SS: In The Closet, part 7, page 20 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pri01

The like button isn't working for me😡 this is my like👍🏼
Thxs Megz for this quick update and the pm as well🤗
It's amazing love it...so Akash is enjoying nite life with J😲😆
Love the way Manyata convinced herself that her past will affect Akash and she ends up thinking of UV...am loving this strange between Manveer although they aren't together in a relationship they are bound by their past.
Will wait for the next part


it's okay..happens a lot with me. 😆
thanks for taking out time to read and comment..yep, Aakash is the 'Char Baj Gaye' types in this one. 😆
yup...i'm afraid i may be pakaoing with all this 'past' stuff, for some reason i feel like taking it realllyy slowly coz i want to write more about my SS Manveer. 😆😛
hope you like part 4! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW AWESOME story is becoming more mysterious haii waiting please jaldii update karna Megz lovee it i love Uday in yur ff alottt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant part dear...
loved it...
loving the way you are carrying on the story..it leaves me in curiosity to read more and more...
and thanx for the pm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Yesss!!! The Coffee, I shall start liking the bitter drink now 🤣
Akash, and drunk 😳 he better not cross the line infront of UV 😡
Fabulous Update, Loved it to bits ... Thanks for the PM !!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
First - THANK you for changing the font. Doesn't it look MUCH better now?! Yes, it does!

Second - Such fast updates! Very good!

Third - Liked this chapter. "You're still my princess." Uff, this possessive Uday is so HOT. I like him so much in your FF!

Fourth - Dhamakha precap! Can't wait for it to happen! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
thank u for the pm.. i loved it like always 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Just caught up megz! It's fabulous! Honestly, very different from the show: which is MUCH needed.

AND I loved how quickly updated...except its making me feel guilty! 😆

gahh! Keep up the great work! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG that was amazing...please pm the next part!!! I would love to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update Megz.. Can't wait for the next part.. Precap seems too good..

Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣...i saw who wrote this and was like 😲 yeh yahaan bhi...then i read your disclaimer...and...well...died laughing!!! 😆 because i know from experience ive been on the other end of the unfinished FFs...though i shouldnt be one to talk!!! 😉 vaise...tujhe kush hona chahiyeh...my first post on this forum is for you luv!! whats up!! long time no talk!! 🤗
now let me get to my comment...
starting w/ the title..."In The Closet"..lmfao...you dont want to know where my mind is on that one!! 🤣 so i shall leave it alone!! 😛
Chapter 1
just loved the way that you introduced both Uday and Manyata...and the way you described how they had changed over the years...once being so close and now being so distant because they were their own individual person now...wah wah!! 👏👏👏...some girls have all the luck...she has Uday and uppar se she got to wear a tiara...i want one! and by one i mean UdayVeer!! 😳...who wants diamonds when you can have a HOT HUNK!! 😉...haila...yeh Akash kahaan se tapak pada? 😲 is he in the closet? 🤣 tauba...i didnt just say that!
Chapter 2
omg...this line killed me...KILLED!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣... "The royals were caught between saying what the hell and ermm, hello beta." that was too hilarious!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...Manyata has an aversion to touches by men...hmm...what is that all about...i wonder what happened to her that has her like that...aare...whats wrong that Akash said "Namaste"...why dumb NRI...i'd say the opposite...😆😆😆...ok now i can see where Uday would make fun of Akash..."totally cool with it"...oh lord...someone stop him before he makes it worse!!! 😉...ouch!! 😲 i dont knwo what Brijraj meant by again but that was cold!! i hate how parents throw old crap out over and over again!! Akash off with J...do you think they'll run off a cliff...im just putting it out there 😛😛😛...aww Uday is too cute..."please dont die or Daddy will kill me"...thats adorable!!!! 😳...omg precap looks good!!!
Chapter 3
will be back to comment...im at work so time to head out!!
JAZ..

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