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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

don't know what you up to but i am worried loved the old korean lady very cute uday was the bad boy hope the past does not come back to haunt him

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

omg reeha this was fab...great update...it was fun to read the adventures of teenager UV. cont soon

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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

nice...hope olivia doesnt turn out to be a third angle... :)

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

lovely update Reeha really enjoyed it!

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navyan07

@navyan07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

You are truly an amazing writer!

Here are some flowers for this amazing FF:

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Hi Reeha 🤗 hope u doing well dearie

Wow this is fabulous I love the Korean lady and her meaning conversation with UV but am afraid with UV falshback and Olivia and how this will this affect Manveer...am wondering what u hv behind ur mind Reeha...plzzz update soon can't wait for the next one.

TC Love ya🤗

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

awesome update rheea..a insight into Uday's teens, that was quite interesting..he surely knew how to maintain relationships with no strings attached...hmm...Uday thinking about one such of his passing affairs, i hope this is not a indication that, we are soon going to come face to face with some or the other the girl of his past, in the present... anyway i wish Uday takes Manyata along with him to the Oxford Ball..that would be interesting...i was wondering if Uday & Manyata over a cup of coffee would discuss the goof ups & naughty things during the time they have been away, for the past 16 years..that will be good..anyway a nice update...really good... keep it up...please do continue soon...waiting for the next part very eagerly..😊

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meerakhan45

@meerakhan45

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

i loved it... but...

But i missed manyata...

Otherwise very good ...

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@thejazzgal

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

perfect!!

its like perfect UV way..

u make us live the moments..

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NightStarr

@NightStarr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: reeha...k

I'm so late on all of the replies I so sorry 😔

anyways, I completely agree, I would just LOVE to see Brij tease Manyata and I can see VB doing the same...he sort of does it now too, but only to irriated JN.

As for the PMs...I sort of do them?😆 To be honest, I do them for anyone buddied to me, otherwise it's just too much of a hassel. 😳 Have I already asked for your name NightStarr? Because for the life of me I can't remember

Haha if your replay is late then my replay is super super late! But what can I do exams and applications wouldnt get themselves done by themselves :( haha 😆 Anyways yea I don't even know what to say about the original show as I prefer your version of both Uday/Manyata story and Jay/Yash story so will stick to that. I haven't read chapter 16 as I want to do that in the comfort of my room where I am enjoying a cold drink as the summer seems to be here already and just relaxing while reading 😃 Sooo keep your stories as their the only things that still make me come to this forum because the show will really have to do something magical to turn things around and make me and other audience to like their characters!

I don't know if I have told you my name but I go by Murs its a short version of my name 😊

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