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Posted: 13 years ago
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FLASHBACK
a freind indeed is a freind in need u said it ur self uv manyta declared
uv yeah i said it but never thought that i would have to do it princess u know me na
m i dont care uv either u do it or i will tell kamala that u already have another girlfrnd and trust me she will not be happy
uv... FINE
m yipeee... ur the best
uv drops her at the cafe
later in the car
m thanks yar u know how much i luv akash
uv no thnx in our frndshp
FLASHBACK ENDS
every ones in the sitting area
m screams u knew uv u knew that i loved akash then why
uv remains silent
brij MANYTA is that the way to talk to ur fiance
m please u dont need to tell me how to behave with who u played polotics with ur own daughter
u all knew that i loved akash.
akash enters
manyata manata
m akash
suddenly the guards enter with guns they try to grab akash and throw him out in all this fiasco akash kills the guard
m... omg yeh kya kiya akash ye rum nay kya kar diya
brij gets angry and calls the police
brij u bas***d i wouldnt leave u u son of a bi**h he was about to kill him when suddenly manyta screams
m papa plz plz dont kill him i will do anything u sya but plz just dont killhi
uv stops brij and whispers somethingul to him and after some time brij says
manyta i will leave him but in exchange u must forget him and marry uv
manyta is shocked and is in a dilema
akash no manyat dont dont
m...i...i.a.agree...t.this...i am..ready..t.to...marr.r.y...ud.a..y
deep down every one is happy and brij tells akash to get out and to not show his face again
in manyatas room
j jiji dont do this plz
m idont have any other choice j she places her head on js lap and starts crying and after sometime falls ina deep slumber
j jiji u have just saved akashs life but have finished urs
NEXT DAY
at breakfat table
ds ah... manyata beta i have heald a party this evening
komal but for what purpose maa sahib
ds tonight uv will propose manyta in front of the media
every one starts preparing for the party
PARTY TIME
m is up in her room getting ready for the party. unnati had sended her a beautiful gown to wear
uv enters her room
uv chalay princess every ones waiting
m remains quiet and just leaves he follows her
eveyone starts whispering about how pretty manyat looks and that they bith are a perfect couple
manyata tries har best to act happy
after some time ds calls eveyone and announces that uv has to share something
uv walks toward manyata and kneels before her
rajkumari manyata you haave been my best frnd since the day i saw u since i first laid my eyes on you we have been toghtere like two peas in pod and i didnt know when our frnship turned into love but u always have been mine. i yuvraj uday veer singh mark the things that i wanted and marked u with a scar when i was five and sine then u r mine. so miss ha nah to will u marry me and be by my side through happiness sorrow sickness through thick and through thin
manyta knew that he didnt mean even one word
m yes
and uv grabbed her up high and kissed her forehead and then her hand and placed asolitare ring on it
m was crying for ppl it was happy tears but for her this marked the end of her happiness
everyone started applauding
sorry no manveer scenes but i will make it up 2 u in next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its great
update soon 😊
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ahh what an update! thanks for the pm!
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loved the start continue soon and pm
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waooo wat writing...doo continue...n plzz pm me...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx guys heres a short promo or prolouge for chapter 2 i will update it on thursday or friday as ihave pprs
chapter 2 promo
uv pinned manyata against the wall
uv u r right princess hum may aur akash may bohat farak ha, he doesnt make u feel the way i do
m...w.a.t..r..u..say..ing
uv touchs her hair and caresses her manyata trys to push him but all in vain,uv pushes his weight on her and they share the eye lock for that one breif moment they both forget their current problem it was like the world had stopped still uv came near her until their was no space and moved towards her cheek he kissed and then moved to her luscious yet kissable lips.he pressed his lips against her and instead of stopping him manyata returned the kiss with an equal passion
i know its bakwas but still do
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really nice...pm me if possible :)
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Nice precap!!;) Lookin forward to reading!!:) N thank u soo much for the pm!!:)<3
Edited by AKlover101 - 13 years ago
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waooo...really wanna see such things...yy dont production ppl change CVs n higher u guys...u all r such brilliant writing gr888 plsss continue writing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED THE PROMO CAN'T WAIT FOR UPDATE

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