You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys, this is part 11...hope you all like it...

PART # 11

Manyata looks all around the hall but doesn't find Brijraj anywhere so she thinks may be he went to his room or something and she goes towards his room...and while walking through the hall way...someone grabs her hand and pulls her in one of the rooms...she tries to shout but the person covers her mouth with his hand...

Manyata: BACHHAAAOOO...chor chor...

Uday: SSSHHH ...princess...

Manyata: K..KK..KKON...hai...???

Uday: (whispers in her ears)...BHOOT...(and turns her around)

Manyata: TUM...(she punches him in the chest)...aaj toh tumhara bhoot uttaar hi dena chahiye...

Uday: uttaro na princess...hum toh kab se intezaar kar rahe hain...

Manyata: chiii...Uday...how cheesy...accha ab choro mujhey...

Uday: nahi itni asaani se nahi...

Manyata: kya...(suspiciously)...

Uday: last time Vijay banna aagaye they humari kiss ke beech main...remember...???

Manyata: haan yaad hai...baal baal bachey the hum...par iss baar nahi bachein gey...(she tries to turn around to leave)

Uday: nahi meri jaan...aaj hum tumhe jaaney nahi deingey...(he pulls her back, turns her around and pins her to the wall...)

Manyata: uday...kya kar rahe ho...choro...

Uday: Shhh...(puts his finger on her lips)...kuch mat kaho princess...(he moves closer and closer...so that there is no distance between them...)

He moves even closer...now there was no distance between them...he moves up to kiss her but she turns her face towards the side...

Manyata: (whispers) please Uday...

Uday bends down and starts kissing her neck, which give her chills and makes her uncomfartable...it was as if she was shivering because of his touch...

Manyata: (whispers...)...Udayyy...

He traces through her neck, collar bone,chin with his lips...there lips were now touching...he was kissing Manyata when he felt something wet...he pulled himself back and saw Manyata standing still with her eyes closed...he noticed a tear right below her eye lash...and he moved closer and kissed where the tear was...Manyata's eyes were still closed...it looked like she was afraid to open them...Uday lifted her face up...

Uday: aakhien kholo princess...

Manyata: (no reply and eyes still closed)...

Uday: hamari aankhon mein dekho princess...please princess...

Manyata slowly opens her eyes...and looks into his eyes with her tearful eyes...

Uday: (puts his hand on her cheek)...kya hua princess...hamein batao...

Manyata: yeh mera sab se khubsoorat sapna hai...darr lagta hai ke kahin aakhien kholney se sapna toot na jaye...

Uday: (he hold her face with both hands)...princess aankhien kholo aur dekho ke yeh sapna nahi sach hai...hamara sach...tum jaanti bhi nahi ho ke tum hamarey liye kya ho...

Manyata: pata hai Uday...mujhey lagta tha ke main jaanti hoon ke pyaar kya hai...lekin main bohat galat thi...pyaar ki gehrayi ke baarey main maine tum se jaana...sacha pyaar...unconditional love kya hota hai yeh main ne tum se seekha hai...

Manyata hugs him...and says...

Manyata: ab mein ne jaana ke mein tumharey bina kuch bhi nahi...kuch bhi nahi...agar tum mujh se dur chaley gaye toh shayad meri toh saasien hi rok jayen...

Uday: nahi princess...aaj ke baad kabhi aisi baat mat kehna...hum dono aik dusre ke liye bane hain...hamein koi alag karey aisa hum hone nahi deingey...

Manyata:...I LOVE YOU...i love you very much...

Uday:...I LOVE YOU TOO...princess...(he kisses her forhead)

The scene shifts to hallway where Vijay bhai was following Brijraj and Brijraj was trying to run away from him...

Vijay: brijraj mama...hamari baat toh suniye...aap kahan jaa rahe hain...???

Brijraj:hamein kuch zaroori kaam aagaya hai...(avoiding Vijay)

Vijay: pehle aap hamari help toh kariye...please please...

Brijraj: (he stops)...help...beta agar hum aapki help kareingey...toh koi hamari help nahi kar payega...

Vijay: par aap ne toh promise kiya tha ke hamari setting kar deingey...

Brijraj: beta agar hum aapki setting karein gey toh...hamari khud ki setting kharab ho jayegi...

Vijay: woh kaisey...

Brijraj: aapki mami hum se aur bhi gussa hogayi hain...aapki chakkar mein hum kahin ke nahin rahein gey...

Vijay: don't worry Brijraj mama...aapki setting toh hum kar deingey...

Brijraj: arey nahi nahi beta...aisa ghazab mat kijiye ga...humari setting hum khud kar leingey...

Vijay: Brijraj mama...app dariye mat...hum hain na...

Brijraj: hamein issi baat se toh darr lagta hai...

Vijay: please Brijraj mama...love guru apni baat se peeche nahi hut te...

Brijraj: theek hai...par agar kisi ko pata chal gaya na...toh hum phas jayengey...

Vijay: don't worry Love guru...hum sab sambhaal leingey...(and he taps Brijraj's shoulder...)

The days were passing by quickly...the royal families were busy in planning for the wedding...also Jay's engagement was in two days...everyone was really excited for the two weddings...Both Jay and Manyata were busy in dress trials currently...

Rajmata in her office with Mahraj Giriraj and Brijraj having a conversation about Manyata sitting on the throne...

Rajmata: hum soch rahe the...ke Manyata ko jaigarh ki Mahrani banne mein thora waqt lagey ga...

Brijraj: maa sahib aap aisa kyun keh rahi hain...

Rajmata: humarey kehne ka yeh matlab hai ke...Manyata abhi sirf abhi 19 saal ki hain...abhi bhi woh bacchi hi hain...

Griraj: Maa sahib...aap theek keh rahi hain...in fact hum bhi yahi soch rahe the...Manyata ko apni zimadari ko samajhne mein waqt lagey ga...iss liye shaadi ke baad hum unhein kuch time deingey...aur phir unhein Jaigarh ki mahrani banaayein gey...

Brijraj: baat toh theek hi hai...

Rajmata: bilkul...hum aap se bilkul sehmat hain...

Brijraj: theek hai...jaisa aap logon ko theek lagey...

The scene shifts to the hospital where Akash was admitted...he was still unconscious...and kept on muttering MONIA...over and again...Chincki was with him at the hospital and suddenly she noticed...Akash's hands were moving...and at this she looked shoked and scared...it was night time and there was no one around...she took advantage of the situation...she took out a syringe from her bag, the syringe was filled with Morphine...and she inserted the syringe into the dextrose solution which was inserted in his body...so that he would not gain consciousness...she felt really guilty while doing this...she looked like she was going to cry anytime...

Chinki (to unconscious Akash): Akash...mujhey maaf kardena...mein yeh tumharey achey ke liye hi kar rahi hoon...

She brushes his with her hand...she was crying now...

Chinki (to herself): (she wipes her tears)...roney ka koi faida nahi hai...main itni kamzor nahi hosakti...aur yeh sab main achey ke liye kar rahi hoon...

Chinki (to herself):( she turns around to look at Akash)...merey yeh sab karne ke peechey koi galat maqsad nahi hai...agar main ne aisa nahi kiya aur Akash hosh main aajata...toh usse Monia aur Udaybeer ki shaadi ke baarey main pata chal jaata...aur agar usse pata chal jata toh woh yeh shaadi kabhi nahi hone deta...

Chinki: aur jab tak yeh shaadi nahi hoti... (she holds Akash's hand)...tab tak tum meray nahi hosakte...

Chinki (to Akash): aur tum sirf meray ho...(she gets angry)...pata nahi tuhe uss Monia mein kya dikhta hai...usse tumhari zara si bhi fikar nahi hai...woh tumhe nahi chahti hai...tumhe toh mein chahti hoon...

Chinki (to Akash): (caresses Akash's face)...bas aik baar yeh sab kuch khtam ho jaye...phir mein tumhe bataon gi ke mein tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon...main tumhe itna pyaar doongi ke baki sab kuch bhool jaogey...(she smiles at him and kisses his forehead)...

The scene shifts to Rajmahal in Manyata's room...Manyata was in her room, she was busy trying out the dresses to wear at Jay's engagement...There was a huge designer collection ordered specially for her and she had to chose one...she was having a hard time in choosing the dress...she was really confused...they all looked really nice to her...while she was standing in front in front of the miror...she felt a little weird...her head felt heavy and she was feeling dizzy...Vijay bhai was on his way to Manyata's room...he saw her losing balance and ran towards her to catch her...

Vijay: Jiji...(he supports her)...that was a nice catch...I TELL YOU...

Manyata: yeh hamara sar gol gol ghum kyun raha hai...

Vijay:AAHHH...(holding his hand)... kitni bhari ho gayi ho Manyata Bhai...roz parathey aur pizza kha kha kar...

Manyata: Vijayyy bhaiii...(she complains)...

Vijay: sach kahen toh hamein Uday ke liye bohat bura lagta hai...

Manyata: Vijay bhai...main aapko moti lagti hoon...???

Vijay: hum ne moti kab kaha...hum ne BHARI kaha...there's a difference you see...(he smiles)

Manyata: sach vijay bhai...kya main sach mein bhari hoon...(looking worried)

Vijay: sirf bhari nahi...BHARI BHARKAM...I TELL YOU...

Manyata: ab mein kya karoon...Vijay bhai aap meri help karo na...please...

Vijay: hum...well i would have to think...

Manyata: please...(puppy dog face)

Vijay: Awww...theek hai...so aaj se no parathey and no pizzas...ab tum wahi khao gi jo hum tumhein kahen gey...okay...

Manyata: O TERI...yeh mujh se kaisey hoga...parathon ke bina mera kya hoga...

Vijay: soch lo...kahin Uday tumhe chhor kar kissi hot aur sexy princess ke paas na chale jaye...

Manyata: nahi nahi...ab se parathey band...

Vijay: aur pizza bhi...(she nods)...good girl...

Komal enters the room...

Komal: kya ho raha hai bachon...

Vijay: kuch nahi Komal mami...bas jiji behosh hone ki practice kar rahi thi...

Komal: kya...???...(looking wooried)

Manyata: bas thorey se chakar aaye the...

Komal: beta yeh sab kaisey...aap apna bilkul bhi khayal nahi rakhti hain...hum aap ke liye kuch khaney ki liye bhijwaate hain...parathey...theek hai...

Vijay bhai gives Manyata a look...

Manyata: nahi Maa parathey nahi...salad...

Komal: salad...???...chaliye theek hai...(and she leaves)

Vijay bhai proudly looks at Manyata and smiles...

Scene shifts to hotel Uday niwas...where Unnati was in her room talking to Jay on her phone and Uday all of a sudden comes to the room and gets suspicious about what Jay and Unnati were talking about...

Unnati (to Jay on phone): KYA...???

Jay: come on Unnati...don't be so dramatic...

Unnati: tumhe pata bhi hai tum hum se kya keh rahi ho...

Jay: hum jaantey hain...it'll be a lot of fun...

Unnati: jay...ALL GIRLS BACHELORS PARTY...are you serious...

Jay: yess i'm damn serious...and dancers and all...it'll be fun...trust me...

Unnati: Jay tumhe aisey ajeeb o gareeb ideas aatey kahan se hain...???

Jay: Come on Unnati...it's an awesome idea...

Unnati: par...agar Dada ya...kisi aur ko pata chal gaya...???

Jay: that won't be a problem...I'll handle everything...

Unnati: aur Manyata bhabhi...usse kaisey convince kareingey...woh kabhi nahi maney gi...

Jay: that'll be your problem...chawl queen ko mananey ki duty tumhari hai...

Unnati: Jay...bhabhi kabhi nahi maney gi...aur dadisahib ko pata chal gaya toh...???

While Unnati was talking to Jay on the phone...Uday enters the room and hears some of their conversation...but he doesn't really understand what they were talking about...He calls Unnati's name...

Uday: chutki...???

Unnati: (she turns around quickly)...Dada...aap...one second...

Unnati (to Jay on the phone): Jay um tumhe call back kareingey...

Jay: Uday ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye...aur jald se jald Manyata ko plan mein shamil kar lo...okay...

The phone gets disconnected...

Uday (to unnati ): chutki...kis ko kya na pata chal jaye...???

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 11...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.😊

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey tumne galat jaga post kar diya. This is ff Akash Return. And the part 2 is from the ff Royal Comyde.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Hey tumne galat jaga post kar diya. This is ff Akash Return. And the part 2 is from the ff Royal Comyde.

i know oops my bad i fixed it
sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love both parts 2(ff RC) and 11.
Edited by Arieltabi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update and thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update... u updated at last !! but dont u think unnati deserves better that vijay ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...update soon...thanx 4 pm😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc one...hope to read da next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Alissa...love manveer scenes so cute...well i hv to catch up with the first 10 chapters hope i will do soon. Thxs for the pm and plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
HILARIOUS!! I loved it and Cute SO Good!!

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