New FF-In It Together Part 7 updated Page 10 29/10 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Thanks dear for such a nice update really enjoyed it a lot and will wait eagerly for the next update dear


Thanks for commenting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Nice one.
Loved the Sinha brothers and Gilanis. Suhasini's tactics were cute. However I found Adarsh a bit too overconfident. I understand Swadheenta was not giving him bhao but still..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update

I wonder how Swa will fall for him.

But it's so good to see whole Sinha family working towards making this alliance happen.

Update soon pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Idiotboxer

Nice one.

Loved the Sinha brothers and Gilanis. Suhasini's tactics were cute. However I found Adarsh a bit too overconfident. I understand Swadheenta was not giving him bhao but still..


Swadheenta will not give bhao to him right now.yeah well Adarsh has to give sound of confidence otherwise if he is not feeling confident how will he convince her of confidence.

Ok I am sensing lot of confidence in my replies to you.😆😆.Thanks for commenting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: parisjtaime

Awesome update

I wonder how Swa will fall for him.

But it's so good to see whole Sinha family working towards making this alliance happen.

Update soon pls


Thanks for commenting.Actually the funny thing is that the Sinha brothers or anybody else have no idea as to what is cooking in Manohar and Suhasini's mind.😆

Adarsh is focusing on his coffee and Suhasini is focusing towards Swadheenta and Adarsh.Both have no idea of what the other is planning.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
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Swadheenta was getting ready for Shraddha's wedding.She had been highly confused about what to wear.First she thought maybe Kanjivaram Saree but than she gave up that thought and wore normal saree.She had wore a baby pink saree with matching Jwellery.Swadheenta looked heavenly beautiful.Asad saw her and was jaw dropped.

Asad (joking)-Freedom aaj toh paka koi tujhe shaadi ke iye propose kar ga !!

Swadheenta (Hitting on his head)-Chu Kar Bandar.

Asad (mischievously)-Ya Coffee ke liye toh definitely poochega...

Swadheenta (getting angry)-Thappad lagoi tujhe ek mai ???

Asad-Arre mai to sirf Mazak kar raha hu yaar...itna serious kyu ho rahi hai.And why are you getting angry on HIM Freedom.Usne tujhe sirf coffe ke liye poocha hai,shaadi karne ko nahi kaha hai..

Swadheenta (calmly)-Asad who mere boss ka beta hai.Do you have any idea what will happen if Suhasini Mam even gets whiff of this matter.Meri job ja sakti hai.I have worked dam hard to reach where I are and I am not going to lose it because of Adarsh.

Asad-(Hugs her)relax kar thoda freedom.Kuch nahi hoga.Ok.Now please smile.

Zubaida (looking adoringly at Swadheenta)-Haye kitni pyaari lag rahi meri bachi !!

Haider(Emotionally)-Swadheenta tujhe aise dekhta hu to lagta hai ki toh bahut badi ho gayi hai aur who bhi bahut jaldi

Swadheenta (smiling)-Aab please saare emotional mat ho jao ek saath.You know I don't like when people cry.Now come on I have to go !!

Asad-Tu scooty pe ja rahi hai ???

Swadheenta (hitting on head)-Pagal hai kya !! I have called a cab for me.

Sinha family too reaches the wedding venue.Adarsh and Abhay are discussing something.Suhasini and Simmi both look at them with great suspicion.Simmi didn't even have the slightest idea of what had been going around with Adarsh and Swadheenta because Suhaini didn't want Simmi to get involved because it would mean that Ahuja sahib would get involved and even though Swadheenta had forgiven him Suhasini had not and Suhasini sisn't like when Ahuja sahib got involved in her family's personal matter.

Simmi-Baby kya ho raha hai ? Tum Adarsh bhaiyya se aise secretly kya baate kar rahe ho ??

Abhay (giving excuses)-Kuch nahi baby...bas aise hi.(Whispering to her) Baad mei ghar jaake bata ta hu.

Simmi-Ok

Simmi's P.O.V

Simmi always felt out of place in this family.Though Abhay always treated her with due respect and loved her very much it was the rest of family where she lagged behind.With Jaya she could not talk much as she was her mother-in-law's favorite and she was all the time trying to be perfect Bahu.jaidev bhaiyya and Adarsh bhaiyya always treated her like their own sister but with her Mother-in-law gosh she tried so much but she never succeeded.She had still not forgiven her and Abhay for eloping and getting married.They all were highly educated and intellectual persons but she was high school drop out with no knowledge of anything but shopping.She had developed good friendship with Swadheenta Ramakrishnan in all thse few months since she had took the case against her father.At first she had got angry with Swadheenta but than she had understood her point of view.SHe was highly upset when her own father had tried to kill Swadheenta.But as soon as she had come to know of that fact she had informed Abhay of the same.Abhay had saved her but her mother-in-law had gotten more angry with Abhay for marrying me without seeing anything about my family.There was no winning with Suhasini Sinha that was for sure.

Jaya (inquisitively)-Jaidev ye Abhay aur Adarsh ke beech kya ho raha hai.Dono kab se aise hi baatei kar rahe hai.

Jaidev (Irritatingly)-Jaya please stay out of it.And yes also Adarsh ke liye koi rishta mat dhoodna yaha.You know Adarsh ko bilkul pasand nahi hai aisi rich family,influential type girls.You remember Vanshika Bundela ke time kya hua tha.

Jaya (Calmly)-Jaidev aap mujh par kyu gussa ho rahe hai.Vanshika ka rishta Papa laye the.Mei nahi.It was just coincidence that Vanshika was my friend.

Jaidev-(strictly)I just told you stay out of it.

Jaya's P.O.V

She had gotten married to Jaidev almost 4 years ago.Jaidev never mentioned to anyone that he had loved somebody else.Mumma's insistence had been one of the reasons why he had agreed to marry her the fact that he reminded her daily with his taunts.She had loved him with all her heart and always made efforts but her husband was never interested in her.For world it was perfect marriage but she knew how perfect it was.They never shred any husband and wife relation let alone a friendly discussion.Whenever she used to see Abhay and Simmi bickering her heart ached for such moments.Her father-in-law had gotten a girl for Adarsh-Vanshika Bundela.She belonged to royal family and had close relations with the family of Chief Minister.Adarsh had been furious at that chice of alliance because he never wanted a girl who would be rich and influential.He always wanted a girl who would be independent and would understand his work.Her mother-in-law had and rest of family had supported Adarsh.But unfortunately her husband had found out that Vanshika was a very good friend of hers and henceforth thought that It was her who had gotten the alliance in the first place.Since then he had been more angry with her and refused to listen to her explanation at all.She never had her husband's love or respect.

Manohar-Kya hua Suhasini did you talk to Mrs Iyyer before the ceremony started ??

Suhasini-Yes I did talk to both of them infact.

Manohar-What did they say ??

Suhasini (Happily)-Well they said that she belongs to a very good family.They are well to do, educated, principled and Swadheenta is a lovely girl.Mrs Iyyer also said that her parents will be here next week.

Manohar (happily)-That is job well done.Now all we can do is wait and watch.

Suhasini-I did my job Manohar aab hamra beta kya karta hai who dekhna hai.Swadheenta is very tough and focused in her work.She is tough nut to crack.

Manohar (Charmingly)-Adarsh mera beta hai Suhasini.And when has anybody been able to resist the charm of men of this house.Tum se behtar kon jaanta hai...😆

Suhasini-We will see about it.We better go and wish Shraddha and Akash.

Here Abhay and Adarsh were still whispering which was making Simmi and Jaya all too suspicious.But Simmi decided to ignore it as she knew Abhay would never hide anything from her.Only Jaidev of all persons knew as to what was cooking in his brothers minds.Jaya was standing when she saw Swadheenta enter and than she suddenly saw Adarsh get all lost and mesmerized seeing her and than it struck Jaya.Did her brother-in-law like Swadheenta.Jaya also realized that Jaidev knew about that but did not tll her maybe because he thought thatshe would spoil things for Adarsh.Suddenly Jaya felt bad,how could her husband even think like that.Adarsh was like her own brother.If he liked Swadheenta than it would be final.She decided to talk to Adarsh after they reached home.

Abhay (hitting his brother on shoulder)- Aise hi dekhte rehne ka irada hai kya Bhai ?? Go and talk to her.

Adarsh-She has just came Chotu.I will talk to her.I will go and meet Shraddha and Akash.
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Shraddha-Thanks Swadheenta for coming.Par mei aunty aur uncle se bahut naraz hu.

Swadheenta-I am sorry Shraddha par tu Appa ko jaanti hai na.He will never take leave until it is necessary.They will visit you when they come next week.

Akash meri best friend ka dhyan rakhna !!

Akash-Ok Adv.Ramakrishnan.😊...Don't worry mei uska poora dhyan rakhuga.

Akash-Ye lo Adarsh bhi aa gaya !! Mera best friend aa gaya finally.

Adarsh (smiling)-Itni yaad kyu aa rahi thi meri.

Akash-Aab Shraddha ke saath uski best friend hai tu mujhe bhi aapna frined chaiye na...

Shraddha (smiling)-Tumhe ka dono ka zhgda karvana hai kya Akash ??

Adarsh (smiling)-Don't worry Shraddha mai lawyers se jhagda nahi karta.Because there is no winning with them.

Swadheenta (sarcastically)-I am sure Mam would love to know your point of view for lawyers.

Adarsh (Charmingly)-I meant it as compliment Swadheenta.

Swadheenta-Shraddha I will take leave now..Best of Luck to both of you.

Shraddha and Akash-Thanks.

Swadheenta got changed before leaving.Shraddha's Mom had asked her to change before leaving as it was not safe to leave with all that Jwellery.She got changed and was set to leave when suddenely some group of boys pushed her off and she feel straight into arms of man she did not even want to see-Adarsh Sinha...what were the chances even.😆.He had actually saved her from those boys push.She would have fallen had it not been him.But didn't didn't to know that.

Swadheenta (straitening up) Damm those boys !! Thank You..

Adarsh (smiling)-Your welcome.You should be careful.

Swaadheenta-I think I can take care of myself Adarsh.

Adarsh-Yes !! I saw that.

Swadheenta-These things happen they were small kids.Thanks again.

Adarsh-I didn't get my answer for the coffee.

Swadheenta-Yes I think you did.I said No.

Adarsh-Would you not even reconsider ??

Swwadheenta-If your Mother even gets whiff of anything like this I will lose my job.I have worked hard to get here Adarsh.You can go on coffee date with any girl you want but I will not get any job like this again.

Adarsh-Do you really think I donot understand my own mother ??

Swadheenta (Stunned)-Does she know about this ??

Adarsh-Not exactly in those words.

Swadheenta-look can we please talk about this later ?Please tell your assistant to to be there tomorrow in court at 10 a.m.

Adarsh (calmly)-It would be me.

Swadheenta-Whoever it is.Reach at 10.

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Pre-cap

1)Swadheenta saves a little girl

2)Courtroom action.
Adarsh-It would be me and not him


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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Thanks for the update dear it was a nice update will be waiting for your next update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Interesting.
Felt bad for Simmi and Jaya.
Asad so cute
Swadheenta is one tough cookie. Let's see how much time she takes to fall for him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow! Little bit different but same Swadarsh moment 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Idiotboxer

Interesting.

Felt bad for Simmi and Jaya.
Asad so cute
Swadheenta is one tough cookie. Let's see how much time she takes to fall for him.


Yep Swadheenta is tough cookie.I will not be taking much for Swadheenta to fall for Adarsh and on the other hand it will be realistic too.

Thanks for commenting.

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