The Royal Comedy (FF) pt 8 updated pg 32 - Page 3

😆😆also for the character sketch i ju luved this part

thank u for pairing akash up with some1 else

lol...
very nice :)

NOOO you can't just leave me hanging here !

Originally posted by: BlueRobbin

thats crazy😆

ur just too creative!!

wow, can't wait to read😃

thanks for the pm!!!!

all the best on the new ff!!!

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Thanks...I am glad you liked the concept...will update soon :)

Very nice it's very funny.egarly waiting for next part

LOL 😆😆😆

interesting 😎 plz cont soon😃

Hey guys this is part 1...if you haven't read the character sketch please do so because most of the characters have totally different roles...i hope you guys like it...

PART # 1

It was a Big day in RajMahal... The servants were busy decorating the mahal...there were flowers all over...everything was decorated in lavender color...it was a very special occasion it was Rajkumari Manyata's nineteenth birthday...Rajkumari Manyata was the elder princess of Devgarh estate...the grand birthday bash was Rajmata's idea...Rajmata was the queen of Devgarh and the grandmother of Manyata...Manyata being her first grandchild held a special place in her heart, she always gave Manyata whatever she wanted and that's why Rajkumari Manyata was a little spoilt and stubborn she was a really soft person from inside but from the outside she had a totally different personality she was very stubborn and always got wanted what she wanted...

It was now 8 o'clock in the morning all the servants were at work...all the members of the royal family were still asleep except for one person...he was always up 5 o'clock in the morning...it was Brijraj...since he was a royal doodhwala before marrying Komal he was used to waking up really early...and komal his wife who was the Mahraani of Devgarh hated that habit of his she always used to regret marrying him because he always woke her up really early in the morning...

In Mahraani Komal's room...she was still sleeping when Mahraaj Brijraj doodhwala woke her up which made her really upset...she was really mad at him and so yelled at him...

Komal: (still sleeping)

Brijraj: Mahraani ji...

Komal: (still sleeping...)

Brijraj: Mahraani ji uthiye...subha ho gayi hai...

Komal: (still sleeping)

Brijraj: Mahraani ji...???...(touches her)

Komal: (jumps up)...kon hai...(tries to punch him)...???

Brijraj: (looking scared and hides his face)...Mahraani ji hum hain...

Komal: BRIJRAJ TUM...hum ne kitni baar manaa kiya hai hamein itni jaldi mat uthaya karo...

Brijraj: par Mahraani ji...subha ke aath baj chuke hain...

Komal: haan...toh...???...mujhey konsa doodh batney jaana hai...doodhwaley tum the...pata nahi mujhey aik doodhwaley se kaisey pyaar ho gaya...maasahib ne kitna manaa kiya tha...par nahi...

Brijraj: Mahraani ji...aap aisa kyun keh rahi hain aap jaanti hain na hum aap se kitna pyaar kartey hain...(voice breaking almost crying)...

Komal: arey ab ro kyun rahey ho yaar...hum toh bas yeh keh rahey hain ke ab tum doodhwaley nahi Mahraaj ho...toh subha jaldi uthney ki kya zaroorat hai...tumhe konsa doodh baatney jaaney hai...samjhey...

Brijraj: Ji Mahraani Komal...hum yaad rakhein gey...(voice still breaking)

Komal: ab yeh rona dhona band karo drama queen...aur haan aaj toh Manyata ka janam din hai...kitni saari preparations karni hai...dekho ke preparations kaisi ho rahi hain...aur hum Manyata ko dekhte hain...

Brijraj: nahi...Mahraani ji...aap araam karye Mayata beti ko hum dekh leingey...

Komal: accha...toh ab tum hamein batao gey ke hum kya karein...par chalo theek hai tumhi dekh lena ke Manyata ke liye sab kuch ready hai ya nahi...

The scene shifts to the hall, where all the servants were working and Akash ,the royal driver and Chinky, the Royal Dhoban were having a conversation about Rajkumari Manyata's birthday party preparations...Chicky secretly liked the Akash but Akash had no clue about it...Akash the Royal driver was more like a lost soul most of the time he had no clue what was going around him...he was kind of scared of Chinky because she was after him 24/7...he always tried to ignore her...but Chinky was Chinky she never use to give up...

Chinky: (calls Akash's name)...Oyeee Akash...driver Akash...???

Akash: (tries to ignore her and keeps doing his work)

Chinky: (comes up to her and says)...main tum se baat kar rahi hoon...kaisey ho Akash...(with a cheesy smile and eyes blinking really fast)

Akash: Chinky ji aap...

Chinky: haan mein...aur sunaao aaj kal gadiyaan kaisi chal rahi hain...(cheesy smile again)

Akash: ji Chinky ji...gaadiyaan toh bohat mast chal rahi hain...(looking lost)

Chinky: aacha...chalo good hai...toh phir mujhey kab le ke jaa rahe ho ghumaney...(flirty smile)

Akash: (looking confused)...jee...???

While they were talking Brijraj comes in and starts talking to Akash...Brijraj loved Akash, Akash reminded Brijraj of his youth...according to Brijraj he was exactly like Akash when he was young...

Brijraj: arey Akash beta aur Chicky beta tum dono yahan...

Akash: jee Mahraaj woh mein...

Brijraj (to Akash): Akash beta hum ne aap se kitni baar kaha hai...hamein Mahraj nahi KAKA bulaya kijiye...hamein accha lagta hai...

Akash: jee kaka...hum yaad rakhein gey...

Chinky: (also gets involved)...toh phir kya main bhi aapko kaka bula sakti hoon Mahraaj...???(still smiling)

Brijraj: arey haan beta Chinky kyun nahi...tum bhi hamein kaka bulao...ab se hum tum dono ke kaka hain...

Komal sees Brijraj talking to Chinky and Akash and gets mad at them...

Komal (to Chinky and Akash): hum ne jo aap logon ko kaam diya tha woh kab kiya jayega...(looking mad)...jayiye baaton ki bajaye jaa kar kaam kijiye kitni saari preparations baki hain abhi...

Both Akash and Chinky leave...

Komal gives an icy cold look to Brijraj and leaves...

Brijraj: Areyyy...Mahraani ji hamari baat to suniye...

It was mid day now...Vijay was in his room with Mainka, his room...she was choosing clothes for him to wear at the party in the evening...Mainka had only two dreams, her first dream was to get Vijay married to a "girl" in which surprisingly he had no interest which scared Mainka to death, Vijay was confused himself why he was not interested in girls and that was one of the major goals of his life to find out what he actually wanted...Mainka's second dream was to see Vijay as a king of Devgarh but Vijay had no clue what it even meant to be the king...Vijay was more like a lost child, trying to figure out where exactly he fits in and that was his major goal...

Vijay (to Mainka): Mom...aap phir aagayi...ab kya hai...

Mainka: tameez se baat karo Vijay...aur yeh lo yeh saarey outfits hamein try kar ke dekhao...(hands him a whole big collection of designer clothes)

Vijay: Mom...birthday party hamari uss gadhi behen Manyata ki hai...hamari nahi...

Mainka: shut up Vijay...party main kitni saari beautiful princesses hongi...hum chahtey hain ke tum unn ke saamney bohat acchey lago...aur un mein se kisi ko pasand karo...

Vijay: no way Mom...aap chahti hai hain ke hum unn ajeeb o gareeb princesses' ke saath...OMG...never Mom...

Mainka: Vijay tum hum se zor ka thapad khao gey...samjhey tum...ab bohat hogaya tum khud se apney liye larki pasand karlo nahi toh hum tumhari shaadi apni pasand ki larki se kara deingey...samjhey...

Jay comes into the room...

Jay: hi bua saahib...

Mainka: hello jay beta...samjhao iss ghadhey ko...hamein toh samajh nahi aata ke isse larkiyon ke naam se itna darr kyun lagta...

Vijay: Mom...(complaining...)

Mainka: chup ...(to Jay)...Jay beta samjhayiye issey kuch...hum toh tang aagaye hain iss se...(she leaves)

Vijay: thankGod...matashri left...man what does she want from me...

Jay: AWWW...poor Vijay bhai in crisis what a pity...

Vijay: Jay bhai...tum hamarey zakhmon par namak chirakney aayi hona...hamein pata hai...

Jay: Woah Woah Woah...relax hum toh bas yeh kehney aaye the ke party mein hamari kuch friends aarahi hain...aap kahain toh hum aap se...

Vijay: OUT...abhi out ho jao hamarey room se...pata nahi tum sab kyun hamein qurbaabi ka bakraa bananey ke peechey parey ho...

Jay: Vijay bhai...bua is worried kyun ke aap larkiyon mein zaraa bhi interested nahi hain...kahin aap larkon mein toh...??? (she smiles evilly and leaves...)

Vijay (to himself): larkon mein interested...nahi nahi...

Scene shifts to Manyata's room she is in her room very upset...she does not like the clothes that were made for her and so is complaining to Komal about that...

Komal: Manyata beta...yeh saarey designer kaprey hain beta...specially aap ke liye design kiye gaye hain...

Manyata: nahi maa...hum yeh nahi pehne gey...bilkul nahi pehne gey...

Komal: bachey party kuch hi der main shuru hone wali hai...aap please zid mat kijiye...accha hamein batayiye aap kyun nahi pehnna cha rahi issey...

Manyata: maa iss liye kyun ke ab tak Uday nahi aaya hai...

Komal: Uday beer ka aap ke outfit ke saath kya connection hai Manyata...???

Manyata: Uday ne mujh se promise kiya tha ke mera dress woh specially khud design karwaye ga...

Komal: par beta...Uday toh abhi tak nahi aaye hain...aur wait karne se der ho jaye gi...

Manyata: nahi Maa...bohat khud ko hamara best friend kehta hai na...toh theek hai agar main party main jaaongi toh usski wali dress pehen ke jaaongi...

Vijay hears Komal's and Manyata's conversation and decides to come in the room to annoy Manyata...

Vijay: Awww...kya hua jiji...tumharey BFF ne tumhain ditch kar diya...poor baby...

Manyata: Vijay bhai...kya baat hai...aaj toh aap bilkul chila hua boiled egg lag rahey ho...Kahin bua ne phir aap ke face ki waxing toh nahi ki...aap ko beautiful bananey ke liye...(she laughs)...

Vijay: moti...pehle khud ko toh dekh lo...moti bhains (fat cow) hoti ja rahi ho parathey kha kha ke...

Manyata: ghadey ki pooch mujhey moti kaha teri toh...

She throws the vase at him but he bends down and the Vase hits Brijraj and he falls down...Brijraj was right behind Vijay and was coming inside the room...

Brijraj: AAA...(AAA music playing in the back ground)

Manyata: OOops...baba to gir gaye...baba...

Vijay: Hooo...dekha yeh tum ne jaan ke kiya...gira diya na...

Komal: Brijraj...tum theek ho na...

Brijraj: ji Mahraani...hum theek hain...

Manyata (to Vijay): Vijay bhai ke bachey tera muh todh doongi mein...jhoota kahin ka...main ne jaan ke kab giraya...

Vijay: batmeez aurat...jhoot bolti hai...???

Manyata: kya...aurat...???...aurat kaha mujhey...ruk beta teri khair nahi...(she jumps on Vijay)

Brijraj: beta aap log larye mat...hum theek hain...

Komal: Brijraj...tum theek ho toh uth bhi jao...ya poora din neechey hi baithna hai...(Brijraj gets up)

Both komal and Brijraj leave the room...leaving Vijay and Manyata alone...

Manyata: haan...kya kha aap ne...Aurat...???

Vijay: haan toh...ab toh tum aur bhi bari ho gayi ho...aaj tumhara birthday bhi hai...toh kaisa lag raha hai...AURAT...???

Manyata: haan haan bohat accha lag raha hai "GAY BHAI"...oops...I mean..."VIJAY BHAI"...(smiling)

Vijay: dekh lein gey hum tumhe Manyata ki bacchi...choreingey gey nahi tumhein...(he leaves)

Manyata (to herself): khud ki problem toh solve nahi kar saktey aur hamare mazaak ura rahe hain...seriously...

It was 7 o'clock...the party was almost starting...everyone was ready and gathered at the hall...but Manyata was still in her room and still not dressed up...she was really mad at Uday because of not showing up on time...she was mumbling to herself...

Manyata (to herself): mein hi stupid hoon...jo usse kaha dress laaney key liye...dost kehta hai khud ko...beta aaj toh...AAHHH...kahan ho Uday...I swear agar agaley five minutes mein woh yahan nahi aaya na toh woh nahi bachey ga...apni rifle se khud ussey shoot kar doongi...and now the countdown begins...main five tak count karoongi...aur agar woh nahi aaya...toh beta apni khair manao...1...2...3...4...

The door opens and someone comes in...

Uday: sorry princess...sorry...I'm really sorry ...

Manyata: (throws pillows at him)...sorry haan...sorry...itna late...(still hitting him with pillows)

Uday: come on yaar...kaha na sorry...ab kya jaan logi bachey ki...(teasingly)

Manyata: haan plan toh yahi tha hamara...bachey ki jaan leney ka...

Uday: (holds his ear)...sorry baba...kaha na...really really sorry...

Manyata: aik toh meray birthday walay din late...aur toh aur tum ne abhi tak mujhey wish bhi nahi kiya...and I call you my best friend...

Uday: sorry bola na baby...aur haan...HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRINCESS...(he hugs her)...

Manyata: thankyou BOO BOO...(she smiles)...acha toh batao kahan the...girl friend ke saath issi liye best friend ko birthday wish karna bhool gaye...right...???

Uday: kyun...(pulls her close)...tum jealous ho rahi ho kya...???...(with a flirty smile)

Manyata: main aur jealous...sure...waisey tumhari yeh nayi girl friend hai kon...(curiously)...

Uday: Manyata tumharey jitni age nahi hai uss se ziyada toh boyfriends change kar chuki ho tum...aur humse pooch rahi ho girlfriend ke baarey mein...

Manyata: ab itna bhi nahi okay...

Uday: yeah right...har week toh tumharey boyfriends change hotey hain...

Manyata: okay fine...haan hain meray boyfriends bohat saarey...kya karoon sochti hoon sab ko chance milna chahiye right...(smiles)

Uday: princess...really tumhein unn mein se kisi mein bhi zara bhi interest nahi hai phir kyun...

Manyata: do you smell something...

Uday: yes your perfume...it's really nice...(flirty smile)

Manyata: Thanks...I know I smell good...but hamein toh...ummm...jalney ki smell aarahi hai...Uday tum jal toh nahi rahey...(teasingly)

Uday: (pins her to the wall and comes really close to her)...princess...hamein unn losers se jalney ki kya zaroorat hai...hum jaantey hain ke tumhein unn sab mein koi interest nahi hai...tumhe toh kisi aur mein interest hai...kyun...???

Manyata: kis mein...???

Uday: yahi toh hum pooch rahe hain princess...(he comes even closer and Manyata gets uncomfortable)...

Manyata: (whispers)...Uday...

Uday: princess...hum tumse...(Manyata's phone rings...)...

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 1...hope you guys liked it... suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa😊