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Posted: 13 years ago
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thx guys for encouraging me to carry on this little peace of garbage i will update and try to improve my writing skills.my next update would be on 24th march or day after but not sooner than that exams on head ought to study for finals

Posted: 13 years ago
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precap maneta was standing in the bus stop thinking what she would do now.suddenly a black chevrolet stopped in front of her . the driver rolled the glass.uv-hey pretty face lift chahiye kya?
maneta-those words were enough to interrupt her thought process .but she pretended as if she did not here anything and stood there looking away from him
uv-hello hello clicking his fingers infront of her face andhi ho kya ya phir beheri
maneta-now looking at himn aur tum mr besharam ya mr flirtatious ho kya?
uv-naam se to humein log yuvraaj udayveer kahete hian par tumhare liye hum sirf aur sirf uday hain.
maneta- ae jyaada bakwas mat kar sharam nahin aate beech raste oe ek ladki ke saath itne logon ke saamne flirt karte huye
uv-janeman sharam naam ki cheez humare dictionary main nahin he and for ur kind information hum apko beach raste pe nahin ek bus stop main jahan koi nahin he wahan ched rahe hain
maneta - khud ko bada romeo ya phir samajta he kya tu to ek number ka zero hain zero.ye do high heels dekh rahe ho ise tumhare sar pe lekar marungi toh palak jhapak te swarg pahunch jayega o sorry narak main pahonch jayega.
uv haye tumhare muhun se toh gaaliyan bhi humain mithaiyoon kii tarah lag raha he
aur hum woh din zaroor deekhna chaheinge jab tum apni high heels se humara khoon karogi
saach main humne itne ladkiyon ko dekha he aur flirt kiya hai lekin tum jaisa kahin nahi dekha
kuch toh baat hain tumme
usually humain ladkiyon ko study karne main do minute lag te hain lekin tum humare paale kyun nahi padi kaun ho tum.
maneta - acha kaun ho main teri maut oopss nahin riste main hum tumhare baap lagte hain aur naam he shehensha.
when maneta turn back she saw that the bus stop was really vacant she was a bit scared
the sky darkened black and grey clouds everywhere after sometime there was a loud sound of lighting this time mnaeta was really scared .
uv o miss jhansi kii rani aajao aur kitni der bus ka intezaar karogi hum tumhe denge warna bus ka intezaar karte karte baarish main bhig jaoogi jaldi karo
to be continued;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
guys i know i dont write so well compared to other writers this was just an attempt to improve my writing skills sorry if i wasted ur time but promise ill make it interesting stay tuned and comments criticism all welcome
thnx for reading it with patience god bless all of u
urs maneta⭐️👏😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update!😆
Edited by tiger_lily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting for the next one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww. I loved it :D
Please PM me when u update. xxx
Posted: 13 years ago
#16

THANK ALL FOR UR SWEET COMMENTS

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