Manveer FF: |Choomantar| PMlist & Ch.4 (Pg9) Jan 4

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nidhi

@roking_nidhi223

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

loved the part and the jungle part was so good

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome part...loved the fight scene and the jungle sequence...update soon...pm me

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Troll Master Gogo!

@S.H.I.E.L.D.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Chap 1:

I had an amused smile from the beginning till the end. It was so great! :D

Chap 2:

ROFL. I loved your personal commentaries like "A solid hero waali entry" "full hero ishtyle". They made me start 🤣🤣 every time!

Best line: "Yaa phir aapke haath per nochlegi, sach, experience se bol raha hoon"

Best part: "Altu Jalal tu, Aayi balaa ko taal tu" and everything that followed. 🤣🤣🤣

The whole chapter was bloody entertaining! So filmy and action-romancy and what not :P

On an end note, I LOVED it and please do PM me when you update!!!

TC.

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crazysandhir

@crazysandhir

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wooowoowoo

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nizza/other user shona

@nizzalicios...

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

WOW thapad by moniya was great...and manveer scene was too dense in forest to imagine...

aand altu jalatu was great...

loving ure ff...

i am nizza known by other id lakshyass in forum..but for recieving pm's of ff and os plz pm me on this id...

nizza

and merry christmas

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Hayyyeee! LOVED IT!!! Mera Hero Uday and the Drama Queen Manyata! Simply loved loved loved LOVED it! Keep rocking and continue! <3

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528223

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

LOOOL! That was epic! I loved when Manyata was just like 'Haila! What was that!?' I could totally picture her saying that in real life. :) And the part where Udayveer was like, 'I should just tie a bell around her neck or something...' That was hilarious, because he should! ;)

Update sooon! :)