You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 20

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Awesome FF 👏
I'm having a feeling that Manyata's pregnant.
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Originally posted by: fia21

Awesome FF👏
I'm having a feeling that Manyata's pregnant.
If that's the case then the story ahead is going to be really interesting 😊
Can't wait. Update soon!!

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Hey dear, when r u updating next part
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Hey guys, this is part 12...sorry for the delay, finals are coming so busy studying and all...

PART # 12

While Unnati was talking to Jay on the phone...Uday enters the room and hears some of their conversation...but he doesn't really understand what they were talking about...He calls Unnati's name...

Uday: chutki...???

Unnati: (she turns around quickly)...Dada...aap...one second...

Unnati (to Jay on the phone): Jay um tumhe call back kareingey...

Jay: Uday ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye...aur jald se jald Manyata ko plan mein shamil kar lo...okay...

The phone gets disconnected...

Uday (to unnati ): chutki...kis ko kya na pata chal jaye...???

Unnati: haann...??? (looking scared)

Uday: abhi abhi tum Jay se kya keh rahi thi phone pe...???

Unnati: ohhh...Jay...nothing special Dada...just the...ummm...about the outfit...(trying her best not to show that she was hiding something)

Uday: are you sure Chutki...???

Unnati: of coarse Dada...(she smiles)

Unnati: achha Dada hamein club jaana hai...hum aap se baad mein milte hain...byeee...

Uday: sure...bye...(and she leaves)

Uday was left alone in the room...he was sure Unnati was hidding something...and he thought why was Jay calling...he was sure that there's something fishy going on and Jay must be the master mind...

Uday (to himself): Unnati hum se zaroor kuch chupa rahi thi...aur Jay ki call...hamein yaqeen hai ke Jay ka hi koi plan hoga...aur iss baat ka pata toh aik hi insaan laga sakta hai...(he had evil smile face)...

Later in the day, Uday goes to Rajmahal to meet Manyata...He reaches the mahal and looks for Manyata but can't find her there...dadisahib sees him there...

Dadisahib: arey Uday beta hum...aap kab aaye...

Uday: (he bends down to take her blessings)...jee dadisahib...hum woh Manyata se milne aaye the...

Dadisahib: par beta...Manyata toh Unnati ke saath hain na...

Uday: kya...Unnati ke saath...???

Dadisahib: haan beta...woh club gaye hain i think...aapko nahi maloom...???

Uday: woh actually Dadisahib...hum bhool gaye the...

Dadisahib: its okay beta...accha hi hua aap aaye...hum hi aap se miliye...

Uday: jee Dadisahib...waisey Dadi sahib Jay kahan hai...kafi excited hogi na woh kal uss ki engagement jo hai...(curiously)...

Dadisahib: sahi kaha aap ne...Jay toh bohat khush hain aur unhein dekh kar hum bhi bohat khush hain...beta filhaal toh woh bhi Unnati aur Manyata ke saath club gayi hain...

Uday: oh girls day out...chalo accha hai...ho sakta hai iss tarah Manyata aur Jay ke differences kuch kum ho jayen...(he smiles)

Dadisahib: beta hum bhi yahi umeed karte hain...

The scene shifts to club where Unnati and Jay are trying to convince Manyata about the "girls bachelors party"...

Manyata: KYA...yeh bachelors party kya hoti hai...

Jay (to Unnati): dekha hum ne kaha tha na...chawl walon ko bachelors party ke barey mein nahi pata hota hai...ab please iss loser ko explain karo...

Manyata: Jay ki bachi tu chup reh samjhi...

Manyata (to Unnati): batao na Unnati...yeh bachelors party kya hoti hai...

Unnati: Manyata bhabhi...it's a party for people who are about to get married...it's mostly for guys par jay chahti hai ke hum bhi bachelor party rakhein...

Manyata: oh...accha...par uss party mein hoga kya...

Jay: OH GOD...dance, drinks and all okay...kya aur bhi kuch poochna hai...

Unnati (to Jay): Jay...don't tell me ke tum ne male dancers ko bhi bulaya hai...

Jay: what do you think babe...(she smiles)

Unnati: hamein pata hona chahiye tha...kyun hamein phasaney ke peechey padi ho...

Jay: come on Unnati ab tum itna dramatic mat ho...it's no big deal...

Manyata: aik minute...dancer...Male dancer...???

Unnati: haan bhabhi...wahan par dancer bhi hongey...

Manyata: nahi...main kisi bachelor party mein nahi jaaongi...agar Uday ko pata chal gaya...

Jay: seriously...Manyata tum Uday se kitna darti ho...jaisey woh tumhe kya hi jayega...

Manyata: mujhey Uday se darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...okay...

Unnati: bhabhi...haan keh dijiye...please meray liye...

Jay: rehne do Unnati...isse Uday ka darr hai...

Manyata: (thinks a little)...theek hai...I'm in...

Jay looks really happy and Unnati smiles...

In Rajmahal, Uday and Vijay bhai are having a conversation about the girls...and what they are up to...

Vijay (to Uday): hamein pata tha ke daal mein kuch kala hai...

Uday: Vijay banna...iss ka matlab aapko pata hai ke Jay kya plan kar rahi hai...

Vijay: hum sure toh nahi hain...par hum ne Jay ko phone pe baat karte hue suna tha...woh dancers ke baarey mein kuch keh rahi thi...

Uday: dancers...???...(suspiciously)

Vijay: ohhh...ab hum samjhe...Uday kahin tum bhi to wahi nahi soch rahe jo hum soch rahe hain...

Uday: Vijay banna aap theek soch rahe hain...hum ne bhi Unnati ko baat karte sunna tha...woh keh rahi thi ke kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye...

Vijay: Jay bhai...i think iss party ka idea Jay bhai ka hi hai...aisey wild aur evil ideas usse hi aatey hain...

Uday: you are right Vijay banna...ab aap dikhiye ga ke hum kya karte hain...bohat maza aaney wala hai...

Vijay: I TELL YOU...

It was almost nine at night...Manyata was still with Unnati...Unnati came back to the hotel because she had to drop some stuff off and get ready...bachelor party was latenight, which was also Jay's idea...Manyata followed Unnati inside the suite...she hoped Uday wasn't there because she thought that she would not be able to hide it from Uday...she was quietly sneeking into Unnati's room when someone pulled her in one of the rooms...she looked around it was Uday's room...and she knew she was in trouble...she thought what if Uday finds out...if that happens she'll be doomed...Uday pulls her in the room, shuts the door and pins her to the back of the door...

Uday: hey princess...kis se chup rahi thi...???

Manyata: haann...nahi toh...main toh kisi se nahi chup rahi thi...

Uday: really...aaj subha se hum tumhe dhoond rahe hain...aur tum ho ke...humse hi chup rahi ho...(he caresses her cheek)

Manyata: Udayyy woh...

Uday: sshhh...(he puts his finger on her lips...)

Manyata stops and gets lost into his eyes...he touches her lips with his fingers and keeps staring at them...he was already really close to her and moves even closer to remove any distance between...he slowly moves closer and closer...Manyata was lost in his eyes...he was almost there...his lips were almost touching hers now...manyata closes her eyes...Uday moves a litter closer to eliminate any distance between their lips...and just when his lips meet hers...Manyata opens her eyes, backs off and turns the other way...Uday pulls her towards him, so that her back was touching his chest...their bodies were glued together...he moves her hair to the side...which reveals her back ...he puts a remaining strand to the side also...he then touches her back with his lips and kisses her just below neck...this gives her chills and she shivers...he runs his hand down her bare arms...she tries to walk forward and whispers...

Manyata: (whispers)...pleasee udayy...(blood was flushing through her body)...

Uday pulls her back and spins her around so that she was facing him...they were really close to each other...so close that their noses were touching...Manyata was getting redder and redder, she was trying not to look into his eyes...because she was afraid that if she does she will get carried away...she noticed Uday titling his head and moving forward...he was coming closer and closer...and just when their lips meet she moves up and hugs him...at this he smiles...and kisses her on her ears...she chuckles...

Uday (to manyata): (whispers in her ears)...Kya baat hai princess...ajj badi emotional ho rahi ho.

She realizes and pulls away...she looks up and he was smiling...she tries to hit him but he holds her hand and kisses them...

Manyata: accha... mein emotional ho rahi hoon ya tum kuch ziyada hi romantic ho rahe ho...

Uday: princess...tumhe dekh kar to hum hamesha hi romatic hote hain...ab tum ho hi inti...(he whispers in her ears)...HOT...

Manyata: (she pushes him away)...control Uday...bas aik aur week...phir jo man mein aaye karna...

Uday: aik hafta...itna lamba intezaar hum se kaisey hoga...(flirty smile)

Unnati calls Manyata's name...she was looking for her...they were getting late for the party...

Manyata: O TERI...Unnati hamein dhoond rahi hai...hamein toh jana tha...

Uday opens the door and they both walk out...Unnati was waiting for her in the hall...

Unnati (to Manyata): bhahi...kahan thi aap...(she sees Uday with her and says)...oh...i see...(she smiles...)

Manyata looks embarrassed...

Uday (to Unnati): tum lof kahin bahar jaa rahe ho...

Unnati: haan dada...woh actually...hum ek freind ki party mein ja rahe hain...

Manyata: oh haan Unnati...hamein chalna chahiye...der ho rahi hai...

Unnati: hum car ki taraf jaa rahe hain...app bhi aajayiye...(and she leaves)

Manyata (to uday): hum chaltey hain...(she kisses him on the cheek)...

Uday: have fun princess...(and she leaves...)

After she leaves...Uday smiles and says to himself...

Uday (to himself): waisey maza toh aaj hamein bhi bohat aayega...(he smiles)

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 12...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

ps: I will try my best to update both FFs "the royal comedy" and this one soon =)

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love both fics you are doing a really good job with Royal Comedy!😎

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