Short OS - Betrayal (UV's perspective)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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DEK FANS, this is my very first short OS ever! I've never written any OS or FF in India forums before. Charming Udayveer compelled me to write my very first short OS! I'm not as creative as some other talented DEK writers so bear with me! Hope you guys enjoy reading what I've written. 😊


Short OS - Betrayal (UV's perspective)


Udayveer was fuming with immense anger. Just when he had thought Manyata had begun to change and soften towards him, she ended up proving him wrong. "God dammit! This is how she repays me after I put my trust in her! So her genuineness was only for show! Why didn't I suspect that she had an ulterior motive! Urghhh!" He felt like punching his bedroom wall but he restrained himself. Just an hour earlier, he found out Manyata had played with his emotions and had betrayed his trust. Manyata had been secretly organizing a surprise birthday party for Akash behind his back. She only behaved sweetly towards him to keep him from finding out about her surprise birthday party for Akash. "What the hell does she see in that spineless majnu Akash! What does he possess that I don't!" Udayveer regretted ever trusting Manytata. It felt like he had been punched in the gut. His anger didn't show any sign of mellowing down, it only increased. He knew he couldn't let Manyata get away with deceiving him like this. "Princess you made a deadly move! No one betrays my trust and gets away with it scot-free!" Udayveer grabbed his cell phone and rushed out the door with only one thing on his mind, teaching Manyata a lesson she would never forget.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 awesome love it well done girl keep it up waiting for your next one 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved you short story. And aww poor UV. I am sure this is going to happen in DEK when UV find out about Akash's birthday party. He will be super angry and he will definitely teach a lesson to M and Akash... just want him to ruin Akash's birthday party just like Akash ruined his date.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome... seems interesting
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey preet that was really nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome ..👏 loved it..👍🏼 good job, plz write more OSs..all the best👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awwwiieee!!! Twiinii sis!! This was fantastic!! I cant wait to read more oses from you 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow preet gud story well done
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE POST PREET ,WELL DONE.KEEP UP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your OS was great...I loved it. Please write more OS. Can't wait for your next piece. Please PM me whenever you post your new OS or FFs.

Once again, Great Going!👏

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