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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pri01

Wow jaan it's awesome love the part UV caught M staring at him😉 it is beautifully written ...plzzz update soon

Thxs for the pm ...love ya🤗



happy u like it jaan ..love ya more 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -rianne

Beautiful update love!!!! ⭐️ btw i did't deleyed this time..😆 😳



happy u like it love ...😃 ... yes u didn't 😆😆😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63


happy u like it sweets 😃
Posted: 13 years ago
#64
hey loji im back to comment i think u may not remember me but i was the 1 who insisted u to share ur sweet manveer dreams with us.
now coming to the chapter i really liked it but it was very short yaar aur thoda likho .aur subha se shaam hone ko aai hain aur update kahan hai
yaar itna kyun wait karwa ti ho aur last time tumne pucha tha ki mera naam kya hai to mera real name hai shivani
aur tumhara
mujhe bahut dokh horaha he asun poch poch kar bahut sare tissue paper waste ho rahe aur mujhe ab uski safai bhi akele karni padegi aur is sab ka karan ho tum haan tum sirf aur sirf tum kyunki tumne mujhe pm nahi kia cry cry cry
aur iske liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi kabhi kabhi kabhi nahi
ok thoda zyaada filmy hogaya just joke maar rahe thi or asusual
joke marne main fail hogayi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: maneta

hey loji im back to comment i think u may not remember me but i was the 1 who insisted u to share ur sweet manveer dreams with us.

now coming to the chapter i really liked it but it was very short yaar aur thoda likho .aur subha se shaam hone ko aai hain aur update kahan hai
yaar itna kyun wait karwa ti ho aur last time tumne pucha tha ki mera naam kya hai to mera real name hai shivani
aur tumhara
mujhe bahut dokh horaha he asun poch poch kar bahut sare tissue paper waste ho rahe aur mujhe ab uski safai bhi akele karni padegi aur is sab ka karan ho tum haan tum sirf aur sirf tum kyunki tumne mujhe pm nahi kia cry cry cry
aur iske liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi kabhi kabhi kabhi nahi
ok thoda zyaada filmy hogaya just joke maar rahe thi or asusual
joke marne main fail hogayi




no sweets i remember ... i will update later after the epi ... ohhh i didn't pm u how can i 😲😲😲 so so sorryyy sweetyyy my bad ... i will add u in my friend list so accept me 😳... hope u will like the update and welcome back 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
note ... guys am sorry but i don't know who waana me to pm her or not
plz any one want me to pm hit like button

pm list

priya
ria
pari
sonali
dums
sarah
maneta
a.anu,
janeniroopa,
Anjalika13,
nityah,
Nivren123
shivani

Edited by love-mystery - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
new scene ::: unbelievable

Manyata said .. u see those trees ..uv made a confused look 'manyata said :: u will break it and we will sale it and she smiled ' uv laughed and said r u joking ?? she said no why should I ??... he said u r not joking ?? uv said I will not do that ' ' manyata said then our deal is no more ' uv looked at her with an angry look and came closer he hold her so strongly and said I have to teach u with whom u r talking ' he came closer and hold her and said now u will not do anything u will just do what I said '

Manyata said leave me ' he smiled and said and if I don't ?? she is about to hit him but suddenly he freed her .. she run out ' uv didn't follow her ' after a while uv noticed that there is a beach there ' he went there 'he was enjoying the view suddenly he noticed that manyata was sitting there he slowly came closer ' he asked her .. so u here why u didn't leave .. manyata didn't answer him '

Then he said r u afraid '?? Manyata was thinking .. even she didn't know why she didn't leave .. something is keeping her here ' something is more strong than her .. she yelled ::: why should I told u ?? uv smiled and sat near her .. he said look, u can tell me ' manyata said u help me and I have to help u ' manyata in her mind ( I know it's not the reason then why am still here )'uv said ok so u still here to help me ' manyata said yes ' uv said ok then let's change the roles '

Manyata looked at him and said then ???... uv smiled and said don't be afraid ,u told u will teach me how to be normal right ?? manyata said yes 'uv said then u have to learn how to be a princess ' manyata was shocked ' she said why u add this ??... he said u agree or not ???' manyata was thinking then after a while she noticed that uv was looking at her ' she looked at him ' both lost in each other '

After a while manyata yelled at him and said stop it ' uv confused and said what ??... manyata be confused what is happening to her ya she know she is yelling coz she is trying to hide something ' uv said then am waiting for ur answer ' manyata said ok ' uv smiled and said now we r friends .. and u have to bear me when I be angry and not try to make me angry as if u make me angry then I will ' manyata smiled and said u will what ??

Uv come closer and closer ..manyata felt she is losing her breath then Uv said I will and he whispered in her ears ' manyata hit him and said if u did that I will kill u .. uv said oh now we have to go shopping and we will use my money deal ?? manyata said ok ' both smiled


Edited by love-mystery - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
note ::: i can update long part if i make it as an ff ... so guys what u think should i make it as ff ???

if yes do hit the like button and suggest a name for it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Jaan 🤗 it's awesome love the beach scene ...what a job M ask UV to do 😆😆 hats off meri jaan u hv a great imagination Plzzz jaanu go for a FF... I told u previously to write a FF u write so beautifully ...so change this one into FF go my gal go😉
Well i will suggest Manveer our dreams and destiny...i know it's weird😆
Thxs for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

0fc0urse u shud turn it in ff

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