SS: BETRAYAL.........BY WHOM. Part 4and 5 on page 9.

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Character sketch

Maan singh khurana- 27 year old business man.Loves his family than anything, can do anything for his family.


Dev kiloskar/ YASH SCINDIA- Look alike of Maan Singh khurana.


Adarsh khurana - 26 years old completed MBA and enjoying world tour. Though he is 26 years but his family he is till a cutie pie.


Geet Handa - 24 years old and loves socialservice. Well cultured, well mannered,and loud.


Swadeenta Iyer- 24 years old mysterious character.


Ashok handa- Brother of Geet and local Don. He does small settlements.


Suhasini khurana - A lovable lady mother of maan and Adarsh. Her husband died when maan is 8 and Adarsh is 7 years old.


Bade mama and mami - They are ghar jamai and wants to eat khurana earning.


Chote mama and mami- same like bade mama mami.


Avdoot and kalindi kiloskar - Parents of dev kiloskar.


Remaining characters are introduced as the story continues.


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INDEX


CHARACTER SKETCH - page no 1.
TEASER - scroll down
Part 1 - page no 2.
PART 2 - page no 4.
PART 3 - page no 7 .
PART 4 - page no 9.
PART 5 - page no 9.
PART 6 - page no .
PART 7 - page no .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmmm...let's see how this story turns out!
I hope its centered on swadarsh only but if it isn't... Koi nahi!
Waiting to see what happens in the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey!!!!
It seems interesting...
Continue soon...and plsss pm me if possible😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful start.
Pls continue soon. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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TEASER




A man in his late twenties stood facing the river while talking in his Bluetooth. As it was 2 in night, in winter season no one are roaming on the roads. Though there was continues snowfall he cared less and still concentrated on his talks until some unbearable pain touched his back with a lightening speed. It took few seconds to understand for him to analyse the situation. HE was SHOT. He fell with a thud on the ground and he saw a girl, no not girl his P.A. whom he trusted enough to come with him was till holding the gun pointing towards him. She bent and grabbed his chain, wallet, phone, watch and stood up. The last thing he heard was " HAPPY JOURNEY MAAN SINGH KHURANA" with that she shot him until there were no bullets in the Gun.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!!!That was really FAB TEASER👏
Pearl...whole teaser was so damn interesting...my all attention was there only...
And that bullet shot...i can feel something on my back...
Ohhh...so Maan is dead...coz i don't feel that he is still alive
And the murderer is his PA whom he trusted...ridiculous girl😡
Btw why did she took his things??😕...is she "looteri" PA???😆
Eagerly waiting for next part...plsss continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really liked it...do continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow !!!! this is beautiful. 👏 pls cont. soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya925

Hmmm...let's see how this story turns out!
I hope its centered on swadarsh only but if it isn't... Koi nahi!
Waiting to see what happens in the story

of course. yaar it is centered on swadarsh.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi, friends I am back. I even got the banner for my fiction so I will be updating it tomorrow morning, pakka promise. and friends who all wants pm can buddy me. love you all and thank you.

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