Ff_ do jism ek jaan (manveer) updated part_ 10 pg_59 - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg it was so so so awesome...loved it to the core...M is finally back...so happy...can't wait to read the net part...update soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz plz plz cont soon
Eargrly waiting for ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

@krishna di...yipeee part time i m now AZAAD PANCHI

meri azaad panchi ab to update karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh anny why manyata is dead...no plzzz...i loved every bit of ur last update...and i loved the precap too...but yar bacah lo bechari ko...i think u should go with the option that manyata is back by the strength of uday's love...best option...
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Posted: 13 years ago
(PART 6)...UV:theek hai princess aap humeih agar chod k chali gyi toh hum tumhare pass arahai hai humesha k liye,aap wapis nhi ana chati hai toh kya huva,hum hi aapke pas arahai hai.uday was abt to lve d hospital room n wen he reaches at d door,manyaz body jerked n utter word U..UDAY,uday stoped at d door, everyone z shocked..UV:ds kya aapne b wahi sunna jo humne suna.DS:haan uday beta woh dekhiye manyata ki body response kar rahi hai,UV:hum jante thai princess tum zaroor avo gi, uday was shouting doctor,doc doc,DOC:yes yuvraaj kya huva.UV:woh dekhiye manyata ki body response kar rahi hai.D:ahh yes but hw z dis possible, oh God dis a miracle.D:sister patient ko jaldi operation theater mein le jaye, after 2hrs doctor came frm operation theater.UV:doctor kya huva kaisi hai manyata.D:congratulation she z now out of danger,but rajmata dis was a miracle,i think yuvraj unse bohut pyar karte hai,aaj woh yuvraaj ki wajeh se hi wapis ayi hai,sach yuvraaj apke pyaar mein bohut taqat hai.UV:doc hum manyata se kab mil sakte hai.DOC:i think half n hr tak hosh aye ga tab tak aap intezaar kijiye.UV:doc kya hum andar unke pass ja sakte hai.D:ji bilkul.uday goes inside d room,n was starng at manyata,UV:hold manyataz hand in his hands,princess ye sab humari wajeh se huva,but i promise hum aapko humesha kush rakeege,aap humari zindagi ho,aap humein chod k jane k barei mein soch b hi sakte kyunki humari dil ki dadkhne apki dil ki dadkhano se chalti hai,infact humari dadkhan ek hai...after half n hr both families enter into d room,everyone was waitng for manyatz.after some time manyta starts opening har eyes,wen she open her eyes she again utter a word UDAY.UV:haan princess bolo hum yahi hai tumhare pass,ILUV u princess,itna b koi naraz hota hai kya,uday was crying.MANYA:uuudday aap r.r oo kyun rahe hai,hum theek hai ab,uday ye sab kon hai.UV:ye sab tumhari family hai manyata.MANYA:ye meri family hai.komal haan beta hum apki maa hai ,she put her hand on her head n manyata remmbers all flashbcks of childhood.BrIJ:beta hum apke.MANYA:aap humare dad hai aur woh humari ds,woh humare bhai hai shayid unka naam vijay hai,aur ye humare BF hai pointng towards griraj.UV:apko kaisai pata.MANYA:kyunki humein sab yaad aya, par sirf hum issai pechan nhi paye pntng towards unnati.UV:ye humari behen unnati hai,aur apki apni behen jay nandini behosh padi hai,...after 3 dayz .D:yuvraaj ab aap rajkumari ko ghar leke jaa sakte hai.UV:yes doc.MANYA:aaj hum bohut kush hai ki hum ghar jaa rahe hai,uday huggs manyata.MANYA:ye aap kya kar rahe hai.UV:still in hug,hum toh sirf hug kar rahe hai.MANYA:uday chodiye hume ye hospital hai,apka room nhi.UV:toh uss room mein b jaldi leke ayege aapko,aur hum kisi se darte nhi hai,jo humein aisai dekhega usse dekhne do.MANYA:ab ye aap kya kar rahe hai.UV:hug hi toh kar rahe hai.MANYA:acha hug ,toh apne apna hath mere cloths k andar ku dala hai ,agar kisne humein aise dekha,aur ap apne hath se humare back pe kuch doond rahe hai.UV:toh iss mein kya hai,humara aap par pura haq hai,aur hum woh scar doond rahe hai jo humne aapko bachpan mein diya tha,haan mila woh scar.MANYa:acha woh scar b mila ,ab toh apna hath bahar nikalo,UV:kyun kya tum humse pyaar nhi karti.MANYA:teasngly pyaar amm ,actually hum itne saal apse door rahe toh hosakta hai hum kisi aur se pyaar karte ho...uday gets angry n he hugs manyata more n more tightly.MANYA:ahhh ouch uday u r hurtng me ,dard ho raha hai humein.UV:wispers into her ear,princess aisa khyaal lana b mat,kyunki tum sirf meri ho,uday removes her hair frm one side of neck n start kissng her on her neck with passion,manyata colsd her eyes cuz she was also enjoyng,after 10 mins.MANYA:uday ab bas b karo chaliye chodiye ab,but uday was not listening her.MANYA pov:humare pyaar ki baat huvi the shayid uday issiliye gussa hai,isiliye ye mujhe chod nhi rahe hai.MANYA:uday ab chodiye humein, bohut dard ho raha hai plz, hum sirf apse pyaar karte hai, hum toh bas mazak kar rahe the,while hearng dese words frm manyata,uday realizes dat he z hearting manyata.UV:dard ho raha hai,hum doc ko bulate hai.doc examines manyata.D:inke stichs pe stress aya hai isilye dard hora hai,na aap abi ziya chal sakti hai aur na hi ap stichs pe stress dalege,issai apko khatra hai hi apki stichs uth sakti hai n doc lvs d room.UV:sry princess meri wajeh se stichs pe stress aya.MANYA:itz ok koi baat nhi.MANYA POV:itni choti se mazaak k liye itna gussa,lagta hai itne saalo k akelepan ki wajeh se hai,par uday hum vada karte hai ki hum apko itna pyaar deenge ki aapko apne past ka akelapan bool jaye ga,ILUV U,on d other side brij n griral wre fightng.B:manyata devgrah aye gi.G:nhi manyata jaigrah aye gi.UV:stop it dad,stop it uncle,hum dono familyoon ka ek mahal mumbai mein hai ,toh hum sab wahi raheegai,dono familiyaan ek sath.DS:haan udaay bilkul theek keh rahe hai,issai hum dono famliyaa manyata k pass rahe gai.MANYA HOSPItAL rum.UV:manya stress mat dalo,hum ye dress ki doori band dete hai.manyata closd her eyes
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Posted: 13 years ago
PRECAP...uday kissng manyata on her scar...MUMBAI MEHAL SCENE...manyata hugs uday frm bckside...MANYA: i m sry uday mein hospital mein sirf mazak kar rahi thi,mein aapke begair kisi aur se pyaar nhi karti hoon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh so fianlly u updated ha..itni jaldi keun kiya???serial end honey ki bad hi karlete sweetheart.no props next time aur late karna ok.Anyways awesome update as always.cont soon.precap iz damn interesting.n yeah cont choon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmmm awesome baby👏...it was so romantic n lovely☺️...pls update soon this time pls...and next time a long update k its a deal😊
Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...loved it...waiting fr the next one...hehe

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