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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Nivren123

Loji I read them all in one go and I loved them please update soon. 😃



will try my best sweetyyy ... happy u like them thanxx 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: -rianne

Love.. again lovely n beautiful manveer update.. 🤗keep it up my love⭐️and again i didn't delayed too long to read..😆



happy u like them love ...ohh ya u be good love 😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey sisesss🤗.. check out my comment on page 7 as well ok my sweetheart..😉 n sorry for the late reply i read them i jus didnt get the chance to reply back cause u know me busy with college n all.. eeww.. well anyways i read these scenes as well awesome my sweet sisesss love ur work jaan sachii u write really naturally n tht makes me want to read more n more seriously u r outstandin meri sisesss...😳👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars as always for an amazing writer..😉😳
n thnks for the PM sises..😉 plzzz do continue n make these scenes into an FF n i have a name for ur FF as well u should call it Manveer Dreams Come True or Dreams of Manveer Love/Romance...😉😳 these r my suggests for ur FF name but u can put ur thought as well sisess hope u like the names i came up with if u want some other names i can give u more cause really sweets if u turn ur scenes into an FF everyone would love it since ur scenes r really good n u know me i would love to read them..😉😳 so ya do it ok my sisesss n love u like infinity times...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Angel_20

hey sisesss🤗.. check out my comment on page 7 as well ok my sweetheart..😉 n sorry for the late reply i read them i jus didnt get the chance to reply back cause u know me busy with college n all.. eeww.. well anyways i read these scenes as well awesome my sweet sisesss love ur work jaan sachii u write really naturally n tht makes me want to read more n more seriously u r outstandin meri sisesss...⭐️ 5 stars as always for an amazing writer..😉😳

n thnks for the PM sises..😉 plzzz do continue n make these scenes into an FF n i have a name for ur FF as well u should call it Manveer Dreams Come True or Dreams of Manveer Love/Romance...😉😳 these r my suggests for ur FF name but u can put ur thought as well sisess hope u like the names i came up with if u want some other names i can give u more cause really sweets if u turn ur scenes into an FF everyone would love it since ur scenes r really good n u know me i would love to read them..😉😳 so ya do it ok my sisesss n love u like infinity times...🤗




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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
New scene

Finally she know it :


Manyata felt that that's will be so dangerous to be his friend and be close to him ' but also there is something is holding her back from stopping all this .. she be so angry about what is happening to her so she used the most way that she knew to fight this and scape from it and she start yelling again .. she told uv .. u r wasting the time .

Uv be surprised and said ohhh god u be so angry so fast and without a reason , we can start from tomorrow now let's chat a friend chat .. uv sat again and said come and sit ' manyata agreed and sat near him . uv smiled to her .. she said stop it .. uv said what?? .. manyata said never mind .. uv said ok let's talk about this .. manyata turn towards him and said what ??

Uv said ..Why u go and come everyday ?? I mean u can stay here .. manyata said what??!! no never , how I can stay here with u ??..uv came closer and now they r having an eye look ..uv smirked and came closer and said u r scared ?? u don't have trust in ur self ?? manyata said no not that .. uv said then ?? manyata said what u wanna do ?? .. uv moved back a little , he laughed so loud and said omg u r so much .. he said don't worry I will not be here at night ..i will come only during the day .. he turned and said or should I ??

Manyata smiled and said ohhh noo u shouldn't ,now I get it .. uv said ohhh what u thought ???.. manyata said nothing .. uv said ok so what is ur view ??.. manyata said ya but ' uv said ya I know I will take care of everything don't worry .. manyata said ok then will tell chikki to come and be with me .. uv said ya great idea ' now I will leave to do the other stuff' manyata get up and said even I will leave and she looked at the sea ' uv said manyata 'manyata turned and uv sprayed her with some water .. manyata screamed ..uv laughed and stood up fast and run ' manyata said wait I will take care of u 'and she run after him '

While the r running .. manyata is about to catch him but she stumbled and about to fall down ' uv came fast and hold her from her waist ' manyata be breathless , as she was afraid from falling down she is feeling that her breath Is took away from her .. she moved him a way so fast and she is was about to fall again but she balanced her self but uv couldn't balanced him self and fall down ' He looked at her in surprised look ' she said am sorry ,am leaving .. and she left ..Uv smiled and left also ..

Manyata go and meet chikki ' manyata :: chikki hi where is unniti ?? chikki said oh where have u been ?? she traveled outside but she will be back today ' manyata said there is a mystery is in this girl .. chikki said ya I agree' manyata said ok u have to go with me .. chikki said where and why ?? manyata told her everything .. chikki said ohh u r playing with fire be careful .. manyata said no I will not and now let's go ' both went there but no one was there ' manyata surprised and said he didn't arrived yet ' chikki said or he felt the game took so long and he don't wanna carry on he get enough of fun ..

Manyata said no .. he will be back .. both waited for a while .. chikki said manyata we have to leave it's too late here .. manyata be sad and said ya u r right ..let's move ..

Next day ' morning ..manyata waked up seeing the sun .. she remembered what happened and be down again ' after a while she realized that unniti is stand in front of her .. manayata said hi when u came ??... unniti said I came last night and chikki told me what happened and thought to leave u to take rest ' manayata start be busy with some stuff coz she don't want to face unniti.. unniti came closer and said u still feeling down, I have news for u '

Manyata tried to not be that curies about the news and she looked at unniti and smiled .. manyata said am fine ' and what is the news about ??.. unniti smiled and said don't act I know u ' the news is about that guy ' manyata surprised and said ohh u mean uv?? Unniti said yes .. he traveled to Canada and suddenly even media don't know why but all said it's coz of a girl .. and also that girl will be his wife '

Manyata shocked about what just unniti told ' manyata said oh really ?? unniti said yes .. manyata felt that all is clear now .. why she felt down , why she felt she is not controlling .. what she felt that she can't stop it .. now finally she realized what happened to her ' finally she knew she fall in love with uv ..


Edited by love-mystery - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Unreserved...

Damn...i m so addicted to this forum...i tell you...😉
well...as while studying also your scene was roaming in my mind so i better thought to comment...
seriously...it awesome...
Manveer scenes are marvellous...
so finally she realised that she has fallen for uv...
loved it throughly...
thanx for thhe pm...
Edited by nityah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Hey lojji loved dix scene n finally man realized her love for udayvee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Hey sisesss🤗 me busy with studyin for math exam since I have it today in one hour but when I get home I'll definitely will read ur scenes would not one wanna miss it for the world lol...😉 Love u my sises...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
loved it loji dii
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: MsLuscious


Hey lojji loved dix scene n finally man realized her love for udayvee



happy u love it ... yes babe and now see what is she up to 😉

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