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Harman

@Herman_4u

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

loved ittt, it was poetic and funny at the same time, superb, keep up the good work 👏👏

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lojain

@LifeOfTheParty

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wawww..wah wah... i be in love with all what uv said ... and what uv said to manyata..😍... he is so charming and sooo ☺️... and loved manyata breakup with a ... love all in fact enjoy reading it ... keep writing more babe <3

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Anmol

@isspyaar

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

i like the phone one

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Adden

@Add123

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: lakshyasss
ye mujhe koi partner mil gaya mera bhi yehi job hai shayeri like this...but my stomach hurting now🤣

🤗hugs partner

nizzaUday to Akash on phone:
Uday: Sbzi teri ho
handi meri ho
Akash: wah wah
Uday: C.N.G teri ho
Gari meri ho
Akash: wah wah
Uday:Hum dono ki dosti itni gehri ho
ke Mangetr teri ho aur us se
shadi meri ho
Ab bol wah wah
Akash: -----------

Thanks Nizza Partner , I'm glad you liked it :D

I've read loads of ur posts ... and ur an exellent shayer ;D

Thanks xxx

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Adden

@Add123

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lakshyasss
Me to you guys:

Mere Dost Tum Bhi Likha Karo Shayari
Tumhara Bhi Meri Tarah Naam Ho Jayega
Jab Tum Par Bhi Padenge Ande Aur Tamatar
To Shaam Ki Sabji Ka Intajaam Ho Jayega???😉

Zindagi mein kisi ko underestimate mat karna
Meri baat hamesha yaad rakhna
Shayeri har koi dimaag mein roz likhta hai
Par Koi hii hota hai jo usey sabke samne zubaan pe laata hai

nizza
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2799165

do visit this too...

Wah! Wah! Kya baat hai ... what a jawab frm u ... exellent yaar ;)

Surely will visit it :D

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Mohabbateinn

@Mohabbateinn

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

gal that was brilliance!🤣🤣 LOOOL !

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.lostinthought.

@.lostinthought.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Loved it my favorite part was wah wah uday to akash ahahs enjoyed it..😊

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Sid

@Sid4TeamCanada

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

OMG DID U WRITE THIS?? :O

FOR REAL??

wowww yaar, u r TOO GOOD!!!! :O r u a writer?? u shud totally write professionally! =D

Uday to himself in thought:

Ek Akash Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Jese Khana Kharab,
Jese Total Azaab,
Jesey Aadi Faqeer,
Jesay Murda Zameer,
Jese Naasoor Ho Koii Sartaa Howaa
Ek Akash Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga,
Jese Bijli Ka Taar
Jese Khanjar Ki Dhaar
Jesey Dozakh Ki Aag
Jesey Zehrila Naag,
Jese Garmi Ki Dhoop
Jese Shetan Ka roop

Jese Bikhari ho koi sarta hua

Pata nahi Manyata ne uss me kya dekha?

Ke uss ne mujhe thukraya

aur uss Mall Ke Hero ko apnaya.

BEST!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

oh God... this was a world class parody!!...
Kya dimag paya hai... I am a fan of your shayari...
I'm not maroing anday tamatar... but gulaab ki patiyon ki bahar!!🤗

Edited by mahi0809 - 13 years ago