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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manatya breaks the hug and moves away from uv. Uv looks at manatya with a smile n hugs her from behind.manatya is using all her strength on uv to let go of her but she fails. Fially mantya turns around. Uv gives her a big smile n asks her soo princess you are angry at me? Mantya stares at him for a min n then pushes him away. This time uv doesn't hold on to mantya but insread he gives her a slight push to break the eyelock.manatya is in a sad tone n starts talking.
Manatya- you are the biggest liar ever u told me i wasur princess n everything but phir bhi u completely ignored me tumhe pata hain i got so worried for you. Bad thoughts were going over my mind this whole time. If you ever give me this kind of suprise again believe me i will kill you.
Uv comes closer and wipes the tears on manatya' s cheeks n hold her face in his hands.
Uv- i am sorrymy princess i just wanted to give you a suprise but mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum inti emotional ho jao gayi i am really sorry n i promise no more crazy suprises like this ever again.
Manatya gets happy n kiss uv on the cheek.both of them share a long hug.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
shabaaash ...add me 2 ur pm list plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohhh superbbb
fell in.love with ur writtinggg
just keep it goingg
waitingg eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all a big sorry to everyone for keep waiting you guys for this long bas i am soo used to my tablet now that i don't even look at my laptop and you can;t really type on a tablet due to touchscreen actually i tried it with my last update but i didn't like the results so finally i am back at my laptop yay😆
so before any further details about me i will start the update.😳 thanks everyone for being patience and for reading my ff. 🤗


The next day uv calls manatya and they plan to spend the whole day together so uv comes to pick up manatya in her room. manatya opens the door and she is dressing up. uv looks at her and doesn't speak for a while. he is just admiring her beauty. at first manatya doesn't pay attention since she is busy with her make-up but after few minutes manatya notices and blushes. she snaps couple of times to get out uv out of daydreaming but uv is just lovestruck. finally manatya comes closer to uv and kisses him on the cheek. uv feels the warmth of manatya's lips on his face and uv stops daydreaming. he looks at manatya and tells her thank you. manatya smiles and replies back saying that she knew that uv wanted a good morning kiss soo he was doing this act.uv holds manatya by her waist n tells her that princess blame ur eyes not me. manatya asks him why my eyes? uv replies kyunki your eyes are soo beautiful that i can't keep my eyes off you everytime i see you your eyes always tell me that manatya belongs to you only n no one else.manatya gets happy and tells uv accha bachhuuu... ab yeh romance ka breakfast karoge kya? uv replies no lets go. uv reaches out to manatya and holds her hand and manveer hold hands and starts walking to the cafe.manatya calls out uv couples of times and then uv realizes that he was just daydreaming. both of them leave for the cafe.

In the cafe manayta is walking down stairs and suddenly she falls but uv catches her in his arms. uv is holding manatya by her waist and bending down. manatya holds onto uv's shoulder tightly not letting it go. both of them share a stare. tum se hi plays in the background. manatya relaizes that everyone in the cafe is staring at them and she gets uncomfortable and starts blinking her eyes fast. uv notices and looks around. he lets go off manatya slowly until she is on her feet and manatya leaves in a hurry to the bathroom. uv leaves and says hi to the people who were staring manveer.

Bathroom:
Manatya is standing infront of the mirror and confused about her feelings. She is thinking to herself on how close her and uv has gotten and they always act like a couple with the stares and getting close to each other without feeling uncomfortable. on the other side uv is thinking about manatya as well that maybe she is not ready or he is going to fast. he tells himself that from now on he will control his feelings until manatya confesses herself because he values his friendship with manatya more than his love her. in the bathroom manatya looks in the mirror and asks herself that what is this friendship turning into attraction or love? she looks at herself with a confused+worried look for a minute and then leaves. manatya returns to the table and uv smiles at her n then gets up. he slides a chair out for her n manatya says thank you and sits.both of them look around and uv breaks the ice.
uv- soo princess what would you like to have?
manatya- anything healthy i guess.
uv- oh k let me call the waiter.
manatya- u know french.
uv- nahin yaar but english is common here so that will do.
manatya- oh k lets leave to see the city and malls after breakfast.
uv- sure madam.

uv calls the waiter and they order juice,fruits and boiled vegetables. uv orders a cup of coffee. manatya asks him to eat and uv gives in and orders omelete for him. both of them have their breakfast. manatya pays the bills and manveer leaves.at first manatya insists on going to a mall and do some shopping. uv agrees and both of them hire a taxi to go to a nearby mall.manatya goes in a clothing store and tries on some dresses.uv agrees on some and manatya buys the one uv likes, they go around different kind of stores until they gets tired and decide to have lunch. they eat in a pizza parlor in the mall.uv orders it and both of them wait for the pizza.
uv- so you like this mall?
manatya- ofcourse why wouldn;t i. this mall is nice and i like the stores here as well.
uv- true waise bhi this mall is for girls.
manatya- what? there are some nice stores for guys too.
uv- ok fine if you think so..
manatya- ok you don't belive me.
uv- ummm yeah...
manatya- fine then i will buy a nice watch to prove it.
uv- no you don't have too plz manatya.
manatya- aree you are my firend naa ok lets do this then we buy each other something. lets buy promises rings which will reminds us of each other on how much we care and love each other as friends and we will always be there for each other.
uv smiles and gets up.
manatya looks at him as uv's eyes is set on manatya.he comes closer and closer. manveer can feel each other's breath and uv stops. he bends down and whispers to manatya that their friendship doesn;t need a prove because their friendship will always be the most important thing for him no matter what then he takes manatya hand and kisses it saying you will always be my first and last priority no matter what happens in our lives. manatya is teary eyes and she gets up and starts walking. she walks couple of steps and trips on her heels(she is wearing 4 inches) uv runs to manatya but manatya is on the floor and tries to get up. uv helps her but manatya is unable to get up. they try coupe of times but manatya looks at uv and nods her head in a no. uv looks her and tells manatya to keep her hands on his shoulders. manatya agrees and uv picks manatya up and starts walking.manatya looks at uv but uv is looking straight and they get out of the mall. uv calls for taxi and puts manatya slowly in the taxi and all this while manatya is looking lovingly at uv. in the taxi manveer talk. uv tells the driver lets go to the nearest hospital.
uv holds manatya's hand- princess are you okay? we are going to the hospital right now.
manatya- nahin it's just a little sprain i will be fine.
uv(worried)- no you are not okay i am taking you to the hospital.
manatya- uv plz she holds uv's hands and tells him that she is fine.
uv- are u sure princess?
mantya- i am fine baba.. plzzz belive me..
uv- ok princess(he holds manatya's face in his hands and starts talking) princess i am going to stay in your room tonight ok even if you refuse and if ur pain gets worse we are going to the doctor next morning . give me a promise.
manatya looks at him and tells him i promise you.
uv hugs manatya tightly and kisses her forehead.
uv tells driver not to go to the hospital and he gives the driver the address of the hotel. driver gets pissed but he agrees.uv is relaxed and looks at manatya with a relief.
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Hi Shivani 🤗 hope u are fine
Lovely update ...Manveer scenes are so cute
Thxs for this nice update yaar ...do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
hey welcome back
hope manyata will confess in next part
continue soon🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

L0vd it shivani update s0on
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Really, very cute!! Eager to read the next part!! Plzz do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...really really loved it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

~U.P.D.A.T.E.~

Manveer reaches the hotel and uv carries manatya to her room. Manatya stares at uv with a smile on her face but uv just looks straight and keep walking until he reaches manatya's room. She opens the door for uv with her card and uv takes her in. Uv slightly puts manatya on the bed and manveer share a eyelock. Both of them gets lost in each other's eyes. Finally the eyelock breaks when they hear a knock at the door and its waiter asking manveer to order for dinner. manatya tells her order and so does uv/ manveer starts talking.
uv- how are you feeling princess?
manatya- much better just a little bit of pain.
uv- don't worry you will be fine.

uday holds manatya's hand and gives her a smile. manayta nods her head and gives a smile back. the dinner arrives and uv feeds manatya. manatya makes faces at uv but he just laughs it off and makes faces back at manatya. her leg starts aching and manatya screams in pain. uv gets worried and calls for the doctor. while waiting for the doctor uv holds manatya hand and tells her not to worry but tears start to roll down manatyas cheeks and uv gets really angry and pissed off. he helds manatya's face in his hands and tells her that he will do anything to take away her pain so trust him because as long he is alive no pain will ever be able to touch her. manatya hugs uv tightly and uv hugs her back. doc comes and uv let go of manatya instantly. uv in angry tone asks doc why he is late? the doc apoloziges and recommends to get x-ray done but he gives manatya painkiller for the night n leaves. manatya takes medicine and uv sits next to her on the bed. he holds her hand and manatya falls asleep on his shoulder. uv admires her beauty and tells himself that he will never let any pain touch her because it will have to go through him before it gets his princess and kisses her foreheads. uv whispers in her ears i love you and kisses her on her cheek and falls asleep. manatya smiles to herself after hearing it.

Next Morning...

manatya wakes up and tries to move her hand but uv has a tight grip on. she smiles to herself and slowly tries uv to let go of her hand but instead the grip gets stronger. manatya comes closer to uv and she whispers in uv's ears good morning but uv is asleep. she blows wind on his hair but he is still asleep. finally manatya kisses his cheek and uv wake up and manatya yella good morning prince udaybeer.. uv smiles to her and hugs her tightly. both manveer enjoy the hug but let go of each other after realizing what they have done, uv excuses himself to orfer some coffee. while manatya just blushes. uv comes back with a cup of tea for manatya and coffee for himself. after the coffee. uv goes to his room to get ready and comes back. He helps manatya get up and takes her to the bathroom. to help her further he makes the shower handle loose so manatya doesn;t have to put in much power to turn it on. as he is about to leave manatya turns it on by accident and uv rushes to save manatya but both of them get wet. manayat bursts out in laughter and so does uv. manveer shares a eyelock, manatya's hair blocks her eyes and uv fixes it. manatya hugs uv tightly and uv picks her up. as uv is about to walk manatya's hair get stuck into his shirt's button. both manveer tries to take it out at the same time but stop. after a min manatya tries to take her hair out but uv signals her not to and he takes it out. uv starts walking but the floor is slippery due to the water so he almost trips but he gets hold of himself n manveer end up under the shower again. both of them feel nervous and embarassed. uv puts manatya down. manatya asks her why and he tells her that carrying her is risky since they almost slipped once and he doesn;t want to land up in hospital with her. manatya hits him and uv slips again and manatya falls on him. both of them share a laughter. manatya tries to get up but she couldn't so uv tells her to turn around and slowly she turns around and manveer share a eyelock. manveer comes closer and they could feel each other's breath. both of them look at each other unable to deny the feelings they have for each other, uv trying to hide his feelings with a half smile and manatya trying not to look at uv's intense eyes which were screaming her name. manatya shyed away and looked down like she was waiting for this moment but now it's here she doesn't know what to do. uv on the other hand was looking at manatya and thinking to himself that his princess was with him at this moment and his heart kept beating faster because he knew that this was the right time to make the move to confess his love for his princess. the water was pouring down their faces and their hearts starting beat as one. the unsaid feelings were now being said with the eyes, words were not needed to express their feelings. both of them looked at each other this one last time before they listened to their hearts and confessed their love.manveer finally confessed with a kiss. All the feelings were exposed and now manveer were offically a couple... the true love birds at last found a way into each other's heart.
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago

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