Manveer SS : NOTE PG 23 [updated]

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Hey guys . U all can call me Anjali 😊 . Well i havent written anything before but i wrote this short story after seeing the last few epis of dek as its getting better . So pls read n do comment 😉


Manveer SS

Chapter 1

She was standing near the window having flashbacks of whatever had happened since she came to the mahal . Everthing since the beginning came to her mind...her meeting akash , watching him through those binoculars , him giving her those sandals , then her fight with her baba , going to the beach , meeting uv , going to club n meetin uv again...everything . She told him that she loves akash but then why was she feeling odd ? What was this weird feeling seeing uday flirt with someone else? She was confused . Why was she feeling so uneasy after seeing him flirt ? Did she really love akash? She was feeling lonely . It was night time . She went outside the mahal to roam in the lonely and desserted streets of jaigarh , lost in her thoughts , not knowing where she was going .

He was happy today . He saw that look in her eyes he wanted to see since he met her . He was looking out at the moon which reminded him of her . it was a full moon night . He just had a sweet talk with his sister unnati . She was jumping up and down in joy like a little kid after observing them at the puja . He smirked thinking about the puja again . He knew she was jealous . Anyone could have told that looking at her face . That was the reason his chotti was so happy today . He knew she was falling for him and that her so-called love akash was just a crush . Thinking of akash he felt a bit uneasy . he wanted to talk to his princess . He picked up his mobile and dialled her number .. then saw the time and kept it back . He dint want to disturb his princess at this hour at night . It was nearly midnight . He went back to thinking of her ' his princess .

She went through the lonely streets not knowing where she was heading to . She was still lost in her thoughts when she saw a group of men walking on the street . She suddenly came back to reality . Not wanting to face anyone she hid behind a tree there and thats when she noticed that she didn't know where she was ...she was lost ...in her own kingdom ..that too on the day she came back . Her mother had told her that this week was very important for her as well as for all the jaigarh people . She looked at her mobile ' no signal , there was forest on both the sides of the street .

He was not able to sleep . He wanted to see her once . He thought for a while and then sneaked out of his room . He quietly passed through corridors wanting to go to her room as soon as he could , but had to stop just reaching the corridor in which her room was located . He had just heard a voice . He peeped out to the corridor and heard someones voice . It was some lady . No one else seemed to be there . Was he imagining things . He pinched himself . No it was in reality . He went a bit farther to hear what the lady was saying . She was talking through her cell phone because no one else was around . He heard her saying in whispers 'no , she is not ... maybe she ran away ' . Her voice was fading . She had gone . The corridor was empty again . He stood there confused for a few minutes ' It wasn't Jais voice then who else could have been here ? ' He came out of his thoughts and opened the door of her room slowly . He peeped in wanting to see his princess . He looked around confused . Empty ...there was no one in the room . Where was she ? How could she go missing so suddenly ? He waited there for a few minutes thinking she might have gone to take a round or something . He waited there for nearly half an hour . Now he was scared . Scared for her . His thoughts were running beyond his control ' Where is she ? Is she alright ? She coudnt have run away ? no . Then what could have happened ? '


Chapter 2 - https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2954870&TPN=8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res!! 🤗


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OMG anjie 🤗 this is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G.

When you sent me the PM, i was breathless-- seriously no joke

why didn't you tell us about your talent earlier? 😆

Anywayz, it was rly great, how you wrote their feelings. And how Manyata didnt care where she was going.

M guessing she gets lost in the forest, or those guys do something and uday comes to save her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice..very good...please continue...😊
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Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

nice..very good...please continue...😊

thnx surya 😊
i will 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz continue ...it's very good😛...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg u wr0te this anji it was fantastic awes0me l0ved it please c0ntinue s0on:) n do pm me weneva u update wel i didnt knew my friend cn write so nice!
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Originally posted by: Love.anjlenirma

Plz continue ...it's very good😛...

Thanks dear 😊
yup ill continue it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MsLuscious


Omg u wr0te this anji it was fantastic awes0me l0ved it please c0ntinue s0on:) n do pm me weneva u update wel i didnt knew my friend cn write so nice!

yess sarah i wrote it 😳 😃
thnx a lot 😊
ill try to update soon 😛
ok i will
hehe now u know it na 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey anjali it's really nice ...love the start...plzzz continue soon

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