Uday U r mine..FF (last part 44 pg 150 ) - Page 63

Originally posted by: preya_radev

this was mind blowing totally loved it who is this person im glad uday came on time... loved how manyata was not letting uday go please update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sonam2801

Awesome update. UV-Manyata Scenes so romantic & cute.

Who is the MASKMAN? Suspense.

Really very well written.

Thanks for the PM & Do continue soon.

Love you.🤗

Originally posted by: imkool

hey this part was really mindblowing,,,,, specially all manveer scenes 😉😆😛 nd i m really loving this suspenese yaar...great job...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Fabulous update dear! Aww so cute manveer moments !! Aghhh who is dis suspense person ?? Well Ty 4 pm & update soon 😃

Snowdream...hm know dat u r lazzy for dis ff,cuz of mohabbat ki dastaan

Originally posted by: annysyed

Snowdream...hm know dat u r lazzy for dis ff,cuz of mohabbat ki dastaan

Part 32

Uday: Princess aap aaram kijiye hum abhi aate hain.Uday was leaving but Manyata 's face holded him back...

Uday:Princess i'll bback soon…K till thn vijay bhai will b with u .Uday called Vijay bhanna to come and sit with Manyata and Uday left the room after kissing her forehead.

Uday went directly to DS's room and closed the room from inside.

Meanwhile Vijay was trying to make Manyata smile.

Vijay:vaise manna padega kya M bhai apne Udaybeer ko ek bebas aashiq bana diya ..Dekho kis tharah har waqt bechara aapke aage peeche goom rahi hoon …Jaise ki aap sun aur wo earth.

Manyata gave a rude look and was about to argue that…

Unnati(entering from behind): Nice comparison indeed Manyata is dada's light and soul..The Smile of his face..

Manyata's face enlighten with that Dekha Vijay bhai meri nanad khud keh rahi hain ki main unki dada ke liye kya hoon,isse bada kya confirmation chahiye…

Vijay :mmm poor Uday he is going to have a tough time due to this sis-wife partnership.

Unnati:Partnership in crime n prejudice…

Both Unnati and Manyata laughed and hi-fi eachother.

Unnati:well can we see a movie to enlighten all our mood.

Vijay:nice option unnzie lets see a horror movie.

Manayata:Vijay bhai aapko horror dekhni hain to jaayine jaakar aainne main dekho..

Vijay(making a puppy face):how Rude..

Manyata:oh sry vijay bhai who mujhe sirf romantic picture dekhni hain…

Vijay(taunting): huhhh Udaybeer effect..pyar ishq mohabbat aur bahut kuch…

Manyata blushed hearing that.Unnati soon played a romantic film CD in hometheatre and all placed themselves on bed with Manyata at central and Unnati and Vijay at both sides.

There in DS's room.

DS:Uday beta what r u saying?will that be a proper decision…Aapki shaadi…

Uday:It 's the best option as of now dadisaab..Manyata's protection is my primary priority even Marriage comes second only.

Ds:hum samajthe hain beta lekin…

Uday:Dadisaab pls…aap hi kehthe hain ki humhe waqt ke isaaf se phaisla badalni hogi toh phir aaj aap hi.Hum maante hain ki Devgarh aur Jaigarh ki issat ka sawal hain but Trust me Dadisaab hum sab sambhalenge..

Ds : mmm jaise aap teek samjhe beta.Hum hamesha aapke saath hain.

Uday nodded and left the room….

There at another place J was opening her eyelids slowly…She hardly could see anything perhaps weakness had affected her vision too.She tried to move forward but couldn't.Just thn she realized that her hands and legs were tied to a chair.She wanted to scream but thn her mouth was tied with a cloth..J hardly remembered what happened last ni8..She was getting ready to go out n thn Jagat entered.

Jagat: Princess shall I accompany u..I know u dnt like my company but still its ni8 and it won't b safe for u to go out alone..afterall u r ma responsibility.

J: oh Jagat shut up.Its better to go alone thn taking u with me..afterall u only know to make money n forget being the strength of a woman.

Jagat was indeed insulted and he moved out of the room with a insulted face…

J(to herself): I moved out in ma car….and thn…thn what happened.Y can't I remember what happened and whr am I.And past 24hrs where whr I.

Jainandini started to struggle her hands and legs to free herself but all in vain.She tried to scream but the cloth tied to her mouth was so tight that she could not even open her eyes…Tears started moving down her eyes.And by struggled her chair almost fall down and now she was at groung with a chair tied to her body .She was crying in pain but thr was no one to hear her cry.

Jagat who was worried abt J called Uday .

Jagat:Uday is J at home.

Uday:No Jagat what happened.

Jagat:Uday she left the hotel last ni8 heading for disco and didn't returned yet

Uday thought for a while n thn finally spoke.:Jagat need not worry she will b on her evil plans to break my marriage ..and dnt ever think that sumthng will happen to her in ur farthest dream bcoz J is not that material..B4 waiting for Jagat's reply Uday disconnected the call.

Uday didn't gave a second thought to the matter .

After bidding bi to Brij ,Komal and DS he left the mahal bcoz he was to do a lot within the next morning..

It was ni8 and all the family members was startled tohear a gunshot followed by a scream.All rushed out of their room and ?ned eachother abt the orgin of gunshot.Soon Komal's voice came out Manyata….manyata kahan hain,who bahar kyun nahi aaya.She was saying these and tears was flowing from her eyes.

All ran to Manyatas room.It was dim inside.Menaka soon switched on the lights

Komal screamed:Manyata…..

and all was shocked to see pool of blood in bed and in the middle she was lying ….

Soon ambulance came and took her to Hospital…Press was all around to cover up but RP avoided all.DS ,Uday and Brijraj was flooded with phone calls enquiring abt the postponed marriage date n all..Some evn asked directly whether Yuvrani is alive or not.DS n Uday just replied ..No Comments.while Brijraj throw ed the mobile away fed up of irritation.

To be continued'.

Thanks for reading.Hope u like it guys.Pls do leave ur opinions and suggestions'and do hit like.

Love story me khotora?? Very nice update but it a bit short. Who has done this with manayta and j? I'm not finding anyone except akash. Please try to update the next part soon and thanks for the pm.

Wow...awesome part dii...JN kidnapped and M shot...!!!! nahiii...

i think i have read a few chapters of this ff... but somehow read d last chap n dint understand whats going on.. will read all the chapters n comment.. hey yaar aise cliffhanger mein chod diya.. pls update soon.. hope manyata gets well soon.. 😊😊