Akash-where's he OS( part 8updated pg 7))

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Part 1

This is based on the present storyline.That is Manyata thinking that Uday is the real culprit and asked police for investigation and all.I mean the present revenge track...

So uday took part in auction n by a bid of 2crore he got the opportunity to spend a day with Manyata...
After the ceremony...

Manyata:Udaybeer singh tum kabhi sochna bhi math ki mein tere saath ek din bithayengi...din to bahut door ki baath hain main tere saath ek second bhi nahi reh sakthi...

Uday:oh really princess ...aapke paas mere saath ek din bithane ki alawa aur koi raasta hi nahi hain samjhi...Aur agar aapne apne zidd mein atal rahne ki bare mein soch rahi hoon toh mein aapko batha doon ki aap mujhe nahi un massoom bachon ko sazza de rahi hoon jinhe iss charity se madad milne waali hoon.unse woh 2 crore cheen rahi hoon...

Manyata:Udaybeer tu itne neeche kaise gir sakthi hain...tu mere gussa unpar nikalengi...

Uday:aap ko to pata hain na ki mein bad boy hoon...bad boy tag aapne hi mujpar lagaaya tha ab us tag ka matlab mein aapko sikhaoongi...ab mujhe aage peeche dekhne ki koi zarorat nahi...aap ziddi hain to mein usse bhi zyada ziddi hoon.isiliye humse panga mat le lo princess...anjaam teek nahi hoga...

he left and manyata was startled to see ... bad uday...ri8 thn jagat came...jagat won bid for J and was going to spend the very next day with J...

Jagat:Her highness toh kya aap kal Yuvraj Udaybeer ke saath jayengi

Manyata:nahi Mr.Ratore kal mein busy hoon.Main Uday se directly baath karthi hoon k

Jagat: k princess but pls make it fast.Kyunki according to rules jiss din aap Yuvraj ke saath waqt bithayengi ussi di hi hum unse cheque receive kar paoongi...

Manyata:teek hain bye...

Meanwhile Brijraj was with Giriraj.They were talking about matters that occured in the past.Brij was drunken

Giriraj:Brij aapko bathana hi hoga hi uss din kya hua tha aapke aur Akash ke beech...

Brijraj:Uss dinnn

Flashback...

Maharaj prithvi:Brijraj aapko uss akash ka kuch to karna hi hoga...agar manyata ne yuvrani banne se mana kiya toh aap acchi tharah jaante hain ki kya hoga anjaam.hum apki shubh chindak hain

Brij:haan maharaj ap chinda math kijiye...uss ladke ka kya karna hain yeh main acchi tarah jaanti hoon..
Maharaj prithvi left and soon Brijraj also left the mahal.

Brijraj(on phone).:toh kya hua pata chala ki woh kahan hain..

stranger:haan maharaj.main uska peecha kiya.woh cliff pe hain iss waqt aur kissi ka intsaar kar rahi hoon...

Brijraj:teek hain main wahan aa rahi hoon..

Brij reached the place and all that he could see was that Uday was having fi8 with akash...Brij was about to get out that he saw J standing besides atree and was videoshooting..brijraj thought to wait in the car until J n Uday leave

Meanwhile Uday hit akash with the hockey stick n he fall off the cliff...His men took him to car and left the place.soon J also left...

brijraj came out of his car...

Brijraj:joh kaam hum karne ke liye aayi woh Uday ne kar diya...teek hain magar uday beta aapne ek glthi kiya hu rajwaade hain...jab tak dushmann ki laash nahi milthi humhe iss tharah maidaan chodkar nahi jaan chahiye...koi baat nahi apki yeh uncle brij iss adoori kaam poora karenge..

he asked his men to search for akash...

They found akash and for their suprise he was alive and was holding a tree branch..they took him to brijraj..

Brijraj:Maan gayi.ajeeb kismat lekar paida hui hain...Phir baj gayi...koi baat ahio jo Uday nahi kar paya woh hum karenge.he took his gun and pointed towards Akash..

Akash:Aap manyata ki pita hain na.aap aisa kaise kar sakthi hoon...

Brijraj:hum unki pita hain isiliye yeh sab kar rahi hoon...

Akash:nahi pls mujhe mat maariye.mere parivaar anaad ho jayengi...

Brijraj:oho...teek hain main tumhe aakiri moka deti hoon.waise bhi tumhe maarkar mujhe koi phayda nahi..chalo ek deal karte hain...

brijraj asked his men to bring a bag from his car..It was full of currency ..He hold bag in one hand and pistol in other...

Brijraj:teek hain ab bol iss mein se kaunsa tu lega...paisa ya mauth...tumahare paas 5 minute hain.soch le...


to b continued...

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