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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice..really well written..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update Shivani ...look forward to the charity ball i can smell huge drama there afterall J will be there Update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri01

Lovely update Shivani ...look forward to the charity ball i can smell huge drama there afterall J will be there Update soon dear

thanks. u got it right there is def lots of drama store in next update. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Surya.Ravi, angelina_angel, navyan07, dumas, salekh1-thanks guys for the reading and the lovely comments.😳 nxt time i will probably add some spoliers for future updates.
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Manayta gets a nightmare about losing akash n wake sup sweating. she drinks water and is thinking about akash n if she should talk to him or not. she is lost in her thoughts when uday calls her. she picks up and says hello. uday wishes her gud morning and asks her who is she taking to the charity ball. manatya says she is going by herself. uv laughs n tells her it's in the rules that u have to come with a guy/girl as a date. manatya says oh nooo... akash toh already pissed hain since the whole drama that happened yesterday so i think i will cancel it. uv asks manatya to call akash. manatya refuses. uv replies that fights happens between couples but i also know u guys love each other so don't let little things come in between u guys so just call naa.. manatya- u r right i will call him. uv says ok call him right now. manatya says yes guru ji n laughs. uv- accha chalo i will talk to u later bye. manatya calls akash n he picks up. manatya tells akash that if he wants to go to the charity ball with her? akash says but u said we should keep our distances. manatya- yeah but it's a rule that u have to have a date in order to enter the ball so u r bf so i am asking u. plz come naaa... akash is silent for few mins and tells manatya- sorry babes i can;t go i have work n it's my new job so i am soo sorry. manatya- ok i guess i will not go then n we can have dinner together or something we need to talk plz say yes. akash- look manatya my work is important right now i really have to concentrate on it plz understand naa. manatya- ok bye talk to u later then i love you. akash says bye n hangs up. manatya is sad and thinks to herself why did i argued with him yesterday? i am really losing my mind on this fights and drama. idk what to do anymore? on the other side akash is thinking to himself and saying manatya is just acting i know she will go with uv n then i will caught her. she cannot fool me like she always does but akash remembers how manatya was begging for him. right then jay calls and asks him to pick her up at 7. akash tells her he is not going anymore n tells her the convo n hangs up. jay is furious n calls akash again. akash yells at jay asking her to stop calling. jay tells him that manatya is fooling u big time n she id def going to the ball if u want to catch her n uv together then come with me or else. akash starts thinking and agrees. manatya calls uv to tell him that she is not going anymore since akash refused. uv tells her that he was going with unnati but he will go with her now. unnati is listening to uv n nods her head with a smile n then she tells manatya that she will go with her dad n in the rules it says u have to have a date like a guy beside u since it's formal n all but it doesn't say it has to be ur bf naa so i am ok with it. manatya thanks unnati and tells unnati u r the best. unnati says ur welcome n see u at the ball n leaves.uv starts talking n tells manatya to be ready at 7. manatya smiles and tells uv that ur my true friend thanks soo much. jay hears it n smile to herself.🥳

in the evening:
manatya and jay are both dressed up and saying bye to the elders. uv comes there and manatya is smiling and winks at uv. jay sees this and smiles to herself.😈 manatya asks her where is jay's date and jay replies her date will meet her at the charity ball. manatya says ok bye. both jay and manatya leaves. manatya goes with uv n jay alone in her car. komal,brijraj, and ds leaves afterwards. manatya goes upto the car and uv bows down n kisses her hand. he gives her a rose and then opens the door for her. manatya smiles. uv opens the door n sits in the car,
manatya- thank u soo much for coming and this rose is beautiful.
uv- areee after all we r besties so no thankyou's.
manatya- but u deserved it and she hugs him. uv hugs her back.
uv- u r looking gorgeous my princess.
manatya- u r looking hot.
uv blushes n says chalo atleast u find me hot.
manatya- u r really gud looking no lies.
uv- don't make me blush.
manatya- truth is sweet.
uv- what?
manatya- i made that up.
uv- u r cute
manatya- u r handsome.
both of them laughs it off.
uv- we r just crazy
manatya- soo true idk why i am saying this random things.
uv- u r in a gud mood.
manatya- yes i am finally a day without stress.
uv- aww don't stress out on little things.
manatya- plz uv yaar don't start on akash i just want to enjoy this night.
uv- ok as u say princess.

manveer reaches the place. first manatya gets out and poses for the camera n then uv gets out n poses for the camera then manveer pose as a couple for the camera n the media doesn't stop clicking so finally uv rewuests them to stop n leaves with manatya. both enters the place as a couple. uv has his hand around manatya's waist and manatya has her hand around his waist. everyone looks at them n gossip about them. uv tells manatya soo we r a couple now atleast for tonight. manatya- yes we are...manatya meets people and soo does uv n then both of them sit on the table. the organizers of the charity ball welcomes everyone and says a long message on how the organization started n the top contributers are the royal families n he thanks them. next they introduce princess manatya as their special guest and manatya walks up to the middle and the chairperson hands her the mike. manatya gives her little speech n thanks the community for accepting her. everyone claps and manatya smiles n leaves. she comes back to uv to sit with me. ds,brijraj and komal are proud of manatya. manatya asks uv where is jay the couple dance is about to start. uv nods he doesn't know but he she left around the same time. the couple dance is announced and the couples starts to come to the dance floor. uv asks manatya and she agrees. the song ishq sufiyana starts playing and manveer starts dancing both of them share a smile. right then manatya spots jay and she tells uv jay is finally here and a person follows jay but manatya couldn't see his face properly. jay takes the person to the dance floor beside manveer and when manatya sees the person it's none other than akash. uv is shocked as well to see jay and akash. manatya gets teary eyes but uv holds her close n tells her to close her eyes since they need to dance for couple of minutes. manatya nods n she closes her eyes n puts her head on uv's chest. everybody is gossiping on how cute they look n manveer are soo romantic. akash si dancing with jay and he tells jay manatya doesn't even care instead she is just enjoying this. jay tells akash no she is sad but she is covering it up. believe me. akash nods and keeps dancing. after a while manatya leave the dance floor with uv. uv n manatya are outside but they notice media so they decide to leave n come back for dinner. manatya agrees. uv drives manatya to the beach.
manatya- i can't believe akash ditched me. i need to talk to him right now.
uv- manatya listen thats what he wants you to do.
manatya- what?
uv- i think actually ia m sure it's jay's trick to insult you at the charity ball. trust me princess i know jay too well.
manatya- that jay she is dead for sure.
uv- i know u r angry but don't get driven by ur emotions.
manatya- what should i do?
uv- listen we will stay here for few minutes n u can calm down then we will go back in there and act like normal but after the dinner we will discuss this for sure. i know u want to talk to akash right not but ur not an ordinary girl but a princess so u have to think about it before u do something specially when there is media all over the place.
manatya starts crying and breaks down.
uv bends down and hugs manatya.manatya hugs uv tightly and cries more. uv keeps his hand on her head n tells her to talk to him instead of crying so she can let out her feelings. manatya says ok and she lets uv go. she gets up and starts talking.
manatya- today akash has lost my trust idk what he is trying to prove by coming to the ball with jay. i mean if he can't understand our friendship then it's his problem. love is all about trust n if he can't trust me then i guess we r not meant to be. i thought akash knew me really well but today he proved everyone right n my love wrong. idk what to do anymore? akash broke my heart into million pieces and it hurts soo much. i have tried everything but he keeps testing me by doing stupid tricks.uv hold manatya hands tightly and he is getting angry at akash for making manatya cry but he controls his anger and he holds manatya's face in his hands. manatya looks upto him with pain in her eyes. uv wipes her tears with his hands and tells her that akash did a big mistake byt hurting you and now. manatya tells uv she will decide what will be done to akash. uv says ok and tells manatya he will be always by her side no matter what. manatya hugs uv tightly and starts crying again. uv tells manatya that it times to go back again n this time it will be akash who will be hurt and i promise u that. manatya looks at uv with a suprise n uv replies back belive me. he takes manatya's hand n takes her to the car. he tells manatya to fix her makeup and hair. manatya's fixes her hair and make-up n then manveer reaches the place. before they step out uv explains the plan n manatya agrees. uv gets out of the car n opens the door for manatya. uv offers a hand n manatya accepts it. uv asks manatya so r u ready. manatya replies yes. both of them have anger in their eyes and a straight face. manveer walks in and jay n akash are shocked to see them back.
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update loved it love how uday stood by her and did not let her break and showed her how to protect her self and let her know how j is and now she realize that akash is stupid
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow thanks for the update. I really enjoyed it...sooo much drama and suspense .
Thanks
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manveer enters and jay n akash are shocked to see them back. manatya glares at akash and akash looks down. uv gives a killer looks to jay and jay gets scared. jay tells akash i think uv is upto something. akash asks her if she knows what he is upto? jay tells akash she doesn;t know what uv will do next only uv knows that. akash gets pissed off n tells jay ok fine i am going then whats the point? jay tells akashs to stop to see what happens next n she needs him. akash looks at jay and then at manatya. manatya is all laughing and smiling talking to uv. akash gets annoyed n decides to stay. few minutes later uv announces that him and manatya are going to perform salsa together. akash is stunned and jay is about to faint but akash catches her. uv points a guy and the spotlight hits jay and akash. akash is embrassed and lost on what to do? everybody is looking at them. jay gets herself together and stands up straight. jay looks around and notice how everyone is staring at her. uv winks at manatya and manatya winks back. manatya comes and stand next to uv. uv gives her the mike. manatya greets everyone.
manatya- as uv announced we are going to dance on salsa but there is a surprise?
everybody starts wondering and talking. after few minutes manatya speaks up.
manatya- so the surprise is our very lovely couple jay and akash are going to perform with us so plz everyone give them a round of applause.
jay and akash are shocked again and they smile to everybody as everyone is clapping for them n vijaybhai is cheering for jay. jay gives vijaybhai glares n he screams louder. akash pushes jay closer and asks her what the hell is happening? jay says now u know uv's plan happy now? don't try to leave cuz uv will let u n i don't want to be the clown here okay so just play along. akash gives another glare and jay tells akash plz i am not excited to do this either so just play along and let's get over with this. just follow my lead ok. akash looks at manatya and tries talking to her but she ignores. uv comes to jay and akash he tells them that they have 6 mins to get ready and choose a song and jay says u didn't do this right. uv(winks) jay u don't want me to tell everyone about ur tricks naa so just shut up and play along n trust me if u try to play any tricks even one little trick on me n manatya u will have to pay for it n when i say pay i mean paying with interest so be a nice rajkumari n dance nahin toh u know the rest.i don't need to tell u anymore should i? jay is angry but she is quiet since she knows she can;t do anything. uv huga akash n tells him u did whatever u wanted to but beta now it's my turn so all i can say is best of luck manatya's majnu.😆
Uv announces that jay and akash will perform first, jay looks at akash and akash looks at jay on wondering what they should do? everybody clapping and cheering jay-akash. jay gets nervous but she gets hold of herself. she holds akash's hands and walks him to the middle of the stage. akash gives her a signal that lets go from here but jay just gives akash a fake smile n tell him to lets dance. akash holds jay closer n they get into a pose. jay whispers in akash's ears that they should just pretend since everyone is here n if they don't dance jay will become the gossip of the town next morning. akash looks at manatya and manatya just gives him a glare n a fake big smile. he looks back at jay and tells her whatever idc anymore lets get it over with. jay nods her head and says ok follow me lead. akash says ok.uv tells the guy to keep a spotlight on jay-akash.

jay snaps her fingers and the music starts oh.la...laa.laaa. starts playing jay dances to the beat but when the lyrics starts she stops and looks at akash. everybody is laughing at jay-akash n so is manveer. jay snaps her fingers again and sheila ki jawani plays jay dances in the beginning but when the lyrics starts she stops again. everyone is laughing outloud and briju gets angry n leaves with komal. ds is still there she asks dance to quit n come with her. jay says no i want to do this n i don't want to be a joke. akash is just standing there. ds taunts akash saying tumhe toh apni izzat ka ki koi paravah(care) nahin hain par rajkumari jaynandini has a reputation so plz just get out this instant...uv comes in between and tells ds to let akash-jay perform kyunki if they won't perform it would be more insulting ds gives in and agrees. she goes back into the audience n warns jay just to dance on whatever song is gonna be played next..teri oreee.. from sing is king plays and jay-akash does a romantic number. jay is trying her best but akash is just not giving in. he is staring at manveer who is talking and joking around. at the end akash drops jay on the floor and she twists her ankle since she is wearing 4inches heel. ds gets furious and leaves jay there. uv and manatya just vanishes from the scene. akash is all left alone and jay is crying in pain. akash decides to pick jay up and he goes to the hospital with jay. manveer is watching it from far away and laughing. media is going crazy and taking pics of jay-akash continously.jay is fainted n akash is trying his best to avoid the media. he is looking for manatya but manatya is nowhere to be found. after jay-akash leave. manveer shows up and acts all surprised. they act to rush to the hospital but instead they go on a beach to celebrate their vicitory.

at the beach...
uv and manatya are drinking red wine and talking. uv is laughing at akash's situtationa nd how akash deserved it. manatya laughs at jay n how ds got mad at jay for dancing on item numbers. both of them stand up and imitate jay-akash dance steps. they are having a blast and right then uv trips and falls on the sand. manatya tries to help him get up but instead she falls too on top of uv. uv manages to get up and picks up manatya in his arms asking her if she is okay. she just nods her head. manveer has a long stare. thoughts going through both of their heads.uv admiring manatya's beauty and he is lost in her eyes. manatya thinking to herself why she is attracted to uv? she always have this attraction towards uv ever since from the beginning. both of them are just thinking about each other n trying to figure what exactly is going on between them it's less than love but more than a friendship. what relationship are they merging into?

manveer dance
uv whispers into manatya's ear shall we dance? manatya replies here. uv- so what? manatya says ok. uv- i wanted to make-up for the dance we were suppose to do at the charity baal n anyways this is better. manveer- oh i completely forgot but this is def better place.
piya re piya plays from tere naal love ho gaya
manveer slows dances for awhile.uv spins manatya around couples of times and then he takes a bow. they play around with each other and uv lifts manatya uv and brings her down. manatya is laughing and uv spins her around couple of times. manatya tells uv to stop as she is about to faint so uv stops and carries her in her arms he puts manatya on a chair and helps her sit up straight as he is doing that they get close and both of them share a eyelock. uv breaks the eyelock n moves away as he notices that he is getting emotional. uv starts talking how much fun it was to see jay in trouble and she is def in hospital for a month. manatya laughs and tells uv mast plan thaa. she comes n sits next to uv. uv starts walking again.. manatya stops uv and tells him that u have been a great friend n idk what i would do without u thank you soo much. uv stays silent and manatya calls his name in a low tone uv.. he turns around. manatya asks him what happened? uv says nothing i just got emotional no one has ever said that to me. manatya says awww and hugs him tightly. all of a sudden both of them are enjoying the feeling and soon they get lost into each other. manatya breaks the hug and moves away. uv pushes her closer and their eyes met... they get closer...closer...closer and about to kiss but right them manatya's phone rings and she pushes uv away.



uv and manatya have a akward moment and manatya breaks the silence in an excuse of calling ds and letting her know about jay but right then ds calls manatya asking her if she is at the hospital. manatya tells ds that she n uv are on their way. ds says ok me,komal and briju will meet u there. manveer rushes to the hospital. manveer reaches there. akash is standing outside the hospital. the whole family ignores akash but manatya decides to have a talk with him. uv reassures manatya that he is here if she needs him n leaves.. manatya waves bye to uv n her family. both of them go to a lonely place it's darkness. manatya brekas the ice..
manatya- so how was ur work?
akash- loook...
manatya- dekho enough of ur lies and this drama... atleast tell me now what exaclty u wanted to prove by coming to the ball with my own sister?
akash- i guess we have to talk now.
manatya- thats what i have been trying to tell u. i told u everything but you have always hided something from me...
akash- are u having an affair with uv?
manatya- no... oh god not again.
akash- dekho i need to know the truth n u and uv have become really close spending every minute together eating,hanging out going to parties and what not? i look really stupid when ur bf looks like ur friend and ur bff looks like ur bf.do u even know how that feel forget about understanding?
manatya- really? now u tell me do u know how it feels when eeveryone around u including ur family keeps telling u the guy u love the most is the wrong one and they will never accept the rishta. i am trying day and night that somehow my family see you the way i do a great, nice and caring guy. the reason i got close to uv quickly not because of an affair but he supports me and my relationship with u. he even told me to stop talking to him if u don;t approve of him.
akash- thats all drama. jay told me that..
manatya- great.. out of all the people u trust jay more than ur gf.she is the biggest liar n most importantly she hates me so in order to get uv she is creating misunderstandings between us. she talks to you about me and uv having affair so u put a pressure on me to end my friendship with uv so she can have uv all by herself.
akash- okay fine but uv loves u.
manatya- yes he does but he respects me n he never forced me to love him back.
akash- manatya... i cannot stand the fact that uv loves u n i feel that he will take u away from me.
manatya- look akash this is last time i will not repeat this n even after this convo if u don't trust me then i will have to think about our relationship.
akash is shocked and he couldn't believe what he just heard. he starts to get angry but manatya is lost in herself and keeps going on.
manatya- i love u n trust u but u need to show me the same love n trust back. jay is just a liar n uv is a great friend of mine but only a friend n thats it. he has always supported me took care of me and been there for me even u had chikki and soni have i ever suspected u. to be honest i will never leave uv as a friend he has done soo much for me n if i leave him then it will prove ur point right naaa.
akash is moving towards manatya angrily and hold her tightly. manatya has her back on akash. she gets scared and tells akash to let her go but akash is keeping a tight grip her. manatya moves but akash is not seeing the pain manatya is going thru he is just in full rage. finally manatya slaps him and akash cools down. he is shocked and suprised. he tries to stop manatya but uv comes in between and stops akash. he stands infront of manatya and manatya holds on to uv's shirt and gets behind him. she takes a peek at akash with fear in her eye from uv's shoulder. akash gets furious and he has a breakdown. uv gives a warning to akash to never try talking to manatya again. akash has tears in his eyes and uv leaves with manatya holding his hand. manveer goes inside the the hopsital. manatya hugs uv for comfort and starts crying. uv puts his arm around and manatya and they walk. akash is looking at them and thinking jay was right.

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Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful Update...👏👏👏
Loved
Manveer natural chemistry...
Both J and Akash should understand that they are made for each other...😆
Manyata's argument with Akash is highlight and simply spellbound with the way she told him how Uday is better than him indirectly...
Thanks for PM...
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