OS: M's confession to Uday =)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys just wrote a short scene of Manyata's realization and confession of love to Uday...

Manyata in a hurry comes to Uday's suite at 2 o'clock in the morning...Uday in his room...sleeping and wakes up because of Manyata coming in...

Uday: (on his bed looking, half asleep and confused)...kon...(rubs his eyes)...princess...tum ho yaa phir hum koi sapna dekh rahi hain...

Manyata: (goes up to him, grabs a pillow and throws at him)...sapna nahi nightmare...meri neend uda kar khud ghorey baich ke so rahe ho...(she hits him again)...utho...abhi ke abhi utho veday kahin ke...

Uday: (gets up but still sitting on the bed)...princess tum itni raat ko hamarey room mein...(he puts quilt over himself)...is everything okay...???

Manyata: nahi...kuch bhi okay nahi hai...samajh aaya tumhe...dimaag kharaab kar ke rakha hai tum ne mera...

Uday:( looking even more confused...)...kya...???...hum ne kya kiya...???

Manyata: kya kiya...???...yeh poocho kya nahi kiya...naak mein dum kar ke rakha hai...jahan dekho tum hi nazar aatey ho...sote, jaagtey, yahan tak ke sapnoo mein bhi...har jagah tumhari hi awaaz loudspeaker mein sunai deti hai...

Uday: (still sleepy)...haan...???

Manyata: jee haan...(she sits next to him on the bed)...Uday yaar problem hogayi hai...

Uday: kaisi problem princess...tum seedhey seedhey batao gi...hua kya hai...???

Manyata: ho gaya hai...vijay bhai ne kaha tha ho gaya hai...aur unnati ne bhi kaha tha...phir mein ne google peh symptoms bhi check kiye...mujhey sach main woh ho gaya hai...theek kaha tha vijay bhai ne daal mein kuch kala hai...ab pata chala ke yahan toh poori daal hi kaali hai...(looking worried)

Uday: daal...kala...google sypmtoms...???...kya bol rahi ho princess raat ke do bajey hain...aur tumhe iss waqt pranks karne ki soojhi hai...(he yawns)...

Manyata: prank nahi hai...mujhey sach mein tum se woh hogaya hai...arey yaar PYAAR ho gaya hai duffer...I LOVE YOU...

Uday: (staring at her with his eyes wide open)...yeh kab hua...???

Manyata: bas abhi aik ghantey pehley...google kiya maine love symptoms aur sab ke sab sach nikle yaar...ab kya hoga uday...

Uday: princess...seriously aik ghantey pehle...btw...(he pulls her close)...I LOVE YOU TOO...aur tum itni darri hui kyun lag rahi ho...pyaar hi hua hai na...

Manyata: wahi toh problem hai...pyaar ho gaya hai..woh bhi tum se...ab main kya karoon...???

Uday: (whispers in her ear)...baby...don't worry hum hain na hum tumhe sab kuch sikha deingey...(he kisses her on the ear)

Manyata: Uday sachi mein I LOVE YOU A LOT...mujhey abhi realize hua...main na bohat badi ghadi hoon...sab ko pata tha aur mijhey khud ko nahi...

Uday: hum jaantey hain...tabhi toh hum tumhe hamesha tang kartey rehte the...aur hum tum se bohat bohat bohat pyaar karte hain...abhi se nahi bachpan se...aur hamesha kartey rehengey...(he hugs her)...

Alright... just wrote this out of boredom...sorry it was not my best work...thanks for reading...

Love,

Alissa😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahahahahaha. Alissa this was amazing. It's the funniest love confession I have ever come across. Google symptoms 🤣
Oh God. Lol. I am not even bored anymore now. Haha. Would love to see such a confession in the show too cuz ManVeer are so unpredictable and unique in every way possible. Lol.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...funniest confession...really MANVEER sy aisa confession hi expect kiya ja sakta hai...🤣
and plz update ur FF soon...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fia21

Hahahahahaha. Alissa this was amazing. It's the funniest love confession I have ever come across. Google symptoms 🤣
Oh God. Lol. I am not even bored anymore now. Haha. Would love to see such a confession in the show too cuz ManVeer are so unpredictable and unique in every way possible. Lol.

Ahhh I know right...I get the craziest ideas in my stupid head...google symptoms lmao...mean google does have answer for everything right :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

loved it...funniest confession...really MANVEER sy aisa confession hi expect kiya ja sakta hai...🤣

</div><div>and plz update ur FF soon...😳

Thanks...I know right manyata's confession would surely be stupid and funny...oh well...o yeah will update the ff soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS..:)kaash yeh show me hua hota..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i wish yehi show hota...alissa u can be a fab writter...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alissa345

Thanks...I know right manyata's confession would surely be stupid and funny...LIKE HER😉😆 oh well...o yeah will update the ff soon :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maya143

i wish yehi show hota...alissa u can be a fab writter...

Awww thanks I am glad you like it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful one shot :)

I don't see the confession cmin that soon in DEK probz afta ages

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