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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Trulyy trully truly AMAZINGGG

loved it

Beautifully written

Please do a part 2

Please PM me you future os.. thank you

Amazing😃

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

niceee i liked it... do write more wil wait!

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

megz!😃

been eagerly awaiting for you to write something again! been kinda empty without written fantasies 😉 this piece was especially nice - liked the type of relationship the both are in..that simple state of being but also yearning 😊

can't wait to read more!

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-Misek-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Amazing OS.. Loved it 🤗 🤗.. The scar part was the best how you've described tht it had been imprinted there forever ☺️❤️..

pls do contine.. 🤗

P.s. Akash crushed under a Truck..LOL 😆 😆 🤣🤣

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prachurya

@prachurya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Thnx for the pm!

Loved the OS! Plz do write more

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awww..very nice...too good..😍

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647655

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awww! How sweet! They weren't barking at each other but they weren't loving to each other either. Absolute adorable! Cute, and wonderful!

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

beautiful os
very nicely written the M's part u wrote about...its will look interesting ..a good development in her char.

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Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Wow awesome and good that majnu is dead

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

That was just BEAUTIFUL, especially the end bit. Uday striking her hair.. i can imagine him doing it so gently. Ahh, just loved your OS.

I don't know if i am the only 1, but i am kinda glad that Pakash got killed, at least in the OS. I doubt it will happen in the show, though.

Looking forward to more!!

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