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i am right here..lmaoo🤣Originally posted by: princess_T
Alissa where r u..?
Where's the update..?Waiting eagerly...Continue as soon as possible..
Thanks dear...will continue soon :)Originally posted by: -Priya01
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Thanks buddy :)Originally posted by: sabzkhan
supah i love ur ff its really dfrnt frm da original story
Hey guys this is part 8...i hope you'll like it...
PART # 8
Manyata: (to herself)...HOOO...Uday ki itni himmat...meri calla ko ignore kiya...woh bhi raat ke do bajey...aisa bhi konsa busy hai...mujhey ignore kiya...uugghh...how dare hi...Rajkumari Manyata ko ignore karney ki gustakhi ki hai aap ne yuvraaj udaybeer singh...ab hamein pata toh lagana hi padega ke akhir aap kis ke saath busy hain...(she grabs the car keys)...
On the other side...in Udays suite...
Uday (to himself): there goes the keys...ab madam yeh pata lagayen gi ke aakhir hum ne calls ignore kyun ki...princess on her way to meet her prince...aao sweetheart...ab miley ga M baby ko sabsey bada shock...she will be burned...hahahaha...(evil smirk)...
It was now 2 in the morning...Manyata arrives at Udays hotel and goes into his suite...she tries to get into Udays room and finds it lock and gets suspicious...
Manyata: (tries to open the door and finds it locked)...LOCKKK...???...yeh door locked kyun hai...???...aisa bhi konsa private kaam kar raha hai yeh Uday ka bacha...???...(she knocks on the door but no one opens it)...haillaa hud hoti hai...abhi tak nahi khola...(she bangs really hard on door she yells)...UDAY KE BACHEY DOOR KHOLO...jaldi bahar nikalo...Udayyy...ab agar door nahi khola na toh i swear mein door todh doongi...kholooo...
She goes back and runs towards the door trying to break it and just when she was going to hit the door Uday opens the door and she hits him (Uday says WOAH WOAH WOAH..!!!!)... and they both fall on his bed...Uday was on the bed and Manyata was on the top of him...they both were lost into each other's eyes...Manyata forgot about the world around her and the reason for her coming over to Uday's house...she was lost in him...she unknowingly caresses his face and kept on staring at his lips...just when she was about to kiss him...Saasha comes out of Uday's bathroom and says...
Saasha: baby yeh awaaz kaisi...(she looks at Manyata and gets confused)...yeh yahan...???
Manyata realizes Saasha's presence and hits Uday hard on the chest and gets up...she was burning with anger...
Uday (to himself): not bad...not bad...exact timing...aahhh man this never gets old...(he smirks)
Manyata (to saasha): TU...YAHAN...ISS WAQT...???
Saasha: yeh sawaal toh hamein tumse poochna chahiye Rajkumari Manyata...
Manyata: saasha ki bachi...tu khud ko samajhti kya hai...teri himmat kaisey hui uday ke room mein ghussney ki...
Saasha: excuse me...yeh tum kon hoti ho poochney waali...tum Uday ki biwi ho kya...ya phir girlfriend...ho kon...???
Uday: (Uday smiles at Saasha's question)...(to himself)...Good job saasha...correct question...
Manyata: main jo bhi hoon...par tu kon hai haan...dine kahin ki...tujhey kisney permission di...Uday ke room mein ghussney ki...bol kamini...
Saasha: oh hello...(before she could say anything Manyata attacks on him)...ouchhh...chorro mujhey...
Uday: (tries to stop Manyata)...princess...princess..choro saasha ko...ussey hum ne bulaya tha..choro lag jayegi saasha ko...(he pulls her away from saasha)
Manyata: (to uday)...tum ne bulaya iss kamini ko...woh bhi iss waqt...aik kamarey mein akele...???
Uday: (ignores Manyata's question and talks to Saasha)...Saasha baby...I think you should leave now hum tumse baad mein baat kartey hain...(she nodds and leaves)...
After she leaves Manyata looks at Uday with bloody red eyes filled with anger and dissappointment...
Uday (to Manyata): kya...ab aisey kyun ghoor rahi ho...bhaga diya na bechaari ko...???
Manyata: bechari..???...btw tum exactly kar kya rahey the uss bechari ke saath jo itna bhi time nahi tha ke mera call recieve karo...bolo...(burning with anger)
Uday: oh hello...ab mein kya boloon...busy thay hum iss liye calls nahi recieve ki...seriously...itna drama karney ki kya zaroorat thi...
Manyata: (she holds his caller)...itney busy thay ke mujhey hi bhool gaye...haan...best friend ho na meray...best friends aisa toh nahi kartey...
Uday: exactly...hum tumharey best friend hain...koi boyfriend ya husband nahi...tum aisey sawaal kyun pooch rahi ho jaisey hamari wife ho ya phir to be wife ho...(he gets closer)
Manyata: kya matlab...(backing up)...
Uday: matlab yeh ke tumhein itna hyper honey ki kya zaroorat thi...tum thori na humse pyaar karti ho jo tumhe itna bura lag raha hai...(with a flirty smile...still moving closer)
Manyata: main woh...
Uday: tum kya...pyaar karti ho...???
Manyata: nahi woh...(she hits the wall behind...now there was no place to move)
Uday: nahi kya...???...pyaar nahi hai sirf dosti hai right...ya phir...kuch aur..
Manyata: Uday tum mujhey distract mat karo...pehley sawaal main ne poocha tha...meri calls ignore kyun ki...???
Uday: sweetheart hamarey paas aur bhi important kaam hotey hain...Saasha is such a nice girl...I think...I am in love...(with a flirty smile)
Manyata: (shocked)...KYAA...saasha se..???
Uday: hum ne saasha ka naam toh nahi liya...par agar tum keh rahi ho toh ho sakta hai ke woh larki saasha hi ho...I mean tum hamein itney acchey se jo jaanti hoo...(teasingly)
Manyata: SAASHA SE KYUN...tumhara dimaag toh theek hai na...
Uday: kyun saasha kyun nahi...wait a sec...kahin tum jealous toh nahi ho rahi...naaa...tum jealous kyun ho gi...tum thori na humse pyaar karti ho...(with a flirty smile)...ya phir karti ho...???
Manyata: Udayyy bass...bohat ho gaya...main tumse bohat gussa hoon...jaooo...mujhey tumse koi baat nahi karni...main jaa rahi hoon...(she turns around to leave but Uday pulls her back and gab her waist)
Uday: hamarey sawaal ka jawaab diye bina hi jaa rahi ho...not fair...(whispers in her ears)...kahin tumhein humse Pyaar toh nahi...???...(Manyata looks in his eyes with a shock)
Manyata: (no reply, still shocked)
Uday: (with a smile)...kya hua baby...itni shocked kyun lag rahi ho???...hum thori na keh rahey hain that you love me...hum toh sirf pooch rahey hain...aur waisey bhi hum toh saasha se...
Uday lets her go...she was still staring at him...
Uday: princess...raat kaafi ho gayi hai...akeley mat drive karna...driver tumhe chor aayega...bye...(he waves at her with a smirk)...
Manyata: saasha se kya...???
Uday: haan???...oh that...hum keh rahey the saasha is smart, sexy, hot, intelligent...she's got it all, i think i'm falling for her...
Manyata gets super mad at Uday's words and in her anger she loses her sense...she goes up to Uday holds his collar and says...
Manyata: falling for her ke bachey...falling ka bara shauk hai...(she grabs his collar and starts kissing him)
Manyata out of nowhere jumps on Uday and starts kissing him, Uday knew how to make Manyata super jealous but he, not even in his wildest dream ever thought that Manyata would react in such a way, for him it was cherry on top of the cake...Uday had a shocking smile on his face while Manyata was deperately kissing him...Manyata was on fire she was not willing to let go but Uday being one smart ass had to break the kiss and not get carried away in the moment...so he pushes away Manyata and says her name out loud to bring her back from the la la land...
Uday: (looking shocked)...Manyata???...yeh tum kya kar rahi thi...
Manyata: (realize what she just did...she turned red as a tomato and was shocked with way she reacted)...uumm...
Uday: princess...tum ne abhi abhi...kya...(Manyata turns around before he could finish what he was planning on saying)
Manyata slowly starts walking out the door, on her way she gets bumped into Unnati who questions her for being there so late at night...
Unnati: (to Manyata) Manyata yum yahan iss waqt...sab theek toh haina...
Manyata: (no reply)
Unnati: (she touches Manyata's shoulder which scares Manyata)...kya hua why are you so lost..???...(Manyata was still looking shocked)...kahin dada ne toh kuch...???
Uday: (standing inside the room enjoying the conversation)...(to himself)...good job choti, good question...(he had a evil smirk on)
Manyata (to unnati): nn..n..n..nahiii toh...kuch nahi hua...aur unnati tum saari raat yahan wahan kyun ghoomti rehti ho...
Unnati: (looking confused)...hum toh bas shor ki wajah se uth gaye thay...hum ne kya kiya..???
Manyata: (looks at Uday who was still smirking, she get super nervous)...(to unnati)...accha unnati main jati hoon...(she hugs unnati and runs out)
But before leaving, she turns around to look at uday...she looked very confused...she then leaves in a hurry...
After Manyata leaves, Unnati looks at Uday in confusion...
Unnati (to Uday): dada...yeh kya tha...???
Uday: choti teer nishaney oeh lag gaya...(with an evil smirk)
Unnati: HOOO...dada...aapne ???...you are just too much dada...bechari Manyata...(she leaves)
Uday (to himself): wohoo...poor baby...bohat bura lar raha hai hamein tumharey saath yeh game khelney main...par tumhe iss jealous mode mein dekhney main maza bhi bohat aaraha hai...pyaar toh tumhe hai bas confess karna baaki hai...hojaye ga...hojaye ga...confession bhi ho jayega...(evil smirks)
The scene shifts to rajmahal where Manyata gets back she runs in her room hiding her face, and locks inside herself in the room...
The next day...Brijraaj was looking for Jay again, to talk to her about Akash and fix a date for them...
Brijraaj: (looking around)...JAY BITIYA...JAY BITIYA...kahan hain aap..???
Jay bumps into Brijraaj while walking around...
Jay: OUCHHH...kya hai dad...eyes hai ya aaluuu ???
Brijraaj: (looking very happy)...hailla...jay bitiya hum aapko hi dhoondh rahey thay...hamein aapse kuch poochna na tha...
Jay: jaldi blo dad...hamien Kay aur Elle ke saath movie dekhney jaana hai...
Brijraaj: bitiya..aapko Akash driver kaisa lagta hai...???
Jay: kon woh rotu...???...hahahhahaha...jab dekho aapki tarah rota rehta hai...theek hi hai woh...
Brijraaj: please bitiya hamari aik baat maan lijiye...please please...
Jay: oh God...dad ab app mat ro please...bolo kya hai...
Brijraaj: Bitiya Akash driver ke saath date peh chali jayiye...(looking very scared)
Jay: (in shock)... KYAAA...DAD DIMAAG KHRAAB HO GAYA HAI KYA...hum aur uss bevakoof driver ke saath...what crap...
Brijraaj: Bitiya aap Akash driver ke saath date peh jao na...please bitiya...aapney baba ki last wish puri kar do please please...(begging n crying)
Jay: aur agar mom ko pata chal gaya...hahhhahahaah...dad she'll eat you alive...
Brijraaj: please bitiya...mahraani ji ko kuch mat bolna...please...hum itni jaldi marna nahi chahtey...aur agar hum mar gaye toh hamarey Akash driver aur Chivky dhoban ka kya hoga...(starts crying loudly)...
Jay: HAILLLAA...(in frustration)...Okay fine...theek hai...par agar uss majnu ne ziyada masti ki na date pe toh God promise uss ka munh todh doongi...
Brijraaj: nahi bitiya...aap Akash betey ko mariye ga mat...woh kya hai na woh bohat kamzor hai...kahin ussey zor ki na lag jaye...woh date peh aapko bilkul tang nahi karega...
Jay: whatever dad...(she leaves)...
Brijraaj: (wiping his tears)...Akash betey ki toh nikal padi...balle balle...shawa shawa...
Scene shifts to the hallway, everyone was gathered outside Manayta's room...her room was still locked and Vijay bhai spread news that she is commiting suicide...which freaked out everyone...
Vijay bhai: moti bhains...door kholo...hamein bhi dekhna hai ke suicide kaisey kartey hain...
Manyata (to Vijay bhai): (a voice comes from inside the room)...suicide ke bachey...teri toh bhoot ban ke khabar loongi...
Komal comes running to Manyata's room and sees it locked and Vijay bhai standing out side the room...
Komal (to Vijay bhai): kya ho raha hai yeh sab...???
Vijay bhai (to komal): woh mami saa, M bhai suicide karney waali hai...heheheheheh...
Komal: (freaks out) KYAAA...???
TO BE CONTINUED...
So this was part 8...hope you guys liked it... and sorry for the delay... guys please do leave your comments...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading...Thanks again...
Love,
Alissa 😊