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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is my 1st OS...I'm a new writer...don't know that u will like it or not...but if u don't plz forgive me
💔Heart...broken💔😛😉
It was a Sunday,the day before the glorious moment when Manyata will be announced as the heiress of Devgadh.That day she was coming back to home from UV's hotel after having a cute & close date with him;she was smiling😃 & blushing😳.She was passing by the area from where Akash fell down...she saw one of the most strangest thing of her life😲;;;;Akash was hugging Chikky & C was crying holding him.It was absurd and Manyata was also shocked😲😲...but she didn't cared much as she have her most loved UV with her.In the the evening both Devgadh & Jaigadh were celebrating together because of the next day;suddenly-
Akash:Moniya...dekho tumhari Akash wapase aagaya...
Manyata
:main janti hoon ki tum wapase aa gaye...waise tum itnee din thee kaha???🥱🥱
Akash:yeh baat tum uss kamine Udaybeer se pucho...uss kamine nei mujhe phek ...
Before he could finish,there were two strong slaps on his face...😃😃
Manyata:don't u dare to say anything more abt my Uday..bho bohot good & sweet insaan hai..or agar ussne tumhe phek bhi diya..then also he did the right thing...I wish I could do that...tum Chikky ke paas jao...wo hi tumhe deserve karti hai😛
Akash:Moniya..tum iss Udaybeer ka side le rahe ho...tum to mujhse pyaar kerti thi😕
Manyata:past is past...pehele maine galti ki..aab sudhaar rahi hoon..now get out😡😛
Akash:per moniya..mere baat to suno!!!
Manyata:guards..plz bhaiya ji ko bahar throw kijiye..😛😛😡
Akash:bhaiyaaa😲
Manyata:
bhaiyaa ji...oops apko bhaiyaa pasand nehi aya!!😛toh mein apko dadaji bulaooo😉😉...whatever...guards plz dadaji ko bahar phek dijiye😛
Everyone was shocked at this conversation...nd brust out a laughter seeing the face of Akash when the guards took him & threw him out of the palace as if he was a roadside dog.Thus the heart of our dadaji was broken😉

May be you didn't like it...I know it's not so good...but if u liked it plz press the like button comments r welcomed.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol nice 🤣
dadaji n chicky ki jodi ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahahaha i loved this OS a lot!! hahah truly amazing, would like to see more of your OS's please :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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REALLY CUTE & FUNNY😆😆😆.THANKS 4 THE PM.LOVE U.PLEASE POST MORE & WILL MEET 2MORROW.😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really funny 🤣 I would love to read more of ur os'!! Thanks for the pm!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃😃 so much likes & comments!!!thanx😃...more comments r welcomed😃😃
Edited by ultravioletray - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very cute and funny keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahahaha. awesome :D ...
Lol, Chikki weds her Dadaji !! Eww. but Atleast we have ManVeer. ;)
You should definitely write more .. great work !! :) xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a lot of comments😃😃..glad u liked it...more comments r welcomed😃😃
Edited by ultravioletray - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really very funny...🤣🤣
Very nice..!!!!

oops really sorry commented twice...
anyways nice post!!
Edited by Kruths97 - 13 years ago

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