Story: The search for Abhijeet

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MysticMorning

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Kahani pahaucha interesting mod pe.😃 The micro mini detailing is wonderful di.⭐️⭐️ Earlier the team issue created doubt for me also. 😕But you have managed it carefully.😊 But itni asani se CID wala hoon kehna sahi tha Abhijeet sir ke liye? 😵Bas aise hi police wala kehna se bhi chalta. Whatever... not a big issue. Coz story has reached at an interesting turning point.

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MysticMorning

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: visrom
^what doubt? 😕

Wohi Abhijeet team kiun mention kar raha tha accident ke baad gaonwale ke pass.? Aur woh lig bhi kiun unhe family ke bare me pucha nhi... yahi.

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MysticMorning

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

2G signal issue is very funny. 😆😆Seriously 4G ke zamane me bhi jab kamwaqt internet kabhi kabhi 2G signal dikhata hain, itna gussa aata hain ki pucho hi mat. 😡😡God!!!!😲 Kya nazara hain di.⭐️⭐️ Fantastic pic of hilly road.😃 Again laugh. 😆Freddie's suitcase.🤣 Poor inspector. 😆Aww... Phir se khatam! Okez okez. Tomorrow is that big day and let the dhamaka opened up then.😊 Wow! Waiting eagerly😃

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JUNGLI-CAT

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

dear , where is part 3...?.eager to read but fail to find it. 😭

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gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

My Night Treat...🥳

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

It's in the second post. check it out.^

Thanks mystic... your comments inspire me. 😳

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sherdilali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Ohhh
Kahan aaa k chod dia di
Duo pe
Can't wait to read last
Post it soon

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MysticMorning

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: visrom
It's in the second post. check it out.^

Thanks mystic... your comments inspire me. 😳

He he kya di how can i inspire u 😳
Where i seldom deeply in love of ur creations 😃

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JUNGLI-CAT

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Woww...bahut maza aaya ...2G network... haha...really bahut gussa aata hai jab network sath chod de...wonderful story dear ...thanku for this treat...

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Finished! Posted last part.

As I mentioned at the start, I wanted to attempt the investigative story for the contest. But when I started, I realised that only Abhijeet should be there. What we miss on screen is the lovely duo chemistry and I can't bring myself to write a story with no Daya in it. Therefore the story went against the theme and I decided not to submit it for the contest. But I liked the basic idea and thought I'll use that as the basic theme. Thanks to Himani and Binod and whoever thought of that theme. This story was possible because of it.

Excuse me for typos and loopholes. This was completed in a hurry. Do ask for clarifications if any. 😊

Wishing Adi sir a very happy birthday once again.