijay bhai will b having a tough time..Manyata and Unnati will never leave a chance to irritate Vijaybhai and poor vijaybhai he will b blocked between sister n fianc..

Ranveer: ahh hopefully Uday will facethe same..

Uday: aha dnt worry its decided that me n Vijay bhai will tie knot on the same day.

Rahul: Uday r u afraid of Manyata.

Uday: a bit..

all laughed

Krish: Uday I think she is still upset with us..Pls humari dosti karvadona..

Uday: ahhh I think Meghna would b the best helper in that case..

Meghna: ya i'll try..

Juli:thanks Meghna.

Ranveer: well tara kahan hain..

Juli:she went to meet her cousin..

All were chilling out that J came down crying'

J: (crying) came n hugged Uday.

Jagat followed her and stood beside J.Uday gestured Jagat regarding the issue and Jagat gave a helpless look

Uday(consoling her):what happened J..Y r u crying my cutiepie Princess.?

Breaking the hug.

J: Udayda 'Jagat is too bad.

Ranveer:Kya kiya usne J.

J:Ranveerda Jagat ne aaj phirse humme sword fighting mein hara diya..Its my 25th failure..

Uday and ranveer couldn't control their smile.

J: hw dare u Udayda..aapse kutty..Jiji ko aane do aapki iss hassi ke liye wohi saza denge..

Uday gave a what I did look..

Just thn Manyata came from Temple carrying her pooja tray..

J went like a jet and hugged her leaving her shocked..Even Vijay and Unnati was surprised..Unnati took away the tray from Manyata's hand.

Manyata: J kya hua doll..aap ro kyun rahe ho?kya hua ?humhe bathaiye J..

J: jiji aapna Udayda se baat mat karna puri ek din ke liye..

Manayata: kyun J?

J: kyunki hum aapse keh rahi hoon.

Unnati: lekin J hua kya hain?

J: Jagat ne aaj phirse humme sword fighting mein haraya..I can't take it and whn I complained to Udayda he laughed at me Jiji..Hw rude haina..

Vijay was about to smile hearing the mess but Unnati managed by pinching his hand.

J: jiji boliye aap humari maan rakhegi na..

Manyata gave a worried look to Uday..

Manyata: haan J.

J: thanku jiji..i love u..u r the best.

Manyata: J vaise humara Uday se baat na karne se kya faraq padega

J: that's ri8 jiji lekin ab hum kare kya.

Vijay: J bhai thalwar ke jawab thalwar se hi dena chahiye.

Manayat:haan J vijay bhai is ri8.

J: to?

Vijay: Manyata will fi8 4 u and will pay 4 ur insult.

Manyata: haa'kya?

Vijay:ofcourse M bhai..

Manyata stood puzzled..i didn't took my sword since 6yrs.

Vijay: u will do it 4 J..won't u?

J:won't u jiji'

Uday(smirking): phassi'

Uday: haan Manyata agar Jagat ne humse aisa kaha hota toh hum kabke haan kehti..

J: dnt u love me jiji'won't u ?

Manyata(gave a angry look to Uday): ya i'll.

Vijay: m bhai agar haar gayi toh Devgarh ki izzat loot jaoge..

Manyata: humari hote hue aise kuch nahi hoga vijay bhai..and we will have a deeper talk later on'

Manyata and Jagat soon got ready to fi8 while Uday's friends sat down to see the sword fi8 or the first time and that too Manyata..

Uday: choti kaun jeetenge..

Unnati: ahhh Manyata never fails dada she will even play with her life.

Vijay: and she is weak by health.

Uday: it's a game choti..

Unnati: ahhh god knows.

J: all the best jiji..

Jagat: manyata di is it necessary..

Manyata: yes jagat and dnt consider me weak jagat..on the field no relation'

Jagat nodded and hugged Manyata.

Both holded sword in their hand..

And soon the swords started hugging eachother..Both were showing their best..The swords moved freely in air..Uday and rest was indeed afraid of the state.At a moment they thought M will win and in the next moment the table will b changed favouring jagat.In between M gota cut on her hand and blood was oozing out.Uday stood up to stop the fi8 bt it was late and both M and Jagat was enjoying their fi8.Vijay was too much concerned now..and Unnati gave a angry look to Vijay 4 starting the whole deal.

And in the final move Manyata twisted her hands pushed jagat's sword down and brought her sword to Jagat's neck'

All stood up and gave a sigh of relax..Uday stood up and came to M but b4 that J came to Manyata hugging her .She and Unnati soon helped her to dress the wound..Uday stood near M with concern.

Just thn Tara emerged rom sumwhr'

Rahul: hey tara whn u came?

Tara gave a smile and went to the fighting area

Tara: guys whn Manyata stood for J y dnt Uday stand for Jagat'

Juli:oho tara aate hi jagda giri shuru .

Uday(playfully): u r ri8 tara.

Manyata exchanged looks with Uday and Tara..

Manyata: toh shuru kare...

Uday was shocked by the response...while manyata gave a glare to uday n tara...



To be continued...😊

precap: sword fi8😊


To be continued...

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Love u all😊

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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Edited by sarah_kelly - 12 years ago

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