Uday's confession to Manyata !!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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When we talk

I dream, I fall into a trance.

I believe that even though a long distance between our bodies is there
Yet still we're here
Together as one.
In my heart, I know that, you're mine...
even though you always decline..
Somewhere I know, you feel it to ...
But you're to scared to admit it, knowing the fact that it's true...
You say we're friends, and the relation we share is friendship
And I say that friendship is love, the strongest ship...
Believe it or not, our actions are the same...
Sometimes it makes me wonder if we're the same person, 2 parts of a whole...
Baby, we complete the incomplete ... we're sharing the same bowl.
You say your Prince is someone else...
But Girl, I know the fact that Princess is you, and your Prince Charming is Me.
Falsify, this feeling can't be.
Baby, we're two different leaves of the same tree...
Yet you still say, we can't be...
Heck your so naive, but Girl ...
Trust me I and You, is meant to be ...
Manyata and Uday...
Two names with different means, like two cups served on a same tray ...
I love you, I'll say it here and now ...
I'll always love you, this I vow ...
Just say, I love you to Uday ... and trust me Princess, I'll make your life Wow ...
Uday and Manyata two leaves of the same tree ...
Believe it or not Princess, you and I is meant to be.
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Hey guyz, thanks for reading, I hope you liked it 😃 I hope this wasn't too bad, please do leave comments and let me know of what you think. And if you liked it ... Please don't forget to hit "LIKE" 😉 Any constructive criticism welcome, but keep in mind I'm only 15 so I am not very very good at poetry like the other people on this forum. 😆
Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh i love it to the core ...it's awesome ..amazing...do write more and more ... really awesome .. u know what me gonna read it again ..great job yaar ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love it Adden! Thanks for PM, it is really nice though!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love-mystery

ohhh i love it to the core ...it's awesome ..amazing...do write more and more ... really awesome .. u know what me gonna read it again ..great job yaar ⭐️

Thanks A Ton !!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww its super awsome!!!😃love it alott..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u actually did a great job at poetry.. even though ur young.. still u have alot of talent, be it poetry or writing OS's... i loved it... thanx for the pm 😊
Edited by nasghar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey gal really good i loved it seriously awesome..😉😳👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
n thnks for sharing sweetie..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice loved it. Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel_20

hey gal really good i loved it seriously awesome..⭐️

n thnks for sharing sweetie..😉

hot pic there Pari 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow simply awesome love it love it love it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Plzzz do write more
thxs for the pm

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