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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#311

awww..loved it..it was so beautifully written & portrayed...really very well done...brijraj & manyata's scenes were absolutely touching..manyata & udayveer's scenes were too sweet...a very nice os..i completely enjoyed reading it..job well done...👏

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 13 years ago

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Anjali

@Anjalika13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

its awesome 😳

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#313

beautiful os very well written and emotional done loved the bond that was created between maanyath and her dad loved it loved how she choose her in the end loved how uday told her he will always be there to catch her very beautiful tanks for the pm

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#314

this is really amazimg...

the bond you have potryed here between manyata and brijraj is really appreciable and heart touching...

loved it throughly...

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Adden

@Add123

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#315

OMG! I adored every paragraph of this OS ... it was really sweet and well written😉

I absolutely loved Brij and Manyata bonding, I really hope tht happens in the show!😊

Ohh! and the last scene, was AMAZING👏 Loved ManVeer 😉

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#316

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ADITI

@ultravioletray

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#317

wow..lovely OS...the father & daughter bonding was so sweet...tnanx 4 the PM😃

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#318

thanks everyone! all daughters love their fathers, I just wanted to display that in this comeback os lol. I am glad you enjoyed it! I am just happy Dad is on the road to recovery!

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Jyoti

@bl.drama.lover

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#319

thnks for the PM sonali babes...😉

n i love it n love it really nicely written yaar sachii beautifully touchy scene between M n her dad really too good also loved the sweet scenes between Manveer as well really awesomely done babe..😉👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...

well i hope u write more i miss reading ur OS's...😳plzz do continue writing soon...😉😳

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Binita

@...Binny...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#320

Sonali.. missed your OS's.. 🤗

Loved it... I have always wanted Manyata and Brijraj to share a special bond.. you have beautifully portrayed their relationship.. and the ending was too cute..!!!

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