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Posted: 18 years ago

KOI APNA YAAN KOI AJNABEE

Part 19

Written By: Sallu_lover& Day_Dreamer

Sia Wakes up n also wakes Tej up, n she says can u believe it that today im getting married to the person i luv. Tej just looks at her, n then tej pays her out n says now u have to order wat ur hubby says all the time. Sia says come on u know i wouldn't be the wife who cooks three times a day n stays at home all the time. Both of them r having a fun moment n hitting each other with pillows. Sia tells tej now u r not far away from me u r also getting married soon u better invite me to ur wedding, tej just looks abit sad n thinks n then sia says "hey wat r u thinking about?" oh "r u thinking about u future hubby pratab" tej hits her wit pillow. They get ready for the wedding.

Tej decides that she will stay for another nite at lonavla so she calls pratab that it will be too late in the nite if she travels so she will stay for another nite. Pratab says its alright.

Everyone is getting ready for the wedding including tej too, then she goes to sia's room n tej says u look gorgeous. There is sangeet going b4 shaadi so they both dances on its rocking kabhi ishq karo n everyone is loving sia n tej's dancing.

Finally the bharatis r coming n everyone is soo excited. Sia finally gets married n then she leaves her maayka n goes, sia's parents r side n crying alot n tej cries too. Tej supports Sia's parents, sia's parents says its soo hard when bheti leaves maaya n goes to sasural but this happens in every family. Tej asks them to inside as its about to rain out side.

She stays out side n then she just thinks about everything that has happened to her n in her life, she starts crying. Then it starts raining flashback of tej n abhi wat great friends they were, then wat happened that nite, how abhi told tej how much he loves anu, then pratab telling tej how much he loves her, n then saying yes to pratab for marriage, how much pratab is happy about this marriage, how that serial killer tried to kill her, n pratab saved her.

She is saying to herself that we should marry the person whom he loves u, she cries n then says to herself its not easy but I(tej) fell in love in that i got nothing except sadness, pratab is a nice guy but i don't love him. She is thinking about all these stuff then sia's mother calls her in n she stops crying n then its very late nite every one goes to sleep.

Tej is back in Mumbai n calls pratab that she is back he is soo excited that she is back so he comes the next day to see her n then goes to doctor for routine check up, the doc says everything is fine with the baby n with tej too. So both of them r very happy. They decides that they will go shopping here they r arguing wat to buy if tej is going to have a boy or girl n choosing clothes as tej wants to have a little boy so she is choosing blue boy's clothes n pratab is thinking tej will have girl so he is choosing pink clothes, they r laughing n arguing wat they should buy.

Abhi walks pass from the shop n sees them together n he looks how much tej is happy with pratab but then he says to himself y do i feel like this, am i in love with tej? But she is marrying my best friend? Y all this confusion. But then he says that she is soo happy with pratab, she loves pratab, n they r marrying very soon.

Preview: will abhi tells tej how he feels about her? Or will something else happen again.

The End

Edited by sallu_lover - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Writer's NOTE:


Hi guyz, we are so gald u all r liking our story. Maybe this will upset u guyz a little.
Part 20 - sunday's Part of this story will be posted on MONDAY not SUNDAY. Because, me and wasu have a busy weekend. Hope u guyz understand. Take care bye

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
we understand... 😊
we'll be waiting for monday!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
^^
^^ Thanx to both of you for understanding. Sunday's update will be posted soon. Please ber with me. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Koi Apna Yaan Koi Ajnabee

Part 20 (Sunday's Part)

Shopping Mall

Abhi sees them laughing together and gets jealous. Pratap sees him and says hi to him and he just ignores him and asks teji how is she?

Teji: I€™m fine. Teji then looks at Pratap and sees to Abhi

T: Abhi sorry can u excuse us please, we€™re getting late. Abhi feels dejected and leaves from there. Teji thinks €œI know Abhi u r hurt, sorry for this but I€™ve to hurt my love for the sake of my friendship. I cannot let you hurt Paratap like this€.

Teji and Pratap goes to caf and sit there. Pratap gets surprised and shocked at Teji€™s behaviour with Abhi and is upset at Abhi€™s behaviour with him. Teji sees him down asks him what happened?

P: teji, what had I done wrong? What did I do with Abhi? Why is he behaving like this? I kept you promise and lost friendship and my brother Abhi.

Teji sees a tear in Pratap€™s eye and tear drop and teji lead out her hand and tear drops on teji€™s hand.

T: I€™m sorry, Pratap meri wajah se Abhi turned ur enemy. I€™m sorry.

P: It€™s not your fault. Abhi is behaving like child.

T: I€™m sure Abhi will understand.

P: Mujhe nahi lagta, woh bohut ziddi hai, bilkul tumhari tarhan.

Teji looks at him, and slightly laughs. Pratap also laughs

P: chalo Abhi kisi kaam toh aya.

Teji looks embarrass. Pratap holds her hand teji looks at him and Pratap says

P: Promise me 1 thing,

T: What?

P: Jo ronak tumhari ankhon mein, and jo Khushi tumhare honton par Abhi ka naam sun kar ati hai woh humesha hi rahegi.

Teji looks at him and smiles and both hug.

NEXT DAY €" Bureau

They€™ll go to bureau and Teji finds jasmine in other room sitting alone and very upset. Teji asks her whats the problem? Why is she sitting here alone?

Jasmine tells she angry with Akshay because a new girl came (client) and Akshay started flirting with her and she got angry.

Teji: But I can see you getting really angry.

Jasmine looks down. Teji explains to her

T: Why don€™t you tell Akshay sir, that you love him so much? What are you waiting for?

J: I can€™t tell him? what if he does not love me back? What if because of this our friendship break? Jasmine starts crying and teji hugs her. Teji thinks €œPlease god, give Jasmine her love back. Please, I don€™t want another Abhi-teji€.

Mumbai Airport

Announcement €" €œFlight no. 10647 London to Mumbai has arrived to the airport Thankyou€.

A girl comes out from arrival gate. And looks around (Face not shown yet)

G: I€™m back, hhmmm Finally I€™m back India€ A guy comes and holds her and twirl her around and then they kiss. When they break,

G: I love u darling.

G: I love you too.

And guy moves little away and we finally see girl€™s face and it€™s none other than ANU.

THE END

Written by:

Day_Dreamer & Sallu_Lover

P.S. Yeah, guyz ANY isss back.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hi guyz!!! I've created a avi of Pratap & Tejali. for Teji-Paratap Lovers. 😳
hope U'll like it.

Fell Free to Use


P.S. Sunday's part is updated on PG 21. so do check it guyz. 😃

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great story! I really like the storyline!!

Keep up the good work! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
yahh..another wonderful story that keeps me waiting eagerly for friday 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice turns in the story. Keep it up. Wish Friday comes soon. Really can't wait.
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Posted: 18 years ago
^^ Awww thankyou of all of you for liking it. i'm glad u'll like it. Just wait lil more. 😳 😃

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