The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 79

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

388.7k

Users

175

Likes

2.8k

Frequent Posters

sourmisery thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago
OMFG!!! WHAT A UPDATE!!!

I was laughing like crazy at the lunch part. Ain't Manyata a perfect wifey? :P Ok, I admit! Yash is SOOO nice here. Nicer than in JNC :P I like him here. Urgh..bloody hell! You cut short at such a bad point! Now have to wait for JNC!!! You cruel cruel girl!!

GR is so political...meh! I don't like this man, why do I get the feeling he'll try to complicate UV's life as much as possible? Anyway! Can NOT wait for the London part at all! Mina won't forgive him, or them, and I think London is where the battleground is set. But can't predict anything more than that...!

Love ya Reeha! Was missing UVC so MUCH!! Thank you! <3
180506 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: morningstar

thank you for continuing with tis ff!!!! i absolutely love it... and the best thing is how u show the same scene from different perspectives... from j's pov and from uday's pov... loved uday and manyata's relationship... it is strong and the best thing is that they have no illusions about each other... they truly love each other with all their better and worse parts!!!! p.s. is mina yash's sister???

Oh boy. I think I have a name problem. LOL!

The Aryan vs. "Liam Yashvardan Ryan" thing should have been thought out. Really didn't think that through and everyone sort of used that to connect Yash as being Aryan 😔
Damn it!
LOL! Then Mina and Mina.
I swear I am so bad with names.
Mina is Mina Randhawa, heiress, 25 yeards old, only child, and from the UK.
Yash's sister Mina, is Mina Ryan, rich, 28 years old, Oldest child and a twin, from the United States.
Yes, I know it's confusing, but its too late to change names now 😆
Somia3 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
yash is uday's cousin
and
uday find out to
what will uday do
support his father
or
his cousin/brother

i hope uday stand by yash
180506 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima4a

First one to comment... jeej!!!!

OMG, what the hell
this was SOOO awesome
really yaar, you really have a god gift (writing)
It was such a pleasure reading it
and the way I was reading... my family thought I had gone crazy
when I knew that heir aryan is yash, I went screaming OMG OMG OMG
hahaha
keep it going babe
love UVC

Thank you Fatima :)

LOL! it's OK, my family thinks I'm crazy all the time, sometimes I smile while typing scenes and my sister goes, "Who the hell are you talking to"
and I'll say, "I wish I was actually talking to some one, it would make me feel more normal"
thanks for waiting! <3
180506 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mais-

OMFG!!! WHAT A UPDATE!!!

I was laughing like crazy at the lunch part. Ain't Manyata a perfect wifey? :P Ok, I admit! Yash is SOOO nice here. Nicer than in JNC :P I like him here. Urgh..bloody hell! You cut short at such a bad point! Now have to wait for JNC!!! You cruel cruel girl!!

GR is so political...meh! I don't like this man, why do I get the feeling he'll try to complicate UV's life as much as possible? Anyway! Can NOT wait for the London part at all! Mina won't forgive him, or them, and I think London is where the battleground is set. But can't predict anything more than that...!

Love ya Reeha! Was missing UVC so MUCH!! Thank you! <3

Maisy, what time is it in your homeland, should you not be asleep?😆

You don't make sense Maisy. This Yash is the same Yash in the JNCs 🤣
I know, I super duper cruel, but it must be done. I can't go to the Ball without Updating the JNCs, and it will either have to be 2 parts or 3 parts of the JNCs before it's caught up to where I need it to be.
Remember, same world. Stories are tied.
Yash is more then Just someone for Jai. he is also someone for Uday.
Do you find it a little odd that Uday doesn't have friends?
I think everyone needs a great friend. Yash and DC (DC is more then just a secondary charecter might I add) are those two friends.

GR is very political, and there is more to this story. A LOT MORE.
You're right, London is the battle ground. I've been working up to this for a while. As I said two worlds. Very important battle.
😊
180506 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25


Reeha, honestly i find this current mina, very much similar to j(in JNC's). she is doing all this for revenge and i can understand the gravity of her thoughts. she must have been suffered through a lot.
she is understandable character. i emphasize with her. But she knows that UV is engaged and he hasn't made any such commitment so i also understand UV. Basically both are right in their places. UV's upbringing had turned him into heartless human being and of course he don't know their is something beyond words . he don't know why a girl is driven crazy for him. he doesn't have heart then so he don't know the meaning of pain through which mina was suffering. manyata in true sense bring out human within UV. she is being light to dark UV.
Reeha , please don't turn mina into full blown vamp. She is not bad but she doesn't know how to move on just like j. she deserves a happy ending.

reeha update ASAP. waiting very eagerly.
this is the best ff and i love it even mopre than JNC's .
waiting for a blockbusting twist now, try to move on to introduce something like that fast

Good Pick up Wendy. Mina is not pure evil. She is a grey Charecter. She is a much more sincere Charecter then JN was initially.

She understands UV's engagement, she just doesn't like how he was still able to get things both ways. It kind of pisses her off (ok, not Kinda, it really does piss her off)
Uday is a better person, so he does feel guilt, but Mina only knows the old Uday, hence why she doesn't understand that he feels guilt.
Mina...happy ending?
We'll find out. What did you have in mind?
180506 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Somia3

yash is uday's cousin

and
uday find out to
what will uday do
support his father
or
his cousin/brother

i hope uday stand by yash

Hi Somia! I'll keep that in mind 😉

Do you like or dislike the fact that Yash and Uday are Cousins?

(well, second cousins, but still cousins)
Somia3 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
i love the fact that uday and yash are cousins

so cute

-JEHAN- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
omg...awesome update...i was laughing through out this chapter like crazy...
i loved it...loved this chapter aloott...i was waiting for ur update and finally u updated...
loved it...i love ur UV'C...and i loved uv and yash convo part the most when yash said "MIRCHIE LAGI BHAI" i was rolling on the floor...laughing...omg...that scene was hilarious🤣 🤣
and then lunch scene in office was more than awesome...loved it...👏
👏👏
and uday and yash are cousins...hmmm...interesting...i would love to read about it...
reeha u r awesome amazing and magnificent writer...👏👏👏
i think we should request IF now that there should be a button LOVE wd comment like and all...really
i don't know how to express i can simply say that i love ur UV'C alot...😳
xxDaydreameRxx thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG Reeha!!! This was like AMAZING!!
don't know where to start..but first of all, the most amazing part of ur FF is how well-thought out ur characters are..honestly every single flashback means and signifies so much. Even the actual show is barely as deep as ur FF and i mean it when I say that this UV is even more thought-out than the CVs have planned out the UV in the show..honestly, ur FF does such an amazing job in evoking just the right feeling and emotions for the characters..like right now i didn't know if this was possible because I'm so UV-obsessed, but I'm just IN LOVE with Yash right now..I never thought much about reading JNC because honestly I just read ffs cuz I'm such an UV-obsessed freak, but honestly i think I'm gonna be reading it soon just for YASH! Aaahh I'm starting to love him! *FIngers Crossed* for Jagat OUT and Yash IN!
Now to ur chapter..it was hilarious! Literally at so many spot I was just laughing out loud. 🤣 ..the best part is that its all so realistic. You show both the good and dark sides of UV, even the ones that make me flinch. But in the end, it just makes it so much more beautiful to see how love has transformed him. 😳
I honestly can't wait for UV to find out who Yash's girl is! 😉😃 And the Oxford Ball!! I'm soo excited! I personally get this feeling that Meena is going to try to embarrass Manyata in front of everyone, cuz u know Manyata has in the end a different upbringing than UV and the others. And I also wonder if this may lead to an insecure Manyata track in the future. 🤔 Okay well thats my guess for this chapter. 😛
Anywyas, just wanted to say CONGRATS for ur TWENTIETH part and crossing the 100 mark!! Honestly. I don't know why ur surprised. You deserve this and MORE and this remains one of the best FFs I've ever come across! 😳
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 13 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".