CID Story: 250 Crores

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This one was like a real CID episode.😛

the various scenes kept reminding me of the various scenes from the show like the sleeves one⭐️, the confession part and the dialogues used for daraoing the criminals😃, with an exception of the spiders and ants in box that reminded me of fear factor (i just don't like these creatures🤢)...

Overall, it was a nice story with much more investigation than the real episodes (one difference here😆). It was relaxing after knowing all that is going on after coming back.

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

SHERYU, Very Simple and Straight Story...👏👏

I Like the Start with Tension of 500 Crore...😆😆

Like that 48 hours Deadline with 250 Crore Demand...👏👏

I Like Uday Alertness regarding Nothing Threatening present in Letter about Calling Police...⭐️⭐️

Like CBI Referred Him to Local Police Station...👏👏

The Cops getting Case was Nice and Innovative...😉👏

The Interrogation and Especially the Investigation regarding Background of All really Cool...⭐️⭐️

Both Evidence is really Creating Difficulties...🤔

The Nabbing was Shocking...😲😲

Loved that All Scene where Sapna found...⭐️⭐️

the 3 Basement in One Building is really Good...👏👏

the Spider and Ants Idea is Good...👏👏

the CD Sending Idea of Kichori was a Big Mistake...

BTW, why Cops dunt check Hand-writings of Family with that Note They found Outside...❓😕

Culprit was Little Predictable atleast for GD...😉😎

Wonderful Treat Boss...👏👏

Thank You so much...😳😳

Apology for being so Late...😊😊😊

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very Simple, Smooth and NICE story DI...😃

I understood it completely...😆

I liked that your story giving CID watching FLAIR...👏

Starting with Case ENTRY and then leading to BUREAU...

Duo conversation in beginning was NICE too...

I could imagine them getting a case this way...😃

although now it turned only dream and imagination in CID...😭

500 crores was a SHOCKER...😲

by the way even i agreed how they managed 250 crores if all money went to the girl kidnapped only...😛

I liked the investigation was smooth and easy to get...⭐️

having multiple basement idea was brilliant again...👏

I probably was more scared with the spiders than the girl herself...😛

Duo investigation was FAB...😎

As most said...i remembered that ABHIJEET sir coat scene as well...😆

I am also shocked that the girl gave all to these people...😡

and HER BUA...😲

But her's was expected honestly...others were kinda obvious in being culprits..😆 So can't have been..😛

I liked that the girl other family members supported her at end...😳

Duo last scene was again fantastic..👏

I loved daya sir peeking out to see a case coming or not..🤣 Very CUTE..😆

Thank you di for a smooth stress buster story with easy investigation...😃

Something good coming out of Cid not airing for a week..😛

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@ANGELICEYES

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Lovely story Shreya di ⭐️ .. I love the simplicity in the story overall.. The casual Duo scenes at the start and end are too good. 😳

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Finished reading Shreya. 😃

Enjoyed it. .. It was very nicely written and I could visualise everything that was happening. I missed the sundays episode and I think I did a good thing by reading this instead of watching the aatma one.

it was a little horrible to imagine sapna in a tub filled with spiders...😵 and I think the cid team got there a little too easily. 😆 You could have made it tough for them. otherwise it was a nice and enjoyable story. waiting for the next one. ..(and meri farmayish as well)

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

That was as always Well written. Reading your story makes me feel like watching the movie.
Full of action and interesting.
The elevator part at last, added the flavour to it.
Loved every its of it.
Keep writing.
Best Wishes.:)

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