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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
awesome character sketch, keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
luvd it bt i kind of like our old M
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Very interesting!! Pls pm me whenever you update 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Hey ! Good story ..can't wait pls update soon & pm me if u can...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
I loved the cerecter sketch ...
Update soon and pm me to infrom if it's possible...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
very interesting . loved the character sketch . plz PM me whn u update if possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1:

The Music in the club was deafening, loud enough to shake your insides. and the lights continuesly flashing in a sea of colors, each time hitting a diffrent person.
"Mumma, mein usse nahi mil na chati, sab jante hai ki meri usse shadi karne ka absolutely no chance hai ...fir kyunn !!" said manyata.*silence* "Okay mumma, lekin bade mein mujhe mat kehna ki mehne warn nahi ki a tha" and she hung up before her mom could say anything else.

"Oh goddd" she breathed to her self, she closed her eyes for a moment.

"Hellooo!! Darliinnnggg !!!"

Manyata jumped up , startled.

"Oh, its just you…I mean Hi!" she said putting on a smile, which looked as fake as his Gucci shoes.

"So what do you think" Akash said spinning around for her.

"Ummm, uhhh" she said not sure what she was supposed to be looking at.

"Me !! You know, am I Just as great as you has imagined or better" he asked with a cheesy smile on his face leaning into her.

She took one huge step back , wanting to keep us much distance from this weirdo as possible "umm" she was really out of words for the first time, he definitely wasn't how she had imagined…. but worse. Kesa adme(man) hai, iss se toh chutkara toh pana hi pedega, verna isski baate sun sun ke, toh zaroor pajal ho jaon gi.

"Come on lets dance" He said and practically dragged her to the dance floor in seconds. She tried to get out of his grip but it was as if his hand was super glued to her wrist and it would take a chance saw to get him off her. Oh god, mein khaha paas gi, Baba ji, kuch toh karo, Pleasseee bachalo mujhe iss musi batse She begged in her mind.

But right than they collide with two people in the crowd, she didn't see there faces but just when she was about to say sorry.

"Oh god ,your clubs standards have dropped so low kya tum ase logo tumhare club mein ana dhera ho !" said Jai. Giving a condensing look to Manyata. And Uday could help but cheak manyata out." yeh hi who ladki hai, jise kai bare mein meina tum hai bata tha."

"Oh ho, so your that girl wow, the one and only person, that's had enough guts to actually insult Jai in public and live…WOWWW!" said Uday playing a smirk on his face, while circleing around her while speaking.

Manyata just gave Jai an irritated look and just about to set her straight when.

"Come on Manyata, let's go" Said Chiku

"Wait, hold on" She said . She wasn't about to let Jai say something to her and just let her go.

But before she even knew it, Chiku was already dragging her away. Now she really getting irritated, and with all the force she had with in her she pulled out of his grasp.

"What the hell, you can't just drag me away" She yelled at him, she was really mad right now, half because of Jai and half because of this weirdo standing in front of her.

He oviously could tell that right now she would kill anything in her path, and decide to make a smart choice.

"you know what how about I go get you a drink, you know, to help you calm down ,,okay" He said.

And suddenly an idea flashed in her mind.

"Yah your right, maybe a drink would help, maybe you should go get me one"

And just when he left, she ran toward the exit. She knew that this was probably gonna be the only chance she could get to , get away from him.

She made her way through the club, intill she accidently got sucked into the dance floor crowd. She tried escaping but the loud pouding on the the music and the bodys dancing againest each other was making it difficult. In till she felt a strong hand grab her and pull her out, she finally felt like she could breath getting out of there.

She had her head down for a second, trying to catch her breath. And as soon as she looked up to thank the person that pulled her out she realized who she was about to say thanks to.

"You !?"

"uhh, yess meee " He smirked "why were you expecting someone else"

She was just going to make a break for it when he pulled her back and pinned her up againest the wall.

"Before leaving just a answer a small question of mine.. usally mujhe sirf 2 min lagte hai kisiko samajneme (understand)…lekin tum kyun nahi hamari pale are ho …. Who are You ?!..Asil mein kon ho tum ??"

"Asil mein kon hum mein" she said and pushed down his arms. "rishta mein hum tumare bap lagte hai aur naam hai shansha….Ab hatte Pare !!" And pushed him aside and began to walk intill he pulled her back again.

"Before leaving mein tum ha ek piece of advice dena chatha hoon…Who ladka hai na, tumhare saath..tum hai samal nahi pa-a-ga… You need a real man !"

"Oh Woowww…tum ne use 1 min dekha aur tum hai pata bhi laga, kya who kasa hai…huhhh !"

"Mujhe yeh pata lagha hai kit um mirchi oh aur who pani…aur who sirf aur sirf tum hai bhuja hi sakta hai"

Now Manyata was really irritated, sure she didn't like Akash at all but that didn't mean she was gonna listen to someone like him tell her who should and shouldn't be with.

She got out of there began speed walking towards the door, only to have akash show up right in front of her before she was out the door.

" Where you goin baby ?!" He asked in a sickly sweet voice.

"Chal Hatteee !!" And she pushed him a side, and left out the door not paying attention to his yelling out her name behind.

All as Uday watched .

" Ek dhaam Bindasss" He said to himself letting a smirk play of his lips.

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Okay Guys Hey, So this is the first chapter...I know I know...not the most interesting ...but this is just to set up there meeting and everything...after this everything is going to get rolling and really interesting...turn completly diffrent from the show :)
My updates probably won't take that long, because I have everything already planned out. Just need time to put it on paper :) My next update is this saturday night or sunday morning.
PS: Leave your thoughts and tell me what you think will happen next or eventually in the story, I would love to read your thoughts, and I might even get some ideas of my own from them :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Victoria Justice HandbagsThis is what Manyata was wearing in the club . And udayveer wore the same white jacket he wore in the show durign the club scene, Srry I tried finding a picture of it but all the pic were only showing him from the shoulders up :(
Edited by luvuday - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, this concept is really interesting :) one thing I am glad about is the fact that Manyata doesn't like Akash in this story :) great update, loved it!

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
loved it loved their meeting but please the conversation translation please thanks for he pm awesome update

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