In Love With.. Kapil/Sumona [OS Series] (13/10/14)-NEW OS UPDATE pg11 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh that was amazing
the emotions you described regarding sumona feelings touched my heart .
De.De i cant get enough of your writing 🤗
plz do contibue your great work 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much hun.🤗 I am glad you liked it. ☺️ Will try and write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG this is soo beautiful written...u hav become my fav writer..u can make me imagine the things which I thought I should nt imagine as they r gud friends bt now I knw there is someone who can think of them like I do

Luv u really...found my besti here <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

OMG this is soo beautiful written...u hav become my fav writer..u can make me imagine the things which I thought I should nt imagine as they r gud friends bt now I knw there is someone who can think of them like I do

Luv u really...found my besti here <3


Thank you, thank you, thank you sooo much, hun. Big Jhappis to you.🤗 I know what you mean.. I also thought like this, but man.. K/S... I can't help it.☺️ I was dreading to post this one-shot, in fact, I also edited it a bit.😉 I was worried how readers would react, also.. age restriction.😳 But I am sooo glad, I found you.. who also think of K/S like me. OMG!! YAY!!!🤗 Thank you so much!! Love you too, Bestie.❤️
Edited by -De.De- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it Love it Love it .❤️ Took me by surprise but it was so sweet.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Guess what, they were kissing and I was breathless here! 🤣
Beautifully written Ika 🤗 and the sudden kiss was a delight ☺️
I sound so perverted 😆

I wonder why Sumona stopped him from saying "I love you" 🤔

When you play the post in your head and try to imagine the scenes which I obviously did, you get goosies 😳 imagine KaSum actually kissing and all of that sensual lovey stuff happening I front of you

Continue please. Great work🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, you are so talented in writing! This was amazing as well as all the other works you posted (which I read today and commented as well).
I'm so glad to have discovered your works!
Honestly such a delight to read your stories.
Especially the latest drabble; that was a breathtakingly beautiful one.
I loved it so so so much!
I hope you can pm me from now on whenever you choose to write more :)
A new fan of your work,
Hinal (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys, hope you are all well. I am sorry for being inactive, I am very busy with workload 7 days, every week. My replies, stories all are slow. But I will try my best to update. I am not sure about Kapil/Sumona fan-fic but wuill surely continue with drabble series. I wrote this ages ago finally finished today. It's not that goood, but I hope it's readable.

iPod||Kapil & Sumona {Drabble}

"Sumona?" Kapil calls out her name but she isn't in her vanity van, it's empty. 'Kahan gayi yeh larki,' he wonders to himself. When he hears faint song playing in vanity van. He looks around but no one is there, then he realizes it is coming from her dressing table. The closer he gets, the clearer it gets. He looks at the source of noise and upon reaching the table he realizes it's song playing from Sumona's iPod which is lying there and isn't turned off or paused.

Once again looking around he finds no Sumona. 'Pagal larki', he picks up the iPod thinking pausing it but accidentally his thumb hovers over the volume button and it gets loud; loud enough for him to hear the song clearly. Bringing iPod's headphones near his ears as he tries to listen, his heart skips a beat leaving him speechless because it is his own voice which he hears from iPod. It's a piece from their recent shows where Kapil sung medley on his show. He stands there frozen to ground which her iPod in his hands, eyes glued to iPod and hearing his voice bursting through headphones. He scrolls through Sumona's iPod in awe and surprise which only seems to widen when he reads the title of playlist 'Kapil's songs'. As he goes through the playlist his eyes go wide because it is has almost all the songs he has song, not only in CNWK but in other shows, events and concerts.

"Kapil?" He takes double flip as he hears the voice behind him, almost dropping her iPod on floor. Apparently he was so lost in iPod Kapil didn't hear Sumona sneak up on him. He turns to face her instantly and keeps pressing 'back' button.

"Yeh.."

"Acha iPod hai, new model hai." She looks at him suspiciously and Kapil tries to keep his composure.

"Kya?"

"Kya?"

"Wohi toh pooch rahi hon, kya howa?"

"Kuch bhi toh hai." He pretends to think for a moment with her iPod in his hand, which she has clearly noticed now. 'Damn.'

"Arre haan.. kahan thi, shoot ke bolane aya tha tumhe aur aap madam, thi hi nahi."

"Woh signal nahi araha tha toh..."

"Theek hai, theek hai.. jaldi ajao, sab ready hai." He turns to leave but then her voice stops him.

"Kapil."

"Hm?"

"Mera iPod itna pasand hai toh tumhe bhi yehi wala laa don?" It takes him moment to register what she's talking about, it takes him to look meet with her twinkly gaze to realize he is still holding her iPod ready to leave with it. Without caring much he throws at her slowly which Sumona catches but with horrific expressions on her face.

"Abhi gir jata toh?!"

"Itna bhi acha nahi hai."

"Lekar toh aise jaa rahe thay jaise bohut pasand aya ho." He will not take the bait. He will not fall for this.

"Ajao." With this he exits from the van, leaving Sumona slightly curious. She starts to examine the iPod, she wants to know what was in it that caught Kapil's attention. 'Did he..?' She shakes her head, not wanting to even explore that possibility. 'He better not! I hope not!' Placing her iPod back she makes her way towards the set.

"Someone took time." He whispers to her when they are about to start.

"Someone almost broke my iPod." She replies with her 'innocent' smile and he rolls his eyes.

"itna bhi acha nahi hai."

"Oh really? Pakra toh aise howa tha ke jaan se bhi pyaara ho." She looks at him with same twinkle in her eyes. He looks at front, any second now, he will be on the stage. Then his eyes settle on her and for some reason Kapil can't hold himself back from replying. He leans closer to her to whisper in her ear as the opening music has started.

"iPod acha nahi lekin tumhari playlist choice bohut interesting hai." Her breathe hitches and eyes go wide. She turns to look at him but meets with empty space and then she hears his voice through speakers and she knows he made it to stage before she could react. Sumona stands there looking at him on stage, notices he is being extra chirpy and the finally it registers in her mind; he knows.

I hope you'll enjoyed it. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Hey!
It was so nice to read a piece on them after so long!
Absolutely adorable <3
Loved it to bits!!
Great job!!! 🤗
Seriously in love with Kapil and Sumona

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I love how I read and commented before you even pm'ing 😆
Brilliant timing 😛
Edited by basket_101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
It has been ages since I last read your write-ups on Kapil-Sumona. And this one was damn awesome! Sumona listening to Kapil's songs! Its really good to see how much you care for your readers inspite of your tight schedule. Keep writing! I'll be waiting for more.

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