~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76 - Page 4

The title gave me such hope! But alas, there wasn't much that happened between Adarsh and Swadheenta. What a sadist you must think me! 😆 But I haven't given up hope, yet. 🤣

I know the groundwork is needed to get the story and the scenes to unfold to their best, so I shall patiently wait. But I can see that the next update is geared for unending drama - what with Swadheenta's decision, Adarsh and the Sinhas's shock in the face of it and Simmi's condition. Can't wait to read Adarsh and Swadheenta's confrontation - with all the pent up resentment, hurt and anger, I won't be surprised if we get to see fireworks. 😉

Love the pace of your updates. I wish I could write this fast. 😳

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

The title gave me such hope! But alas, there wasn't much that happened between Adarsh and Swadheenta. What a sadist you must think me! 😆 But I haven't given up hope, yet. 🤣

I know the groundwork is needed to get the story and the scenes to unfold to their best, so I shall patiently wait. But I can see that the next update is geared for unending drama - what with Swadheenta's decision, Adarsh and the Sinhas's shock in the face of it and Simmi's condition. Can't wait to read Adarsh and Swadheenta's confrontation - with all the pent up resentment, hurt and anger, I won't be surprised if we get to see fireworks. 😉

Love the pace of your updates. I wish I could write this fast. 😳

Originally posted by: angel6599

Superb update👏👏 the title is apt for the part 👍🏼 it would be nice to see sparks n fireworks

Update soon⭐️

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Intezaar ka phal meeta hota hai 😆.

I think I have a huge problem writing harsh scenes (because as a person I am very patient and nice, or so I think). So, I might still land up disappointing you with lack of intensity in their confrontation. Well, I haven't envisioned a confrontation as such... so, I risk the fact that I might still disappoint you... Just saying so you don't get your hopes up. 😊

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

No pressure! I have just been fooling around. 😃 It's your story and I'm sure you must have a certain path charted for the story, so I wouldn't want you to mess with it. I'm enjoying the story the way it is and will gladly take whatever you give.

As to writing an intense confrontation, I don't think you need to be a not-so-nice or harsh person to write a scene like that, That's the beauty of being a writer, you can imagine and visualise and write without actually being something. 😊

And if I really want to read a full blown argument, then maybe, I might write something myself! 🤣

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

I'm loving ur FF! It's quite interesting how things are progressing here. Continue soon and if u can plz do PM me when u update. 😳

-Luv Niki

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Thanks Niki. I am glad you are liking it. I plan to introduce all the characters that are present in the show, but with my own twist to it. And situations as well... you may see some having a resemblance to some parts in the show, but their plot and explanations may be different, same with some dialogues.

You are the 3rd person who had asked for PM's. I think I have figured out how to send multiple PM's.. but have not been doing it because at-least at the moment I have been updating everyday. I had the story sort of planned in my head for the first few updates. Once I start running out of ideas, I might take a little longer to post updates. I will start sending PM's then. Till such time, can I please ask you to check this thread every day? I will let you guys know if I am not updating any day.

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

I know... that was misspoken actually (about the intensity of any piece of work). If you are imaginative, you can create magic...

At the time of initial promos of this show, I had imagined Adarsh, Swadheenta and Suhasini to be very responsible and intelligent people. "You can have differences of opinion, but you are not a cruel and egoistic person" type... you know. So in my mind, these characters are very balanced. They react to situations in a smart and intelligent way (at-least one of them in every situation)... so, let us see what they do hereafter.