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part 1 in the auction jagat:50 lakh j feel a bit jealouse j:jagat tum manayata jiji ke liye 50lakh deraheho? jagat:whatever. j:jagat tum humse ais e keun bat kar rahe ho.hum toh tumahre apne hein na.jagat:oh really j tumhe keun chot pouch rahi hein after all tum to dil torneme mahir ho na.aur tum humari koi nahi lagti.tum sirf ek ajnabi hoo. now j is totally mad n leave the auction without any word, (manayata pov)oh no kahin yeh halkat .yeh yaha kya kar raha hain.i mean obviously mujhpe haaq jatane aya hog ,han nahi toh.are koi isse bari boli keun nahi laga raha.abbe oh jagat tu to l aga na. ( uv;s pov)humme pata hein ki manayata kya soch rahi hein n abtak toh dus tees gali bni dedihongi.but believe me mein abhi manayatse a vasai nafrat karti hoon jaise voh mujhse karti hein. Aur shayad usse jada.yuvraaj udayveer keh dise khelneka anjam ab tum samjhogi manyata . ... ...man:1 crore 1,2,3.so the winner iss yuvraaj udayveer sing.yuvraaj ab pliz stage par aiye aur apni princess ko lejayie. uv come to the stage n stand beside manayata uv(with smirk):humne kaha tha na manayata ki dil vale dulhaniya le jayenge;han nahi toh. m:teri problem kya hai udayveer . uv:humarir problem bhi tum aur problem ka solution bhi tum.ab chalo letgo to the dancefloor . m : mein kiske sath dance karongi tere sath?kabhi nahi. uv:tum bhul rahi ho manayata ki tum aj sirf humari hoon sirf humari.oh sorry hum to bhul hi gaye the ki tum to hameshasei humari thi,han nahi toh. ... ok this the end of my first part.its my first os hope u guys like it.n if u guys then pliz press the like button n leave ur comment.agar aplog mere os ko like karte then mujhe pata chale ga ki mujhe part2 likhna chaiye yah nahi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really good!! Plzzz do continue!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Really good!! Plzzz do continue!!:)

thanks dear.thank god ek nai toh comment kia.yeah i will continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its lovely ,rather amazing ,next part zaroor post kerna :)
mahnoor😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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itz waooo...but yyy it is written in such form...yyy soo much space...but still luv it...
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really loved it to gd please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2

m-hamesha my foot.mein aur tu kabhi ek nahi hosakte.yeh baat demag mein daal lai apni,han nahi toh.

u-[with smirk] my foot kya baat hai princess tum to kafi achi english bolne lagi.aur btw tum keun hamesha apne kismat ko challenge karti ho.jab ki tumhe yeh ache sai pata hai ki tum chahe jitna bhi apne kismat sai bhaglo laut kar toh tumhe humare pass hi ana parega.

[manayata's pov]

tum itna neeche gir jao gai yeh maine kabhi nai socha tha.i hate u uday.i hate u.not beacouse ki tumne akash ko mara keunki tumne mera varosa torha.akash se toh mai

pyar bhi nahi karti thi.voh bas mere liye ajnabi tha aur kuch nahi.ab yeh kismat kahi

toh kheil hai dekho ki mein jis insaan ke liye puri dunia sai apni gharvalo sai larhi main toh usse pyar hi nahi karti.aur jis insaan sai mai sabse sabse jada nafrat karti

thi usse mujhe pyar ho gaya.han uday mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya nahi actually pyar tha lekin sabke tara tumne bhi mujhe dhoka dia.tumne bhi mera dil tordia.aurab mere dil mein tumhare liye sirf nafrat hai.tum soch nahi sakte itni nafrat.

... ...

m-tu jobhi kahe main tere sath dance nahi karoongi.

uv-oh c'mon princess ab yeh natak band karo aur chup chap dance ke liye chalo.

m-nahi jaungi aur chupchap toh bilkul nahi.

uv-[in angry tone]princess hum keh rahe hai na chal nai ki liye.

in the mean time jaggat come between their conversation

jaggat-princess kya mein app ki sath dance karsakta ho

uv feel a bit jealouse

uv-no jaggat vo actually kya hain na manayata abhi thori thak gayi hai isslia vo abhi dance nahi karpaigi.

jaggat-princess phir bhi ek dance.

uv's pov

uski yeh jurrat ki humari mana karne ke baat bhi vo manayata ko dance ke liye pooch raha.how dare he is.kya usse nahi pata hai ki manayata humari princess hai.princess jagat nai humari princess ko princess kaha.nahi vo sirf humari princess hai aur koi usse princess nahi bula sakta sivae humure.

Uv:humne kaha na jagat ki humari princess abhi thak gai hai toh vo tumhare sath dance nahi kar payigi.aur ha ek aur baat jagat humari Manayata ko yeh bilkul pasand nahi hai ki humari sivay koi inne princess bulay.i hope tum samajh gaye.lekin ha tum usse Manayata bula sakte ho.

Manayata's pov:

oh god iss halkat kaise pata chala ki mujhe yeh bilkul nahi pasand ki isske alava koi aur mujhe princess bulay.chalo koi baat nahi issi bich usne mujhe manayata se princess toh bulaya.oh manayata tu yeh hamesha kiyu bhul jati hai ki tu usse nafrat karti hai aur kuch nahi,han nahi toh

... ...

Jagat:oh sorry Uday hume sach main nahi pata tha ki

manayata ko princess bulane ka haq sirf tumhara hai.

agar pata hota toh hum kabhi aisa nahi karte.

Uv:oh it's okay.

Jagat:lekin hum manayata ko princess nahi toh candy jarror keh sakte hai.

Uv:what😲

M:candy😲

Jagat:yeah candy vo kya hai na Manayata bilkul uski jaisi hai isslia so kya main tumhe candy bula sakti ho?

Uv:candy how cheesy Jagat.i mean manayata ko toh abhi

M:nahi Jagat tum mujhe candy bula sakte ho.

Uv[in angry tone]:r u sure princess.

M:yes uday.

Jagat:so kya hum abhi dance kar sakte hai.

Manayata's pov

yehi mauka iss halkat sai bachne ka.jagat ke sath dance karne chali ja. ... ...

m:yeah lets go.aur abhi mujhe jada thakan bhi nahi ho raha hai uday.

Uv is now totally annoyed

PRECAP: a drunk uday n manveer day out.

ok guys this is end of my part2.hope u guys liked it.😊nd do cmmnt please

Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooo manyata kabhi tou abhi harkaoot se bazz aooo...stop teasing uday...n really luking forward 4 de next drunk part...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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people want want pms please add me to ur buddy list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it! And btw that candy part was totally funny 🤣
Plz update soon

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