FF : What I want..(updted) ch 4 pg 9

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hey frnds.. first of all i want to say sorry for my previous two FFs.. i started writing them without any prior thinking.. and cudnt cntinue becoz of their unrealistic theme.. i cnt write fantasies or horror stories that well.. as the storyline of DEK was very cnfusing at that time.. it wasnt instigating any good idea inside me so i started off with two unrealistic stories.. i cnt cntinue them..😭 i am sorry frnds.. those who were the readers of Dreamgirl and 8 hours together... i really cnt think abt anything to make them any better.. bt this FF is better and i think u will like it...😊


WAT I WANT




This is a story abt a evil-minded guy Udayveer Singh,who cn do anything for his own benefits and to achieve his ends- so crooked he has become in time that he cn also be the cause of other people's troubles if they come into clash with his desires. he has the expert intelligence of an efficient chessplayer and thinks of this world as a huge chessboard. A politician by profession,he originally belongs frm a royal family of rajasthan. he is extreamely manipulative and shrewd and trusts almost nobody.. bt everyone trusts him,coz very few people knows his real nature.

This story is also abt the daughter of a special branch crime investigating officer Mr.Rajesh Tiwari who will be suspended by Udayveer for laying false charges on him of the assault of one of his opponents before the vote. Rajesh Tiwari knew that everything he had assumed was true bt he cud nt prove it as all the evidences were bought and changed by udayveer in some way.. he escaped the charge and rajesh was court martialled and suspended. his 18 yrs old daughter Manyata Tiwari cud nt digest this insult of her father.. she loved him more than anyone else in the whole world and she tried to cheer him up although she was quite down herself. but the lil young girl cud nt do much to attend to his mental injuries... hurt,disgusted,frustrated, Rajesh Tiwari committed suicide leaving manyata all alone in the world.. this is a story of her struggle to survive against the ruthless world and her fight for justice to regain her father's honour and last bt not the least, which forms the main crux of the story... her ability and inability to keep herself away frm Udayveer Singh, who will grow an immense obsession for her and will desire her with all his heart,mind and soul...


tell me what u think abt it...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome theme ...😉
pls continue soon ...😊
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very very interesting concept,
please update 1st part soon
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Nice concept!! Lookin forward to reading this FF!! Continue soon n plzzz pm me if possible!
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I l0vd it so so so much plx c0ntinue i badly want to read ths st0ry
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Please PM me when you update...
It looks really interesting

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👏👏thnaks...great job...very interesting theme...please update sooon...and pm me...👏👏
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😉sooo interesting!!!!!!!😊
awesome theme, can't wait!!!!!!!!👍🏼👏
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Chapter-1

Uday' kis baat se itna pareshan ho?

Jay traced her finger along his lips,neck and seductively reached his chest..

Uday- hum udayveer singh hain.. hume kabhi koi pareshani nhi ho sakte..bas hum sirf ye soch rahe the ki' he smiled at her..

Jay-ki..?

Uday- ki aapko hum aj shayam ko kahan le jaye dinner ke liye..

Jay's face brightened at once- dinner? Aj raat ko? Sach uday?

Uday-of course.. bht din ho gaye ye sab elections ki wajese hum aur aap kahin dinner pe nhi gaye..isiliye aaj soch rahe the aapko kisi classy jagah par le jaye.. taki hum dono'. He stooped down to kiss her bt she moved away,giggling..

Jay-aise nhi udayveer singh,hum rajkumari hain' aur aapko hamari'

Their conversation was interrupted by a knock on the door. It was Raj,uday's secretary..

Uday-cmon in..

Raj entered. He was a young,intelligent gentleman in his early twenties.. he was not only uday's secretary bt also his best frnd. Uday trusted him a lot in the admoinistrative as well as personal matters.

Raj- I hope I am nt disturbing u.. bt its really important.. ek bht buri khabar hain..

Uday-kya? He sat up on his bed and wrapped his gown around him..

Raj- who.. rajesh tiwari yaad hain? That officer?

Uday- haan..haan.. use kaise bhul sakte hain? Wohi jisne us thapar ke case mein mere khilaf sabud ekkattha kar liya tha hain na? kitni mushkil se use picha churaye the hum'.whew..!! shukar hain aab sabkuch thk hain..

Raj- kuch thk nhi hain uday.. who tiwari usne suicide kar liya hain..

Uday-really?> to ye buri khabar kaise ho gayi? Ye to khush khabri hain.. he laughed out at his own joke..

Raj- no uday.. itni choti baat nhi hain.. uski ek beti hain..18 saal ki' who tumhare khilaf sabko bharka rahi hain.. sare news channel walo ko apni gawai mein yehi keh rahi hain ki tum kitne bare jhute aur makkar ho.. that u r a deceiver and a shrewd politician.. who ye bhi keh rahi hain ki uske papa ek sacche aur imandar police officer the jinhe tumhare bare mein sabkuch pata chal gaya tha.. isiliye tumne apni powers ka istamal karke unhe suspend karwa diya.. log us ladki ki baton mein aa rahe hain uday.. tumne news nhi dekhi kya?

Jainandini immediately got down frm the bed and switched on the tv. Raj was ryt.. it was everywhere on the news. The common people were walking in long processions,ranting "udayveer singh hay hay" "udayveer singh murdabad" all along the streets. An excited reporter was seen shouting-

"kya yeh sach hain? Jis udayveer singh ko rajasthan ke sabhi nagrik apna bhagwan mante the.. kya wo sachmein bhagwan hain ya fir shaitaan? Kya hain udayveer singh ki asliyat? Jo aadmi ek imandar police officer ki beizzati karke unhe khudkushi karne par majboor kar sakta hain unhe kaise hum bhagwan man sakte hain? Ye baat sabid kar deti hain ki aaj ke duniya mein sare neta ek jaise hain.. khun chusnewala darinda'." etc etc'.

Uday clenched his fingers into fists.. 'bakwas..!! sab bakwas hain'.!! Ek ladki ki baton mein akar itna sabkuch kaise ho sakta hain? Ye sach nhi ho sakta' hamare sare kiye karaye par istarah pani''!! DAMN..!! he banged his fists on the table..

Jainandini came running towards him- uday plzz calm down.. kuch nhi hoga.. u dnt worry at all.. ye sab kuch khatam ho jayega ' bas..tum shant raho'

Raj- nhi uday.. ye sab kuch itni asani se khatam nhi hoga.. maine tumhe pehle hi kahan tha.. suspension thk hain.. chahoto tum use kahin aur transfer bhi kar sakte the.. courtmartial karwane ki kya zaroorat thi'? Unka bht sare genuine followers hain police department mein.. who sab uswaqt chup the.. lekin aab who sare log ismein shamil ho jayenge.. bas elections ke pehle hi' am sorry to say uday par isbar tumhara elections jitney ka to sawal hi paida nhi hota'

Uday got up and came towards raj. He cluched his shoulders tightly and said to him in a desperate tone- raj'? Tum aisi baatein kar rahe ho? Aajtak tumne kabhi itni negative baatein nhi ki.. raj kya ho gaya hain tumhe? U know that these elections are very important for me' Kuch bhi karo..raj.. bas ye sab bandh karwao.. plzzz'.

Raj- par uday..aab kya ho sakta hain?

Uday- press conference bulao.. hum press conference bulana chahte hain.. hum sabse mafi bhi mangenge us officer ke saath itna bura karne ke liye.. ek bar bas hum ye elections jit jaye..fir in sabko maza chakhayenge.. he turned to the tv screen and said in a hissing voice- jin logo ne bhi udayveer singh ke khilaf awaz uthene ki himmat ki hain.. hum kisiko nhi chodenge'kisiko nhi'.

Suddenly he stopped and his eyes twitched in curiosity.. then slowly it became wide. On the tv screen, they were showing a girl,with a hand mike on one hand and a hoarding on another which read UDAYVEER SINGH JAWAB DO HUME,HUME JAWAB CHAHIYE . the procession was resting a bit and the girl was sitting there,her dupatta on her head,sheltering herself frm the scorching heat,wiping her forehead,drinking water..

Uday pointed towards her- raj ye ladki kaun hain?

Raj- yehi to hain.. sare musibaaton ki jad'

Uday- matlab?

Raj- are who tiwari ki eklauti beti.. maine kahan na tumse? She is so young bt look at her attitude.. as if she is the leader'

A thin smile appeared on uday's lips as he watched the tiny figure on the tv screen.. she wore a green green ordinary looking anarkali salwar,the dupatta wrapped around her head and neck ; she was sweating like hell and continuously wiped her forehead and neck. The girl was very young,kind of chubby,extreamely fair,her cheeks had turned pink in the heat. Although it appeared that she was having a very hard time and wasn't quite habituated to it bt she did nt seem to give up.. the tightness of her jaw revealed her strong spirirt..

Uday suddenly softened down a bit' raj and jay was surprised to see him smiling to himself..

Jay- uday? Baat kya hain? Tum muskura kyun rahe ho?

Without turning he replied gently- ise jawab chahiye humse? Jawab to ise zaroor milega'

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Edited by kasturika_kashu - 13 years ago
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Kasu plz plz plz continue soon. Its very interesting. I can't wait 2 read the next part.

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