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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i have written a poem for uday... hope u guys like it along with the pic...😉😳😃



Burning inside..

Blisters and pains;

Fighting outside

Tears like rains..

Betrayed I am..

Betrayer u..

Destroyed soul

Seeking revenge..

Love was fun ;

Love was pretty;

Love turned sour..

Love consumed everything..

U made my heart bleed

U killed my conscience

U made me the demon I am today..

U …I loved once…

Evil arose..

Bitter thots gripped my mind..

I intend to strike back now..

Forgetting who am i..?

Dark prince I am..

Darkness is my strength..

To push u into eternal darkness

Is now my sole aim….

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb! U r really talented👏
I just loved these lines

Love was fun ;

Love was pretty;

Love turned sour..

Love consumed everything..

U made my heart bleed

U killed my conscience

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it ...after Abhay of PKYEK Udayveer is my favorite Ashish Rocks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! Truly fabulous! Perfect poem depicting UV's inner turmoil and feelings!

You are amazing writer- captured it all so beautifully
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I totally Love the Dark Prince :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really good pic n poem!!:)
Edited by AKlover101 - 13 years ago

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