My Story Collection : Kulasya

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Dear all ,
I am active on this forum for more than a year now . But in this one year period I have written many stories . For competitions & even just for fun . As am writing more & more stories it's getting difficult for me to keep the track of it as I write other Marathi stories also 😆 Also my stories are scattered all over the forum now . And of course I want you all to read my all stories in a single thread . So am taking inspiration from Vis di & Swati & creating this thread for all. So I have created the thread & have also posted index below . I will time to time update this thread after writing new story . And also will update index like that . So u people can read it easily .
Index
1. Aaj Mere Yar Ka Birthday Hai (Non Investigative) - page 1 , 2nd post
2. Girl With A Gun (Investigative) - page 1 , 3rd post
3. Love Surpasses Everything (Love & Relationship) - page 1 , 4th post
4. Abhijeet Ki Khoj (Love & Life) (My Personal Favourite) - page 1, 7th post
5. Daya the Prankster (Comedy) - page 2 ,2nd post
6. Woman in the Lift (Spoof) -page 2 , 3rd post

Hope you people enjoy . Please do read & comment 😊 And of course please don't use my story in any way without asking me.😊
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Aaj Mere Yar Ka Birthday Hai

(This story was written in Aditya birthday contest . Where theme was Dayanand Shetty making Aditya Shrivastav's birthday special)
I am not able to decide anything . Aaditya ka birthday aa raha hai . Karu bhi to kya karu ? Vaise bat to hui hai bhabhiji ke sath Adi ko surprise dene ki . Par kya du ?

Baithke me yahi soch raha tha . Par kuch man me aa nahi raha tha. Har sal hi ham iska birthday celebrate karte hai . Wahi wishes , wahi parties kuch to alag hona chahiye , kuch to !

Par Adi ko zhanse me rakhna itna aasan to nahi hai . Adi man ki bat turant jan hi leta hai . Jaise us din hua tha Interlaken ke waha shooting par . Adi ka waha cycling ka bahut man tha . Maine BP sir se request karke ek cycle chase wala scene rakhne ko bola. Jo use direct location par hi maloom padna chahiye tha . Lekin use , use pata nahi kaise pata chal gaya . Usne kah hi diya direct mujhse , " Daya , tum ye cycle wala jo scene dal rahe ho , uske bad ham dono sath cycle race laga dete hai . "

Vaise Adi ne kya koi kam surprises diye hai mujhe . Maine aise hi ek story likh di thi . Just for fun ! Hamare Aditya sab ne use sidha makers ke pas bhej diya . Aur uska Matheran wala episode ban gaya . Ab iska credit mujhe mila . Lekin Adi ne ise diya isliye to iska episode ban paya na . Nahi to sirf mere folder me pada rahta . Nahi yar . Is bar Aditya ke liye sach me kuch alag karna chahiye .


Maine hamesha ki tarah Indiatvforum ka CID page open kiya . Waha pe bhi sab ki bday ki taiyariya chalu thi . Aur ha , ye kya ? Iske liye ek bahut acha thread bana hai . 'The Incomparable Artist::Aditya Srivastava.' Maine use open kiya . Wah ! kya badhiya thread banaya hai . Aur ye dekho. Kya kya role kiye hai sab ne . TV me bhi aur filmon me bhi . TV me to kam hue kyunki CID me entry hui . Par filmon me to kafi ache role kiye . Wah !

Fir maine fans ke comments dekhna start kiya . Bahut ache comments the . Par kuch thoughtful comments bhi . Jo padhke mai soch me pad gaya . Kai fans ne likha tha ki , itna acha actor hoke bhi usko utna recognition nahi milta jitna dusre actors ko milta hai . Bat sahi hai . Hamare Aditya

ji bahut shy kism ke hai . Wo khud kisi ke pas nahi jate role mangne . Par ha madd bahut karte hai . Kai bar apne roles bhi chod dete hai dusre ke liye .
Aur tab ye idea mere dimag me aaya . Is bar bday surprise yahi hoga. Adi ko acha role offer hoga . Aur wo bhi yaha nahi , Hollywood se. Bas ! Birthday ka yahi surprise rahega. Birthday ke din Hollywood ke director ka aadmi use script sunane aayega. Fir use acha lage to wo film kar payega .

Ye decide karke mai turant kam pe lag gaya . Mere dimag me nam aaya Christophar Nolan ka . Ye ek acha director hai . Agar ye dono ki jodi mil jaye to film bahut khas hogi .


Fir maine time waste nahi kiya . Sabse pahle ye pata lagana tha ki nolan ko kaise approch kiya jaye . Bahut mehnat ki . Mere industry ke friends aur bade stars se mujhe help mili . Mujhe nolan sir ka personal ID mil gaya . Jaha par mai apni bat pahucha saku .

Fir maine Adi ke TV aur films dono me se jo behatarin scenes hai wo sabka ek video banaya . With subtitles & also some intro about the characters. Ye sabka video mail aur bio data ke sath nolan sir ko bhej diya . And of course ye bhi likh diya , ki if you want to cast him you have to send him a script . And if he likes it , then only he can accept the role .

Mujhe is bat ka yakeen tha ki agar nolan ne ye mail padha to positive reply jaroor aayega. Aur aisa hi hua . Positive reply aaya . Unhone ye bhi kaha ki wo khud script Adi ko sunayenge . Wo India aane hi wale hai . Par unka sirf ek hi problem tha . They wanted the auditions for the role . With their lines.
Ab iske liye Adi ko kaise manaya jaye ? Aur wo bhi without doubt in his mind . Mujhe usko thoda uksana padega. Par kya kare . Everything is fair in love & friendship .

Jab mai aur Adi ek din bat kar rahe the. Tab maine puch liya .
" Yar Adi , tum itne ache actor ho . Tumko nahi lagta ki tumhe Hollywood ke liye try karna chahiye ? Waha pe tumare liye bahut ache roles rahenge ?
" Sahi hai yar . Par khud kisi ke pas jana mujhe odd lagta hai . Unko mera kam acha lagega to puchnge hi . "


" Ya yu kaho ki tumhe english me dialogue delivery ya acting nahi aati ? " Maine jan bujhkar kaha .

" Daya , tumhe sachme aisa lagta hai ? " He asked with little pain .


" Ha .Mujhe yakeen hai . Par aisa kyu ? Tumhe aata hai na ? Chalo . Mujhe acting karke dikhao . Dialogues mai tumhe deta hu ."

Maine use wahi dialogues diye , jo audition ke liye bheje gaye the .

Needless to say he did his job perfectly . He acted very well . And I again sent that clip to Nolan . Nolan liked it immensely & sent his script to me. And promised me he will come for his b'day .

And then birthday arrived . All our members from CID came . His friends , relatives , our common friends all came . Cake cutting ceremony done . All gave him presents .

I gave him the same script's hard copy which nolan sent me . Adi took it with surprise & read carefully . He liked it very much . "This XYZ's character is very interesting & very thoughtful . One of the best character I have read "
" Then you are going to play this role ." Said Nolan as he entered in the hall .

Adi was surprisingly looking at him . Of course he was confused about how he came .
Then Nolan himself mentioned the whole story . And his offer to him . Adi accepted the offer happily .

Then he looked at me smiling . In that smile our meaning of friendship was hidden .


- Dayanand Shetty

(Totally fictional . Sorry if somebody's sentiments towards any character are hurt in the story . But it's totally unintentional)


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Girl With A Gun

( This is Shatir Lekhak Entry . This contest was announced by fireworks . This story is under 2nd theme where a murder takes place & CID team reaches there & finds Girl with a Gun)

When Freddy opened his mouth, he put the pizza slice that he was eating in mouth and started chomping down on it. He was about to put the second piece in his mouth when the phone in the bureau rings. ACP says hello and suddenly the bureau goes quiet. Freddy tries to chew the pizza quietly but a loud crunch sound is heard. He is scared that he is about to be caught and so he keeps his mouth open. ACP asks on the phone- where did it happen? On hearing this Freddy hits his other hand on his forehead - he has understood that a murder has taken place somewhere and they will have to go. He tries close his mouth to finish off the half eaten pizza when ACP shouts Freddy. Freddy replies" EEEOOO...yes sir.

CID car races through the dark streets in the night. The car reaches Darkona Hotel and enters. Manager tells ACP that it is good that you have come...and takes them inside. ACP flares his nose and looks at the crowd standing nearby. The people who were staying at the hotel are very subdued. The CID officers now start to stare in their eyes one by one. ACP, Abhijit and Daya start to memorise the faces that they see. Manager bows down as if he has done the murder himself. He says that the murder took place on the 13th floor. ACP asks him to show the 13th floor. The CID team and manager enters the lift and the lift proceeds on its way when Abhijit puts his nose in the middle...

Abhijeet : did the murder take place in the room or outside Manager- the murder took place inside the room.

Abhijeet - asks what the room number. Manager- 666

ACP- are you joking...how can a room on the thirteenth floor be 666. It should be like1366 or 1342 or 1389...

Manager-sir I do not own this hotel- I am only the manager- the owner of this hotel does everything upside down. This man who has died is the hotel's owners friend only.

On hearing this, the CID team is stunned...this is the first twist in the case. Their expresssions brightened up as if bees have seen a opened flower. They look at each other. The lift reaches the thirteenth floor and the manager rushes ahead in a long corridor. And they reach the room number 666. The manager moves to the side and the team enters the corridor. They see a young man is lying on the bed- his eyes wide open. He was looking in the distance- lost in a long dream forever. He was wearing a yellow color night suit. The front portion of the suit was covered in blood. The body was turned towards the right side. From that side only the blood flowed from the wound and spilled on the bed. Maybe it even seeped through the bedsheet into the mattress. All three of the detectives bend towards the body.

ACP : Whether anyone heard the bullet being fired ?

On hearing this the Manager's eyes pop open

Manager : How did you know that bullets were fired ?

Freddy (smiles and again whispers in Purvi's ears) : See ACP knew that the man died by bullets by looking in his eyes.

ACP : his clothes have five round wounds- which do not look like knife wounds. Purvi moves towards the cupboard in the room. She opens the cupboard and sees that there is a man's suitcase there. Abhijit moves ahead and opens the dead man's shirt and checks the wounds. 2 bullets have entered his chest, 2 in his stomach and 1 below his stomach and one in his shoulder.

Abhijit : Daya , it looks like an immediate death. Daya turns and looks at the manager and now walks towards him.

Daya : How did you discover that a murder took place here... Manager looks at Daya that he asked a foolish question.

Manager- when the firecrackers sounds were heard...everyone came running out from their rooms.

Daya- did anyone see anyone running away from this room.

Manager- no sir..

Daya- no one run?

Manager- if they had run - they would have been seen running.

Abhijit- how did you enter his room.

Manager is about to say that they entered by becoming birds and flying into the room.

Abhijit- this room was closed or open.

Manager- open.

ACP- The room was open that means the killer had run away already.

Manager- no sir.

The CID team is shocked and their mouths drop open. They look at each other too.

Abhijit- if the killer did not run then where is he...

Manager- sitting in the next room.

Abhijit is shocked to get this answer. He wants to say a lot- but his brain does not cooperate.

Abhijit-sitti...

Manager sees that Abhijit cannot complete the sentence and so does it for him. Manager- sitting in the next room

ACP- what do you mean by next room...

Manager- room no 667..

The three of them reach room No 667 and see that there is a beautiful girl seated there...she is wearing a light green top and expensive jeans, expensive heeled shoes and expensive watch on her hand. The most dangerous thing about this girl was that she was holding a gun in her hand.

ACP : Look , lower your guns . And surrender yourself to law. You can't run now.

Girl (Shouting ) : Who wants to run ? I have committed a crime & I accept it ! I am ready for punishment . Come on , hang me !

CID & Purvi arrested the girl on the basis of circumstantial evidence & took her to bureau for further investigations .

ACP ( in bureau ) : Ok ! Here we are ! But let me warn you , whatever you speak from here on , can be used as proof against you. You can even call your lawyer if you wish . What's your name ?

Girl : Sonia .
ACP : Ok , Sonia ! Do confess here what you wanted to confess.

Sonia : Confession ? Which confession ?

All are shocked to see her sudden change in behavior. Everybody looks at each other

ACP : Confession of Murder ! The same murder you committed in that hotel & confessed there .

Sonia : M... M... Murder ? W.. what are you talking about ? I haven't done anything .

ACP : What ? You confessed there. You killed hotel owner's friend . Don't you remember anything ?

Sonia : No sir , believe me ! I haven't done anything . I don't even know this man . Why I will kill him ?

She starts to cry .

Daya : Sir , I think she is speaking the truth . There is more to this case than what we are seeing

ACP (Sarcastic) : Acha ? You seems to know everything . Can u tell who is murderer ?

Daya : Sir , I am only saying , that let's examine her by Dr. Salunkhe . If he can say something , it will be helpful .

ACP : (Stares at him with little angry look ) OK !

And then next day ACP with team arrives at forensic lab.

ACP : Yes Salunkhe ? Have you found out anything ?

Salunkhe : Boss , this girl is not a murderer !

ACP : What ? Now what's this new drama Salunkhe ?

Salunkhe : This is not drama boss. This is the truth . I think this girl is hypnotized.

ACP : What do you mean by you 'think ' ?

Salunkhe : Am not sure . Because I couldn't find anything to prove. I couldn't find the way or method by which she is hypnotized. And why her hypnosis triggers only at certain time ?

ACP : Exactly ! This means she is not hypnotized . Simple !

Salunkhe : No boss ! Her eyes & other conditions show that. I have a theory that there was / is something in the hotel. That's why she behaved like that .


Freddy : EEW ! That means there is g...ghost !

ACP : Freddy , keep mum ! And Salunkhe , if you are going to tell those weird supernatural fake stories in the name of your theory ...

Suddenly a man enters in the cabin .

ACP (Very angry ) : Yes ? Who are you ? Who gave you permission to enter ? This is our private discussion .

Man : I am sorry sir. But I can't help. I am hotel owner Rajiv. My friend Sanjiv is murdered , that girl have confessed the crime ! Then why still CID is not putting her in jail ? Why CID isn't doing a case against her in court ? Why she isn't charged?

Abhijeet : Look Mr. , everything needs to be done by law. We will do it accordingly.

Rajeev : But when ? He was not just my friend but also business partner . And was like my brother . If you don't do anything , I will have to talk with commissioner sir then !
Before anyone could reply , that man went out angrily .
ACP : This man looks fishy. Keep close watch on him .

Sonia remains in custody .

Next day ACP again goes to Salunkhe .

ACP : Yes Salunkhe , have you found anything ? Pressure is rising on me to solve the case quickly .

Salunkhe : First , let me talk with that girl again !

ACP takes Salunkhe to meet her in bureau. There Freddy is watching cricket match.

ACP (shouts): Freddy! What are you doing?

Freddy: Oops! Sorry Sir Today was important match for India. So I thought let's watch for some time.

Sonia suddenly starts to shout.

Sonia: Why are we still standing here? I have confessed my crime. Come on hang me!

ACP quickly runs in the cabin.

ACP: Come on quickly give your confession. I will write it.

Sonia: Which confession?

ACP : Salunkhe now tell me why she is behaving like this here? This is not the hotel room. So your theory is wrong here.

Salunkhe : No Please give me one more day. I will personally stay in room no 667. And then tomorrow I will give you answer.

ACP: OK! One day & not more! Otherwise we have to perform our legal duties.

Salunkhe leaves. Sonia remains in CID custody.

Next day Salunkhe comes smiling.

ACP: Yes Salunkhe, what's new theory?

Salunkhe : No theories boss. Now it's time for solution.

All visit Sonia in custody.

Salunkhe: Ok , Tell me did you really murdered the man?

Sonia : No Sir, Believe me

Salunkhe : Then what actually happened?

Salunkhe asks with showing her his mobile phone screen.

Sonia (shouts): What you want? I told you I have killed him! Hang Me!

Now all CID team looks at her with horror in the eyes.

Salunkhe : Do you want to stop this?

ACP : How can you stop this?

Salunkhe removes his mobile screen from front of her & she cool down.

ACP : What is all this? Tell me what you did?

Salunkhe : Boss this girl is hypnotized with hotel room no 666 tag. She was in room no 667 when she murdered that man. The room no 666 is clearly visible from there. She saw it & got hypnotized. Also 2nd time.

ACP : But room door wasn't here? Was It? Neither the tag.

Salunkhe : Room or tag isn't important boss. Number is important.

ACP: Number?

Salunkhe : Yes 666 ! I was thinking, yesterday Freddy was watching cricket match. That batsman hit three sixes in a row. And then what was scrolling, on TV screen below? " This over 6 6 6 ". That was enough for her. And today I just showed her my phone. 666 is typed on it by me. And it's over.

Daya: Then who could have done this?

Abhijeet: Who else? Owner himself. He was knowing everything about hotel. So he did it.

Sachin comes .

Sachin : Sir , we have got an important news . After Sanjiv's death ,his most of money & entire business will be of Rajiv's . And Rajiv's bank account is suddenly very much healthy. Before that he was in so much debt.

ACP : Good ! Now we have got proof also . Go arrest him !

All rush to his house. He tries to get fast on his bike.CID chases him. After thrilling chase CID catches him. After Dayas's slap :

Rajiv : Yes . I did all this. Because my friend was also business partner & his profit share was high. I was in need of money. I was in severe debts. And after him , only I was nominee. I was not knowing that girl Sonia at all. My plan was to hypnotize her well before . I found out that this girl is coming as guest , so I found out more about her . And then I hypnotized her with 666 as trigger to go in hypnosis on her way to home from office.

Finally ACP says for this you will probably get death penalty.

(Totally fictional . Sorry if somebody's sentiments towards any character are hurt in the story . But it's totally unintentional)


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"Congratulations! We are successful in saving Tasha. Bullet has been removed and she will be discharged in 15 - 30 days."- Announced the doctor. All the CID officers were relieved but the happiest one among them was of course Vivek. He felt a strong sensation of happiness in his inside. A strange feeling was being developed inside him that he was desperate to express.

Days passed like a tracer bullet. In those days, Vivek was always there for her. Maximum time he spent in the hospital. He looked after all of her requirements - be it small or large. Tasha also started experiencing the same feeling for Vivek. She found more than a friend or mate inside him. She hardly could speak in those days but all her special care ad gratitude towards Vivek was visible in her eyes. And one day, she decided to confess. Vivek was also unable to hold his feelings. It was feeling as a sewing-needle inside him. Both felt an upsurge of sentiments inside them which was struggling to get burst.

Finally, it was her last day in hospital. But still she couldn't speak properly. Vivek was little afraid. Will she ever speak? "Tasha, baat karo Tasha! Please kuch to bolo. Tum nahi bologi to mai kisse bat karunga? Kise apne ghatiya jokes sunaunga?" Vivek was filled up with tears. He was struck with a feeling of agony. He stood up . He was about to leave.
All of a sudden, Tasha's lips moved. "Vi..Vivee...Vivek..." Vivek went near her. She was trying to speak something. "I want to say something!" Vivek said, "Tasha..Bolo Tasha...Tumhari aawaj sunne ke liye mere kaan taras gaye the...Waise mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hain" Tasha said, " Acha..pehle tum bolo..." Vivek - "Nahi,pehle tum.." "I..I love You..!" Both of them said together. And they hugged each other. Suddenly, they hear the sound of CID officers laughing at the back. They both part from each other. ACP, " Ye tum kya kar rahe ho Vivek?". Vivek - " Wo to main...main sir.." ACP, "Arre...tum to bilkul dar hi gaye..." "Pyaar karna koi gunaah nahi hai.. Lekin duty par yeh sab nahi chalega." All of them have a laugh. Freddy whispered in Vivek's ears - "Wah..Vivek...tum tasha se pyaar karte ho aur mujhe bataya nahi tumne..." Vivek - "Arre Nahi Sir...mjhe bhi in dino hi pyaar ka ehsaas hua." Then, ACP said to Tasha to be at home until she feels well to be on duty. He also told Vivek to take care of her. Both of them were delighted on this.


Tasha came home. After a few days, she joined the team and her routine of CID started. All were happy. Vivek and Tasha's love was blooming. Then some news came to the CID bureau which doubled their happiness. Tasha was selected for bravery award from the Indian government because she risked her own life while catching a gangster who was accused of many serious crimes. She also got 10 lakh rupees from government as reward for her bravery along with the medal. And needless to say, again the happiest person was Vivek!

Things were going cool. And one day, ACP sir called him in his cabin. "Yes sir?" Vivek asked. "Vivek, tumhe ye janke khushi hogi ki Tasha ne jis tarah khud ko CID team ke liye ek asset prove kiya hai, usse department bahut khush hua hai. Is liye Tasha ka promotion hone wala hai."
" Vaah sir! Ye to bahut khushi ki bat hai sir! Vaise sir, uska transfer kaha hui hai lekin?" Vivek was happy, but felt sad because Tasha will leave this branch after promotion."Vahi to khushi ki bat hai! Wo yahi rahegi. Tumhari boss bankar! " Vivek felt happy but he felt his ego was hurt. "I will work under Tasha. Is it possible? Will our relations remain healthy? He thought. But he decided to try his level best.


But his fear started to become true. Tasha was getting more honors day by day. She was getting praised at every level. People made talks about Vivek's relationship with a girl who was at a higher post than his. In the friend circle, Vivek was getting sidelined. All were gossiping like 'Vivek is nothing in front of Tasha, how can they get married?" In our society Husband should be on higher post than wife. So he is not capable to be her husband" etc. etc.


He was getting into depression day by day. And then things turned from bad to worse. They started to fight on every little thing. Their relationship faltered. And one day ACP sir called Vivek & Tasha to his cabin. "Officers, I have a mission for you. Tasha & Vivek, tum dono Delhi jao. Waha ek conference hai. Waha khatarnak aatankvadiyo se kaise nipatna chahiye, nidar hoke samna kaise kare uspe bate hongi! Mai chahta hu ki tum log usme hissa lo. Bahut fayda hoga. " "Sir, sorry sir! Mai nahi aa paunga . " " Kyu ? " Acp sir asked with little anger. " Bas aise hi ! Aur vaise bhi , mujhe jane ki kya jarurat hai ? Tasha hai na ! Vo mujhse kahi jyada layak hai . Mai to darpok hu . Bahadur to wo hai . Mai sirf comedy to karta hu yaha pe ! "By saying this Vivek got out of his cabin rather furiously without asking ACP's permission. ACP sir signaled Tasha to go after him. Tasha came out.

" Vivek , tum ye kya rudely bartav kar rahe ho ? Samajh me aa raha hai tum kya kar rahe ho ? " Tasha asked ." O , madam aap! Mai kyu waha jau ? Aap to mujhse kafi kabil hai is liye . Mai to darpok hu aur aap akele hi bahadur ho ! " Tasha got hurt. But still trying to console him . Here in the cabin ACP sir was furious . " Koi samajhao use !" He roared . " Ye decision sirf mera nahi , dept. ka bhi hai . Uspar disciplinary action ho sakti hai !" " Sir , mai usse kuch bat karke dekhu ? " Freddy asked." Tum ? " ACP sir thought for a minute & then, " Thik hai ! "


Freddy came out. Vivek was sitting & Tasha was still trying to talk. He was not ready to agree to any of her statements. " Kya hua Vivek ? Conference main kyu nahi jana chahte tum ?" Freddy asked gently and told Tasha to leave. She left. " Sir, wo tabiyat thik nahi hai sir . " Vivek said . "Tasha ko jyada wah wahi mil rahi hai isliye na ? " Freddy asked. " Nahi sir aisa kuch nahi." "Chahe tum kuch bhi kaho Vivek, mai sab smajhta hu...aise hi mere baal safed nahi hue. Yaar..tum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte ho. Pyaar mai koi bhi uljhan hai use turant hata dena chahiye. Pyar ye nahi dekhta ki tum kaun se post pe ho,kitna kamate ho, vaigarah,vaigarah.


"Aao ! Mai tumhe isi pe ek kahani sunata hu. Kahani hai hamare hi Dr. Salunkhe aur Dr. Sonali ki!" " Dr. Salunkhe & Sonali? Par wo to ab bahut senior couple hai na? Unke life me bhi problems aaye the? "
" Isiliye to mai ye kahani suna raha hu , tumhe! Ab Suno ...

From college days, Salunkhe was impressed with Sonali. He was carried away by her intelligence and her concern for everything. He was not wasting a single opportunity to be near her. Unhone bhi ye sab jhela tha. Log unke bare me tarah tarah ki baate karte the kyuki Dr Sonali Dr Salunkhe se jyada popular thi aur padhai mai bhi bauht achi thi. Par Salunkhe saab ko isse koi fark nahi pada. Har bar wo Dr Sonali se baate karne ki koshish karte the ." " Kya bat kar rahe hai sir ?" " Ha ! Ye sach hai ! Yu to unke bohot se kahaani maine sune hai idhar-udhar se par unme se do to mere dil ko chhu gai..chalo mai tumhe bhi sunata hoon.

Us din Salunkhe aur Sonali dono lab me the. Apne experiments ki class attend kar rahe the ! Aur roj ki tarah Salunkhe sab Sonali ke aage piche mandara rahe the. Unka pura dhyan Sonali par tha . Baat baat par wo Sonali se baate karne ka mauka nahi chorte the.

Sonali jab experiment kar rahi thi to achanak uske test tube se ek chemical gir gaya . Vo khatarnak acid Sonali pe girne wala tha. Salunkhe sir unhi par tha aur unhone wo girte hua dkeh liya. Unhone bina koi wakt gavaye apna hath bich me dal diya . Kyunki aur koi chara itne kam time me tha hi nahi . Unke hath pe wo acid gir gaya aur Sonali ki jan bach gayi . "" Oh ! Fir to Salunke sir ko bahut taklif hui hogi ! "" Ha ! Unhe hospital me admit karna pada tha. Aur unka wo hath bahut samay tak disable raha . Par aisi halat me Sonali ne unki bahut care ki . Unke sath hospital me rahti thi hamesha aur sab madad karti thi unki wo bhi apni studies sambhalkar aur Salunkhe sir ko bhi sikhakar! Is tarah dono ke course me bhi koi dikkat nahi aai.

" Are vaah , ye to bahut achhi bat hai!" "Aur jo dusri kahani hai, usse to sunaate hue hi aankhe nam ho jati dono e pyar ko dekh ke. Baat un dino ki hai jab Unhone shadi kar li thi aur unki married life acchi jaa rahi thi. Lekin ... "
" Lekin kya sir ? "

" Vivek , tumhe to ye pata hi hoga na ki Salunkhe sir bahut sal forensic se dur the ? "" Ha , unka ACP sir se zhagda hua tha aur bad me unpe kuch iljam aaya tha suna hai ."" Tumne thik suna hai . ACP sab aur unka zhagda to khatam ho gaya tha . Lekin fir unpe ek iljam aaya aur kuch sal waste hue unke !
" Par sir , kya tha wo iljam ? Aur uska hamare is love story se kya talluk ? " Suno ...


Dr. Sonali ne bahut cases solve kiye the. Unki aise hi praise hui thi jaisi aaj Tasha ki ho rahi hai . Unke vajah se bohot se khatarnak khooni pakade ja chuke the . Lekin ek din isi me se ek gunhegar ne ek khoon karke Dr. Sonali ko fasa diya . "
" Fasa diya ? Kaise ? "
" Usne Sonali ke kuch cheese vaha murder wali jagah pe dal di thi jaise ki unka purse, water bottle,gloves. Yahi nahi , unke fingerprints bhi dhoke se lekar waha place kiye . Vaise hi jaise Salunke sab ke sath hua tha . Tumhe pata hai na ?
" Ha Sir ! "
" Vaise hi ! Par is bar agar Dr. Sonali fas jati to pahli bat to ye ki wo department se suspend ho jati. Case chalta uske bad ! Agar nirdosh bhi ho jati to bhi tab tak uske career ka bahut nuksan hota. " Case ki investigation suru ho gayi thi. Sonali bohot depressed thi in sab se. Salunkhe saab bahut pareshan the ki kya kare..
" Oh ! "
" Fir Salunkhe sir ne wo kiya jis ki kisi ne ummid hi nahi ki thi . "
" Kya ? "
" Unhone sara gunah apne sar liya . Aur kaha maine fasaya hai sonali ko ! "
" Sir , ye aap kya keh rahe hai sir ? "
" Ha mai sahi kah raha hu . Aur koi chara tha hi kya unke pas ? Unhone apne se jyada Sonali ke career ko importance diya . Us time pe Dr. Sonali ka career bahut acha chal raha tha. Agar tab jhoota iljam lagta to wo waha kabhi nahi pahuch pati jaha aaj pahuchi hai . Isliye unhone apni bali di . "
Vivek was silent and deeply moved.


" Fir kuch sal aur Dr. sab suspend rahe . Par tab hamne bhi ji jan lagake Dr.sab ko nirdosh sabit kiya aur asli khooni ko bhi laya court me ! Ye mission tumne nahi suna hoga kyunki wo tab bahut secret tha. Par wo alag bat hai.


Mai yahi batana chahta hu ki successful married life aise hi nahi chalti. Uske liye vishvas aur sacrifice dono hona bahut jaroori hai . Dusre ke success se ham kyu jale ? Vivek , tum ye ... " " Bas sir ! Mai Samajh gaya . Mai to Tasha se pyar karta hu. Mujhe uske aage jane se taklif kyu honi chahiye ? Vo aage ja rahi hai iska matlab to yahi hua ki 'Ham' aage ja rahe hai. Sachhe pyar me Mai nahi hota Sir ! Bas ham hota hai ! Mai samajh gaya . Mai conference jane ke liye taiyar hu . " Mai abhi jaata hu Tasha ke pass.Freddy looks proudly at Vivek. And ACP sir from behind proudly looks at Freddy.

Vivek goes straight to Tasha who was weeping in the garden beside the bureau. He sat beside her and wipes tears from her eyes. She looks at him. He looks at her. Both get lost in each other's eyes. Tasha could sense the love and regret in his eyes. Vivek said,"Tasha...I'm so.." "Koi jaroorat nahi hai kuch bolne ki...mai sab samjah gayi hui...tumhari aakhe hi tumhare dil ka hal bata deti hai.." "Mujhe to bas is baat ki khushi hai ki tum ab mujhe samjah rahe ho. Par agar tumhe mere promotion se koi dikkat hai to mai abhi jaake ACP sir se baat karti hun.." "Nahi Tasha...Main hi pagal tha jo tumhari tarakki se jal raha tha...wo to bhala hua freddy sir ka jinhone mujeh inspire kya...mujhe bataya ki sacha love kya hota hai. Tumhari khushi hi meri khushi hai Tasha. Mai Bhagwan se yahi prathna karta hu ki tum isi tarah tarakki karo." Both share an adorable smile.

Suddenly, they hear Abhijeet and Daya sir's voice. "Ab yahi rehna hai ya bureau bhi chalna hai...ACP saab tum dono ko bula rahe hai." Both get red and Tasha says, "Sorry sir, we're going." Abhijeet asks, "Arre! Tum dono ro kyu rahe ho?" Both say together, " Ye to khushi ke aansoo hain."

Regards,

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( This story was a part of Amazing Race contest organised here . This is combine work of Myself & my friend Abhishek who was my partner in this contest. He did a great work in presenting the story & with suggestions also )

(We used Vivek & Tasha as first and Salunkhe & Sonali as second pair. We used Salunkhe & Sonali and made them marry because we wanted to show what sort of true love & sacrifice is needed for such a long successful marriage. And that was our message.)

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Congratulations Kulasya di...
I have read these two stories...
Waiting for your next update...
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Originally posted by: swathi17

Congratulations Kulasya di...

I have read these two stories...
Waiting for your next update...


Thank you 😊 Hope you are liking it . Just updated one more story . Some more stories are still there to update . And am updating it . Will read your story asap .

P.S. : I am Man 😆
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(Story By : Kulasya)

(Abhijeet and Daya are in a car. Abhijeet is driving & Daya is with him.)



Abhijeet : Yaar Daya! Kitna achha din hai na! Na case, na kuch! Aise din roj roj aane chahiye. Chalo hame aaj picnic jaane ka mauka to mila.
Daya : Boss, yahi to maja hai bachelor's life ka. Koi tension nahi, kuch nahi. No rok-tok.
Abhijeet : Sahi kaha tumne.
Daya : Vaise Dr. Tarika ko bataya ki nahi tumne?
Abhijeet : Nahi yaar Daya! Jab shadi ho jayegi tab to saare jawaab dene padenge. At least, ab to aajaad rahne do.
Daya : Tum vakai Dr. Tarika se shadi karne wale ho? Itna pyar karte ho usse?
Abhijeet : *pauses for a moment* Yaar pyar to karta hi hu yar. Vaise bhi hame kaha wo filmy hero jaisa pyar hoga? Tarika achi hai , hamare profession ki hai , achi life jayegi uske sath.
Daya : Hmmm!

(The car goes past a shopping mall & suddenly Abhijeet notices something.)
(He suddenly stops the car. His head starts aching.)


Daya : Abhijeet , kya hua ? Kya hua, Abhijeet?
Abhijeet : Daya...Daya, tum mujhe ghar le chalo. Meri...Meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai.
Daya : Doctor ke pas le chalta hu pahle ,chalo!
Abhijeet : Arre nahi Daya! Rest karunga to thik ho jaunga.

(Daya takes him to his house.)

Abhijeet : Daya , Ab mujhe kafi thik lag raha hai. Tum ab jana chahte ho to jaa sakte ho.
Daya : Bilkul nahi. Tumhare bagair mai kaise jau?
Abhijeet : Arre, main thik hu.
Daya : Dekho Abhijeet, main kuch nahi sununga. Par phir bhi tumhe abhi aaram ki jarurat hai. Tum aaram karo. Main baad me aata hu , tab baki baate karenge.

(When Daya leaves, Abhijeet suddenly recollects what he had seen &
why he suddenly got disturbed. But he still finds it hard to believe. He saw a girl beside the mall while driving and...)

(Flashback : College )
(Abhijeet & a beautiful girl Pooja are there in one of the college's rooms.)


Pooja : Abhijeet , college khatm ho raha hai . Ham dono ek dusre se pyar karte hai . To ham shadi kyu nahi kar rahe?
Abhijeet : Maine kaha na , mai life jina chahta hu. Life ko aage badhana chahta hu. Aage padhna chahta hu aur jindagi me kuch aage banna chahta hu.
Pooja : To ye sab bate tum shadi ke bad bhi kar sakte ho. Mere parents ab meri shadi ke piche pad gaye hai . Wo itni der nahi rukenge!
Abhijeet : Sorry, fir mai usme kuch nahi kar sakta. Mai bahut practical hu. Life me mujhe jo karna hai wo achieve karna chahta hu. Mere liye ek relationship se jyada important career hai. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki shadi ke chakkar me mai khud ko kaid kar lunga. Ye mai nahi chahta. I am really very sorry!

(Flashback ends)

Abhijeet: Ye maine kya kar diya tha? Bahut badi galti kar di thi maine.

(Next day, Abhijeet & Daya are again out for some shopping & spending the day leisurely. And suddenly, Abhijeet stops by seeing a girl. She is the same girl Pooja whom Abhijeet had seen in the flashback yesterday. He didn't know what to do. But the girl herself came to him. )

Pooja : Arre Abhijeet ! What a pleasant surprise! Pehchana mujhe?

(Abhijeet goes nervous. Daya shockingly looking at both.)

Abhijeet : Aap kaun hai? Mai aapko nahi pehchanta. Excuse me!

(And he goes ahead. Daya joins him.)

Daya : Abhijeet , kya hua ? Kaun thi wo ladki?
Abhijeet : Hogi yar koi. Mujhe nahi pata. Chalo chodo ! Ab kaha jana hai?
Daya : Acha hua , yad aaya. Kal X-mas party arrange ki hai maine ! Hamari sari team aa rahi hai . Tum bhi aagoge na ?
Abhijeet : Yar, ye bhi koi puchne ki bat hai?! Mai jaroor aaunga .

(Daya thinks in his mind that the girl herself came to him and even knew his name. Abhijeet therefore must know her too. But why did he not answer her? Only way to know it is to make them meet again. I need to do something for it. There's something too deep or else Abhijeet doesn't hide anything from me.)

(Next day, Daya brings Abhijeet to the party place. When Abhijeet reaches there, he sees only a girl is there. He goes to her and discovers that she is the same girl he met yesterday, i.e., Pooja!)

Abhijeet : D... Daya ... Ye kya ? Kya hai ye?
Daya : Boss , ye party actually maine sirf tum dono ke liye arrange ki thi.
Abhijeet : Par tume to kaha tha hamari team ke liye hai?
Daya : Yar, wo majburan mujhe tumse jhoot bolna pada. Mai chahta hu ki tum ab purani bate bhulkar vapas dosti kar lo. Pooja bhi wahi chahti hai . Chalo mai nikalta hu. Tum dono enjoy karo .
Abhijeet : K..Kau..Kaun si puraani baate?
Daya : Abhijeet, jab tum jhoot bolte ho na tab tum ruk-ruk ke bolne lagte ho.

(Abhijeet becomes tensed but soon he recovers.)

Abhijeet : Tumhe wo sab kaise pata chala?
Pooja : Maine bataya.
Daya : Ab main CID member hu, Boss. Jab ghee seedhi ungli se na nikle, to ungli tedhi karni padti hai.
Abhijeet : Are l... lekin ... Dayaaa are Dayaaa.

(Daya quickly leaves.)

Abhijeet : Ye daya bhi na .. hehe ... Aa.. Ba.. baithiye na.
Pooja : I think ab to tumne mujhe pehchan liya hoga.
Abhijeet : Haan. Of course ! Mai mai .. waha pe pahchan hi gaya tha. Par... Look Pooja am very sorry.
Pooja : Mai samajh sakti hu abhijeet. Chodo ye sab bate. Aur batao kaisa chal raha hai sab?
Abhijeet : Meri jindagi to chal rahi hai, as usual . CID inspector hu . Criminals ko pakadta hu. Samaj aur desh ke liye kam karta hu. Ek alag sukun milta hai!
Pooja : Wow! It's great.

(Pooja takes a dish.)

Abhijeet : Are tumhe onion pasand nahi hai, na? Isme jyada onion hai. Tum wo dish try karo. Bahut tasty hai!
Pooja : Abhijeet, tumhe ab tak yad hai ?

(Abhijeet just smiles.)

Pooja : Abhijeet . tumhari koi girlfriend bani itne salo me?
Abhijeet : Ae .. hehe ... Nahi ... Nahi ... Bilkul nahi. Acha , tumhare bare me bhi to batao. Kaisi chal rahi hai life ?
Pooja : Are bataungi. Par pahle ye batao, hamare college me kabhi gaye bad me? Hamare college ke baki dost milte hai ya nahi?
Abhijeet : Pooja , ermm...maine ek bat tumse chupayi hai .
Pooja : Kya?
Abhijeet : Mai jab police me tha to ek mission ke dauran mere sar pe ek bhari chot aayi thi. Uske vajah se mai apni yaddasht puri tarah se kho baitha hu. Aaj bhi mujhe us accident ke pahle ki life ke bare me kuch yad nahi !
Pooja : Par... par... ye kaise possible hai ? Fir tum mujhe ... mujhe ...
Abhijeet : Wo kal jab mai tumse mila tha, uske kuch der pehle hi mujhe tumse judi baate yaad aai thi... Ab wo sab chhodo. Let's enjoy the party! Let's dance ... Yahooo!!!!

(Both enjoy X-mas party till late night.)

(After that, their friendship got deeper. They start sharing their feelings with one another. Abhijeet started feeling something more than friendship for her. He was confused as to what to do.)

(After some days, Abhijeet again meets Daya. But this time he wanted to talk with him something very important.)


Abhijeet : Daya , Mai tumse kuch jaroori bat karna chahta hu .
Daya : Ha , bolo na boss.

Abhijeet : Yaha Nahi... Chalo ham us restaurant me chalke baate karte hain.

(They go to a restaurant.)

Abhijeet : Yar , ab maine soch liya hai. Mai is bachelor life ka end karna chahta hu. Soch raha hu shadi kar lu.
Daya : Bhai waah. Aakhir shadi karne hi wale ho. Kya bat hai! Lekin ye to batao kiske sath?
Abhijeet : Yar , Pooja .
Daya : *keeps silent for a minute and...* Hmm. Mujhe laga hi tha ki tum dono me kuch bahut gahra rishta raha hoga. Isiliye us din maine tum donoko milaya. Par tumne sab kuch soch to liya hai na? And what about Dr.Tarika?
Abhijeet : Yar Tarika ek achi ladki hai yar. Uske sath majak masti me time kaise jata hai pata hi nahi chalta. Par pooja ki bat hi kuch aur hai . Agar ham serious bhi bate karte hai to bhi ek man ko jo sukun milta hai wo bat tarikaji ke sath nahi hoti . Mai sab kuch bhul gaya tha meri pichli life ke bare me! Sirf Pooja yad rahi! Ab iska matlab to tum samajh hi sakte ho. Tarika ko mujhse bhi acha koi aur ladka milega.
Daya : Ok, Abhijeet . Tumne agar soch hi liya hai to ab samay mat barbad karo. Use propose kar do.
Abhijeet : Ha Daya. Maine aaj use Marine Drive pe bulaya hai. Mai wahi use propose karunga. Aur wo bhi mujhse kuch kehna chahti hai.
Daya : Wow! Tab to aur bhi achi baat hai. All the very best!

(And that evening, Abhijeet and Pooja meet at the Marine Drive.)

Abhijeet : Pooja , mujhe tumse kuch kahna hai.
Pooja : Abhijeet , mai bhi tumse kuch kehna chahti hu .
Abhijeet : Thik hai, fir. Pehle tum hi kaho. Ladies first.
Pooja : Meri shadi tay ho chuki hai. I have a boyfriend. Samir hai uska nam.

(Abhijeet gets in shock for sometimes but quickly recovers.)

Abhijeet : Wah ! Ye to badi achi bat hai !

Pooja : Hmm . Samir bahut acha ladka hai . Mujhse bahut pyar karta hai . Actor hai wo . Jab usne mujhe propose kiya to maine use pucha ki kya itni jaldi shadi karne se tumhare career par asar to nahi hoga? Tum to actor ho ! Tab wo bola koi bat nahi par ab agar ruk jau to pata nahi tumhe kab pa paunga vapas! Agar koi problem aayi to sath me handle karenge. Tum mere liye bandhan nahi , meri prerana banogi . Kitna acha ladka hai !

(There was a deep silence for some time. And then...)

Pooja : Acha , tum kya kehna chahte the?
Abhijeet : Mai to wo ... wo... Ha meri bhi ek girlfriend hai.
Pooja : Are vaah ! kaisi hai? Aur Kaun Hai?
Abhijeet : Vo mai leke aaunga na milwane ko. Acha , Ab mujhe bureau jana padega. Kam yad aa gaya hai!
Pooja : Accha...Thik Hai. Waise mujhe tumse aur baate karne thi but kaam pehle aata hai.

(They both again part. Abhijeet was heartbroken. In the bureau...)

Daya : Aur abhijeet , batao kya hua ? Ha kar di, na, usne?

(Abhijeet doesn't reply. Daya gives a puzzled look. Suddenly, Abhijeet notices Nikhil is sitting alone.)

Abhijeet : *in a deep voice* Kya hua, Nikhil? Kya soch rahe ho?
Nikhil : Meri girlfriend ne mujhe propose kiya hai, sir. Usi ke bare me soch raha hu.
Abhijeet : Kya tum usse pyar karte ho?
Nikhil : *Shyly* Haan!
Abhijeet : To fir to bahut achi bat hai! Ha kar do na! Kya soch rahe ho?
Nikhil : Sir , abhi abhi to mera career start hua hai. Abhi bahut aage jana hai. Aise me ye bandhan kya mujhe qaid nahi karega?
Abhijeet : Dekho Nikhil, meri salah mano to accept kar lo. *Remembers Pooja's words* Aur bandhan nahi, prerana samajh ke socho use. Ek bar agar kho diya use to fir bad me bahut taklif hoti hai.

(Abhijeet hides his face. Now Daya understands the whole thing. He goes near him & put his hands on Abhijeet's shoulder. He looks at Daya. Daya gives an understanding look.)

( This story was also a part of Amazing Race contest organised here . This is combine work of Myself & my friend Abhishek who was my partner in this contest. We had a theme of love story of Abhijeet with a new girl with minimum 5 siggies. Abhishek did a great work with Siggies , presenting the story & with suggestions also 👏 )
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Abhijeet Ki Khoj

The story is about Abhijeet's search for himself, his search for the synchronization between his past and the present.

And if we go the other way, it is really his search for his better half. Entire story is a love story. So, read and find out how lovely is our Abhijeet and how much concern he shows towards his love.

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Above story is my personal favourite & close to my heart . Humbly I would say that I do feel it's my most accomplished story in CID forum.
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Daya the Prankster

Daya gets in the plane & notices a girl on a seat with him. After exchanging pleasantries Daya sits with her.
Daya : And your name ?
Devika : Devika. And your name ? Must say you have very good physic & body.
Daya : Hehehe. Aa.. Aa... Thank you. My name is Daya. I work in CID.
Devika : That means my guess was right. You are really handsome.
Daya : Nahi ... nahi ... aisa kuch nahi hai . k.. kya... kya.. bol rahi hai aap ?
Devika : Seriously Daya. Koi bhi ladki tumhe pasand karegi. You are really handsome.

Daya feels awkward. So he takes his cell out to pass the time. But Devika sees his cell phone & notices the wallpaper. It has a photo with Abhijeet.

Devika : Who is he ?
Daya : Mera bada bhai. His name is Abhijeet. He is also in CID. He is Senior Inspector there.
Devika : Are va ! Ye bhi bahut ache dikhte hai !

Daya : Are ache kya ye to mujhse bhi handsome hai! Aur sabse imp bat ki ye single hai.

Devika : Matlab aap...

Daya : (laughing in his mind ) Ha. Meri shadi tay ho chuki hai. Par ise dekho na ! He is the most eligible bachelor. Bahut bahadur hai. Achi post pe hai aura cha kama leta hai. Aur kya chahiye.
Devika : Ha, Daya ! Mujhe bhi ye pasand aa gaya hai. Par kya mere liye sahi sabit hoga ?
Daya : Are , iski tum fikar hi mat karo. Tum usko bahut suit karti ho aur wo tumhe ! Tumhari Jodi to jaise bhagvan ne hi upar banake rakhi hai ! Meri guarantee hai use tum bahut pasand aaogi.
Devika : Are va! Par wo ha to kahega na ?
Daya : Of course ! Lekin kya hai na use ghuma firake pasand nahi.
Devika : Kya ? Iska matlab wo mujhe kahi ghumane nahi leka jayega ?

Daya : Are nahi ! Wo tumko world tour bhi karvayega. Mera matlab propose karne ke bare me hai. Mera matlab hai ki tum baki ladkiyonki tarah use pyar develop karne ka chakkar mat rakho. Use direct approach pasand hai. Vo mujhe abhi lene aa hi raha hai.
Devika : Kya ?
Daya : Yes ! Tab tum sidha bolo : " Janu , ham shadi kab kar rahe hai ? " Uske sath uski behan bhi hogi. Wo bolega , tum kaun ho ? Par wo natak kar raha hoga. Agar tum thik se kiya to shadi pakki !
Devika : Par aise bina jan pahchanke direct kaise bolu ?
(Daya whispers something in her ears.)

Devika : Ok. I agree.

Daya : Abhijeet, Ab dekho maja ! Hahahahaha !

After some time the plane lands on the airport. Both come out of it & in the lobby Abhijeet & Tarika are there to receive them.

Devika directly goes to Abhijeet.
Devika : : " Janu , ham shadi kab kar rahe hai ? " ( Pyar bhari aavaj me )
Tarika ( Angry ) : Abhijeet ? Kya hai ye ? Kaun hai ye ladki ?

Abhijeet : Y... ye.. y... y.. ye kya.. kya hai ye ? Aen ? Kaun hai aap Behenji ?

Devika : Behenji ? Mai tumhari behen hu kya? Tumhari behen to ye hai !
Tarika : Kya ? Mai tumhari behen hu Abhijeet ?
Abhijeet : Hehehe , are aap.. aap ... behen kaise ho sakti hai Tarikaji ?

Tarika : Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Mai ja rahi hu.
Tarika leaves.

Devika : Janu...
Abhijeet : Dekho , tum please abhi yaha se jao !
Devika also leaves.
Daya : Mai ye kya sun raha hu Abhijeet ? Kaun hai kaun ye ladki ? Tumhe to manna padega yar ! Dr. Tarika bhi aur ye bhi !
Abhijeet : Daya tum kya bol rahe ho yar ? Tum bhi yahi sochte ho ? Ek to ye tarika mu fulake chali gayi ! Ab kaise manau usko ?
Daya : Are yar , man jayegi! Tum use film dikhane le jao, Candle light dinner karao , aisa kuch karo na .
Abhijeet : Are ha ! Ye idea acha hai.

Daya : Tum fikr mat karo. Mai hi tum donoki tickets book karta hu, Aaj sham ek bahut achi film lagi hai. Tum dono wo dekh lo
Abhijeet : Film kaun dekhega yar ?
Daya : Kya ?
Abhijeet : K..K.. Kuch nahi ! Mai keh raha tha , dost ho to tumhare jaisa !

Both Abhi & Tarika reached inside the theatre. Abhijeet shocks to see Devika inside.
Abhijeet : Tum.. T.. tum yaha kya kar rahi ho ?

Devika : Mai yaha kya kar rahi hu ? Ham dono film jo dekhne wale hai sath sath. Dekho tickets hamari sath sath.

Abhijeet : Film mai aur tarika dekhne wale the !
Devika : Kyu majak kartre ho ? Daya ne mujhe kaha ki tumhari aur abhijeet ki seats ek sath hai ! Ab mai to aa gayi pahle se . Ab tumhari behen kaha baithegi ? Vaise bhi hall houseful hai !

Tarika : Isne mujhe firse behen kaha ??? Mai ja rahi hu !!!!
Abhijeet (Gusse me ) : Daya sss

Abhijeet gusse me daya se milta hai
Abhijeet : Daya , ye tumne kya kar diya ? Hamari tickets wo ladki ko kyu di ?

Daya : Ab yar, mujhe usi ladki ne bataya ki tum dono sath film dekh rahe ho. Mujhe laga tumne irada badal diya hoga yar , matlab ye ladki achi hai. Tumhe laga hoga Dr. Tarika se yahi achi hai .
Abhijeet : Dayyaaa

Daya : Hahahaha. Dekho abhijeet , tum aisa kyu nahi karte tum aaj Tarika ko dinner ke liye le jao aur use propose karke ye kissa hi hamesha ke liye khatam kar do !
Abhijeet : Ha ye idea acha hai ! Thik hai mai yahi karta hu

Daya : ( Man me) Hahahahha. Ab tumhe milega dusra dhakka !!!

Next night Abhijeet invited Tarika for candle light dinner. She told she will come little later because she is stuck in lab work. So Abhijeet went first & sat on reserved table & was waiting for Tarika. But suddenly Devika came there.

Abhijeet : D..Devika , tum yaha ?
Devika : Ha , Abhijeet ! Mai yaha . Thank you so much Darling !

Abhijeet : K...k... kis .. kisliye ?
Devika : Oh Abhijeet ! Tumhara message mila mujhe. Tum mujhe shadi ke liye propose karna chahte ho na ? Isme puchne ki kya bat hai ? Meri to pahle se hi ha hai !

Suddenly Tarika arrives .
Tarika : Wah Abhijeet ! kya bat hai ! Mai yahi dekhna chahti thi ki asli bat kya hai. Mera lab me koi kam nahi tha.

Abhijeet : J... Jhoot hai ye !
Devika : Agar jhoot hai to ye ring mujhe kyu bhijwayi tumne ? Message kyu diya tume dost ke hathon ?

Abhijeet : Kis..Kisne diya tumhe ?

Devika : Daya ne !
Abhijeet : Dayaaa !!!

With anger Abhijeet goes to Daya's house. He rangs a doorbell ; door gets opened & the man who opens is none other than ACP Pradyuman ! With him is entire CID team . Abhijeet is shocked again .
ACP : Lo ! Aa gaye sahabjade ! Abhijeet , tum kaha the ? Pahle tumhare ghar pe dekha , bad me forensic lab me dekha ! Waha pata chala ki tum aur tarika bahar gaye ho. Lekin daya ne kaha tum yaha jaroor aaoge.

Abhijeet : Par sir , hua kya ye to bataiye !
Abhijeet looks angrily at Daya. Daya shows no expressions.
ACP : Hua kya ? Abhijeet tumne apne sath CID ki ijjat bhi mitti me mila di hai. Khoon kiya hai tumneee SSS Khooon !

Abhijeet : Kh...kh... khoon ? Kiska ?
ACP : Tumhari nayi girlfriend Devika ka !
Abhijeet : Devika ka khoon maine kiya ? Ye jhoot hai sir ! Mai to directly hotel se idhar hi aaya hu .
ACP : To kya ham jhoot bol rahe hai ? Devika ki lash padi hai uske ghar me !
Abhijeet : Par mai kyu marunga use ?
ACP : Kyunki wo tumse shadi ki jid kar rahi thi aur tumhe ye manjur nahi tha. Hamare pas Daya ki gawahi hai jisne ye sab dekha hai !
Abhijeet : Daya , ye kya bol rahe ho yar ? Tum to samajhao in logon ko !

Daya :Abhijeet , mujhe tumse ye ummid nahi thi !
Abhijeet : Daya, tum bhi ?
ACP : Chalo Abhijeet, mujhe tumhara batch chahiye !
Abhijeet : B..batch ?

ACP : Aur batch ke sath me , gun bhi deni padegei Sr.Inspector Abhijeet !
Abhijeet : Sir, aap please aise bat mat kijiye . Mujhe taklif hoti hai bahut.
ACP : Acha ? Aur wo ACP giraftar wale case me tumne yahi to bola tha sabkuch!
Abhijeet : Par wo to to natak tha na sir.

ACP : To abhi ham kya kar rahe hai ?
And then ACP starts to laugh . At the same time Tarika & Devika also comes from inside & starts laughing. Everybody starts laughing. Daya the most ! Abhijeet shockingly looking at the faces of everyone.
Devika : Yes Abhijeet ! This was drama planned by Daya. He gave me the details in our flight.
Abhijeet : Daya , tumne ?
Daya : To kya hua yar ? Hasna hasaana , tum hi kar sakte ho kya ? Mai hamesha serious kyu rahu ? Maine ye aise hi kiya. Just for fun. Dosti ke khatir zhel bhi lo :D

Abhijeet : Ab kya bolu yar daya ? Dost ho to tumhare jaisa !

XXX THE END XXX

(This story was written on the occasion of Daya's Birthday Contest.)

Edited by Kulasya. - 9 years ago

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