You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 42

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Alissa where's the update dear<div></div>

It's ready...finally...yay...but it's 3 am here do I will update it first thing in the morning...thank you sooo much for dealing with such a crack head like me...I am crazy lazy...thank you for being so patient with me...ur the best...*wiping imaginary tears*...
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Oye hoye alissa so romentic. Update soon.

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It's ready...finally...yay...but it's 3 am here do I will update it first thing in the morning...thank you sooo much for dealing with such a crack head like me...I am crazy lazy...thank you for being so patient with me...ur the best...*wiping imaginary tears*...

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waiting...dear...alissa i thnk by the time u'll update it'll b ni8 over here😭

i am updating it right now...give me like 15-20 min😉
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i am updating it right now...give me like 15-20 min😉

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Hey guys finally...FINALLY...i am here with part 16...please no no tomatoes, rotten eggs or banana peels...I know I am the biggest lazyy bumm...i will explain it after (do read my explanation...pretty please😳)...so with out any further delay...I present you part 16..👏👏..enjoy...😉

PART # 16

Two days went by really fast in preparations and all...today was the day of haldi...DS decided that Uday and Manyata are going to have a combined haldi...but as per Manyata's wish there would be a divider between the two of them so that he would not be able to see her...

Manyata was in her room...she was busy deciding what to wear...she all of a sudden started to feel dizzy...her head was spinning...she sat on the side of her bed and was holding her head when Jay came inside...

Jay: Manyata jij...kya hua...you okay...???

Manyata: (facing downwards)...no reply...

Jay: (goes to Manyata and puts her hand on her shoulder)...Jiji...???

Manyata: hhhmmm...

Jay: are you alright...???

Manyata: pata nahi jay...chakkar se aa rah hai...

Jay: dizzyness...???

Manyata: haan...pata nahi pechle kuch dino se achanak se chakkar aajaate hain...may be it's because of stress...I don't know...

Jay: I think you should get it checked out...hum Mom ko bata dete hain...

Manyata: nahi nahi Jay...Maa bekaar mein pareshaan ho jayen gi...

Jay: okay...as you wish...

Vijay bhai comes in Manyata's room also...

Vijay: tum dono yahan meeting kar rahi ho...aur hamein bulaya bhi nahi...I'm hurt...hamein toh lagta hai ke jab se tum dono dushman se dost bane ho hamein bhool hi gaye ho...

Jay: AWWW...Vijay bhai...is that even possible...

Manyata: Jay theek keh rahi hai...bhala aap ko bhi koi bhool sakta hai kya...

Vijay: you are right...hum koi bhoolne wali cheez thori na hain...btw...hamein pata chala ke hamari jiji Uday se milne se inkaar kar rahi hai...

Jay: I know right...rasam n all that crap...seriously Manyata even DS doesn't believe in all that...then why do you...???

Vijay: arey Jay bhai...tum bhool gayi kya hamari jiji kisi gaon ki gori types hai...

Manyata: main ne yeh sab rasam ke liye nahi kiya...samjhey...

Jay: what...rasam ke liye nahi kiya toh kyun kiya...???

Manyata: badla...as in what you guys call revenge...

Jay: revenge...are you serious...???

Manyata: haan...badla...Uday se badla...uss ne mujhey bohat tang kiya hai pechle kuch dino...iss liye sazaa toh usse milni hi chahiye...kyun theek kaha na...

Vijay: You are so evil M bhai...(evil grin)

Manyata: I TELL YOU...

Jay: wow...aaj finally hamein lag raha hai ke tum sach mein hamari hi behen ho...

Vijay: btw...haldi ke function ke liye tumhe ready hone ke liye kaha gaya hai...Uday bhi aata hi hoga...

Manyata: par...(Jay cuts her off)

Jay: don't worry me and Vijay bhai got this...Uday ko tumse milne nahi deingey...aur woh tumhara special curtain woh bhi aa chuka hai...

Vijay: aaj toh bohat maza aayega...bechara uday usse pata bhi nahi hai uss ke saath kya kya hone wala hai...(evil smile)

The scene shifts to Uday's room...where Unnati comes to see if he is ready...

Unnati: Dada...dada...kahan ho aap...???

Uday: hum yahan hain Unnati...

Unnati: yeh kya hai...hamein toh laga ke aap ready honge...aur aap ab tak yunhi ghoom rahe hain...

Uday: hum toh ready hain...chalo...

Unnati: (stops him)...dada aapko yeh toh pata hai na ke aaj aapki haldi hai...aur yeh aap kya pehen ke jaa rahe hain...

Uday: kyun hum aisey nahi ja sakte...

Unnati: nahi...nahi ja sakte...you know aapko woh white wali sherwani pehnni thi...waisey bhi aapko kurta toh uttarna hi padega...haldi jo lagani hai...(she smiles)

Uday: oh okay...

Unnati: and you know dada...jo haldi aapko lagey gi na wahi phir bhabhi ko lagey gi...isn't that so cool...hamein komal aunty ne bataya...

Uday: thats quiet intersting...phir toh aaj Manyata ko hamarey saamney aana hi padega...aisey hum usse chorege nahi...

Unnati: dada...bhabhi se milne mein hum aapki help kareingey...

Uday: par Unnati carefully...hamein pura yaqeen hai...un teeno bhai behno ne zarror koi na koi plan banaya hoga...

Unnati: you mean Bhabhi, jay aur Vijay banna...teeno aik team mein...hamarey khilaaf...phir toh bhool jayiye...aap bhabhi tak kabhi nahi pohancho gey...

Uday: nahi Unnati...Manyata ko itni asaani se jeetney nahi deingey...tum Jay aur vijay banna ko sambhalna aur hum Manyata ko sambhalein gey

Unnati: kya...Vijay banna aur Jay dono...dada aap toh jaantey hain ke jay shaitaan ki khala hai...yeh hum se nahi hoga...

Uday: come on Unnati tum hamari behen ho...tumhe yeh kaam toh karna hi padega...

Unnati: okay dada...par bohat mushkil...

Uday: you'll do it...I trust you...

Scene shifts to rajmahal...where komal is trying to convince Manyata to wear a dress...

Manyata: nahi...Maa please mujhey yeh nahi pehenna...

Komal: kyun beta itni pyaari saari hai...

Manyata: iska blouse toh dekho...peechey toh kuch hai hi nahi...aur sleeves ka toh dur dur tak naam o nishaan hi nahi hai...

Mainka comes in the room...

komal (to mainka): mainka ab aap hi samjhayiye inn ko...yeh maan hi nahi rahi...

Mainka: aapki mom theek keh rahi hain Manyata...haldi main saari hi pehente hain...aur yeh saari toh specially aapke design ki gayi hai...

Manyata: par iska blouse...nahi mujhey nahi pehenna...

Komal: beta...agar blouse asisa nahi hoga toh aapko haldi kaisey lagain gey...please zid mat kijiye...

Mainka: Manyata...aap jaanti hain hum ne apni shaadi peh aisi hi saari pehnni thi...

Manyata: par...

Komal: Manyata...Daisahib se aapko daat khani hai...nahi na...toh bas jaldi se isse pehen lijiye...rasam bas shuru hone hi wali hai...

Mainka: haan bhabhi hum bhi yahi kehne aaye the...Uday aur uss ki family aa chuki hai...hamein bhi ab neehe chalna chahiye...

Komal (to manyata): beta jaldi se ready hojayiye...hum neeche ja rahe hain...aap bhi aajayiye...

The haldi rasam was about to begin...Manyata came downstairs she had a dopatta over her head and it was covering her face so that Uday won't be able to see her...they both sat at their places and the rasam began...everyone came up to them and put the haldi on them...Uday looked restless...he kept on peeking on to the other side to see manyata...but Manyata kept on hiding behind the people...

Uday (to himself): princess...aaj tum nahi bach paogi...

The rasam ended and Manyata told komal that she wanted to go her room...so Jay took Manyata to her room...and Uday on the other side decide to go to Manyata's room...

he goes to the room but sees Vijay bhai outside as a watchman...he was suppose to stop Uday from coming into the room...he sees Vijay bhai and then turns around to go back he sees Unnati coming that way...

Unnati: kya hua dada...app bhabhi se nahi miley...

Uday: nahi chutki...yeh Vijay banna bahar pehra dey rahe hain...

Unnati: oh...okay...kyun na hum ja ke Vijay bhai ko distract karein...lekin room mein bhabhi ke saath Jay bhi toh hai...

Uday: chutki Jay se keh do ke Jaggadh usse dhoond raha hai...

Unnati: okay got it...jaisey hi jay room se bahar aaye aap andar chale jana...

Unnati goes to Vijay bhai...

Unnati: whats up Vijay banna...???

Vijay: hey Unnati...tum yahan...???(suspiciously)

Unnati: yup...aaphi ko dhoondh rahe the...aapki mom aapko bula rahi thein...

Vijay: are you sure...mom hamein bula rahi thi...

Unnati: hundred percent sure...I think you should go...

Vijay: okay...toh phir hum jaate hain...(he leaves)

Unnati signals Uday that Vijay is gone and she's going to send Jay out now...she goes in...

Unnati: hey bhabhi...hi jay...

Jay: hi unnati...

Manyata: accha hua Unnati tum aagayi...

Unnati (to Jay): jay...jaggadh was looking for you...he even asked me about you...

Jay: oh crap..hum toh bhool hi gaye...Jaggadh hamara wait kar raha hai...hum jaate hain..(she leaves)

Manyata: so unnati...kya haal hai aapke dada ka...(teasingly)

Unnati: bhabhi not fair...becharey dada itne restless ho rahe hain...aur aap yahan hans rahi hain...

Manyata: all is fair in love and war...thora pareshaan karna toh banta hai...

Unnati: poor dada...ohh hamein yaad aaya...komal aunty ne hamein kuch kaam diya tha...hum abhi aate hain...

Manyata: theek hai jaldi aana...(she leaves)

Manyata (to herself): yeh aik aik kar ke sab chale gaye...ab main kya karoon...

Door opens and a voice says...

Uday: hum hain na princess...phir kisi aur ki kya zaroorat hai...

Manyata: tum...(she covers her face with dopatta)...tum andar kaisey aaye...???

Uday: come on princess...darwazey se aur kis se...

He starts coming close to her and she starts backing up...

Manyata: yeh cheating hai...main ne kaha tha na ke tum mujhey nahi dekh sakte...(her dopatta falls)

Uday: (still coming closer)...meri jaan...apni hone wali biwi se milne mein konsi cheating...(he corners her to the wall)...

Manyata: hone wali...abhi hui nahi hoon...(he comes even closer to kiss her but she puts her hand over his mouth and he kisses her hand...)

Uday moves her to the side starts kissing her on the neck...she gets chills and closes her eyes...he turns her around so now her back was facing him...he wraps his arms around her waist...Manyata was getting uncomfortable as his arms touched her bare waist...he starts kissing her back...

Manyata: (whispers)...please uday...

Uday does not stop and continues kissing all over her naked back...she was lost in him...she was getting carried away...it was as if she was craving for it but at the same time she was afraid that she would go too far...she decides to move forward...as she moves forward...the dori of her blouse gets stuck in Udays shirt button and because of walking forward it stretches and opens up...she felt the dori slowly loosening up and she stops right away...

Uday notices her dori was open...Manyata looked really embarrassed...he turns her around... comes closer to her and ties her dori...Manyata was feeling dizzy again...and she loses her balance but Uday catches her in his arms and makes her sit on the bed...

Uday: yeh kya princess...ab toh tum bhi hamein dekh kar idhar udhar girne lagti ho...

Manyata: (no reply)

Uday: kya hua princess...aaj toh bara sharma rahi ho...

Manyata: (no reply and was facing downwards...she felt a little weird)...

Uday: (gets worried)...princesss...kya hua...

Manyata suddenly gets up and runs to the bathroom...she closes the door behind...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Now comes my explanation...once again...S-O-R-R-Y...😭..no seriously sorry...i admit i have been very lazy lately...its just that i am always so distracted..😆.all my fault...my stupid heads fault..😡.although there is a list of people i wanna thank...since they have been torturing and busting my ass every now and then to make me update...so here goes the list...👏👏👏

Fia, Wendy, Jehan, Annysyed, AKlover101 (Fizza), Aklover-16 (Riya), sirjee (sonu dii), snow dream, Oyeshee, and extremely sorry if i am missing anyone...so a BIG thank you to you guys.👏👏👏..and a big big hug..🤗...love u all...muahhh...Peace...😉

please leave your comments...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😉

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago

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