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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u all for ur comments and likes... here is the part 2...

Weapon of Death (Part 2)


Precap:The fighting weapon decided:Death... new color of hatred ...RED

M POV:

I hate you, I hate you all. But I cant just die a death of a dog, I have to die a death of hatred and revenge towards my family,a death of sacrifice and loyalty towards my love.For me to deliver immense pain I have to shower immense love on all of you, I have to get each ounce of love that u all have within yourself, so that I could repay u all back with pain, misery and despair for eternity.I vow to not just become a good princess, but to rule the heart of Maharaj Brijraj , Maharani Komal and Rajamat Mrunalini Devi ,by becoming a loving & a proud daughter and a capable princess.It is only favorites that give immense disappointment when they fail, it is only the most loved ones that can hurt you the most and shudder you into pieces. So her I come to fight this battle my way, with love coated with selfishness and deceit and hatred that will be hidden and dark...As I'm your blood I don't have to shed any of your blood, my blood is enough for killing you all...

Uday's POV:

I couldn't describe Dad's happiness when he got a call from Uncle Brij to tell us about Manyata's decision. My first reaction was of disbelief, and then of happiness but within seconds concern took over. I knew this was not Manyata, she couldn't give up so easily, then what was it? Did DS tell her about Akash, nope I warned her not to,she was still recovering from a nervous breakdown, I couldn't let he go through another one. we dint even have proper proofs against him.That son of bitch Akash was way too smart, and our enemy has used the most capable pawn named Akash againts Devgadh and Jaigad estate.I still couldn't believe that we all had been fooled by Akash,I could understand Manyata, coz she was innocent like a kid, but I... I'm Yuvraj Udayveer singh how could I not see deceit in him, how could I not guess that a man who stands tall for a girl and who fights the entire world for a girl whom he has know for just a week, is infact using her.You can like someone after knowing her for a week, but u cannot straight and flat fall in love with anyone in a week!

Flashback:

It was the Holi day, I had taken the hell out of Akash with my hockey stick,I could only see the color... RED ..all around us, Color of blood which both me and Akash had shed.Though this was so unlike me, but I was out of my own control, my whole life was getting ruined. I had fallen in love for the first time, and this love was turning obsession and madness day by day, I could not loose my princess.I held the hockey still in my hand with all my might, it looked as if all my anger had turned into fire and with this fire I was about to burn that Majnu one last time who was kneeling down on his knees by now , and ...I heard a gunshot.Two cars came with armed men and took over all my men. They had all worn masks.A guy with a gun walked towards me holding me on gun point, and helped Akash to get up and seated him in the car.While helping Akash get up, he dropped a bracelet there, which he dint notice.After Akash was in the car, they all got back to the car and drove off.As soon as they were out of sight I picked the bracelet, I saw the royal symbol on it. I needed nothing more to understand what was it all about.The doubt that DS had for 16 years in the back of her mind and which she would casually mention to me whenever Manyatas topic was brought in fore was actually true.Without thinking much I rushed to the chawl, and saw people had gathered around someone who had fallen unconscious. I dint know what but some power pulled me towards the crowd, and I saw my princess laying there pale and lifeless on the ground. My heart skipped a beat when I saw her in that condition. I pushed the crowd with all my might and held my princes in my arms and kissed her forehead.She was cold as ice, but it seemed as if I had frozen at that very moment.I lifted her up and rushed towards my car and drove to the nearby hospital...

End of flashback


The hello on the other side of my cell made me come out of my reverie. I was baffled to know that unconsciously I had dialed DS's number. I asked DS about Manyata, and she replied:I dint tell her anything about Akash, it is her decision, we have a war to win, a war where our enemy is the one whom we both love from the bottom of our heart.We have to fight a battle where we can neither afford loosing, nor can wish to win against her.

Uday:Dont worry DS, I vow to protect my Princess from all the harm in this world, no matter if the one causing the harm is she herself.

Ds:I know Uday, how is the investigation on that dog going?
Uday: we still have a long way to go, Akash's real name and past life is literally untraceable, but don't u worry, I wont disappoint u...



Hello all,all criticism and comments are welcome...next part would start Manveer's love-hate track
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 update!! Can't wait to read ManVeer's love-hate track!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update loved it love how your mind works i was think the cv would have gone this route but they can't seem to make up their mind as yet loved how the ff is going well written thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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absolutely loved reading it...
now this is how we'd hav loved things to go!!
drama, action,twist ,suspense yet acceptable n simple!!
th churning of th story n th thought processes of all char. r so clear n understandable!!😳
u must go n join th CVs of DEK n save our lives n sanity to boot!!😊

this track wid a new sinister character lurking in th shadows pulling th strings is what we all hav been hoping n rooting fr...wud b so simple n wil also exonerate th whole royal family o any wrongdoing...why tarnish each n every o our beloved character!?...a simple plain fact which th creatives hav totally failed grasp!!

so great going n pls update soon n pm !
once again...loved th simlicity n clarity!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its great
update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was a wow part indeed!!!!! 👏
update sooon👍🏼

And don't forget to pm 😊
Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was amazing...want more😛...plz PM me whenever u update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chitra lovd dix part amazing waiting for next One
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, thank you for your wonderful comments. Would update soon 😊
Posted: 13 years ago
#20
hey chitra it was very very very nice sweet part n pls do update asap pls pm me if u can

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