OS: The vacation

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Posted: 9 years ago
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In the beginning I was never a fan of Sachin but later I warmed up to him after meeting HP in person. I am disappointed at his leaving the show but honestly he never got his due.

Just a short OS I had started writing when the news of his leaving came out and I completed it just now...with an open end.

Excuse me if anyone is hurt by some of the lines.



Scene: Abhijeet's home


Abhijeet was about to leave for the bureau when his phone rang. It was Sachin. Abhijeet assumed it was about a new murder case and Sachin was calling him to tell him the murder spot, so that he could go there straight.


Abhijeet: Haan, Sachin bolo


Sachin: Sir, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai.


Abhijeet: Kya baat hai, bataao...


Sachin: Sir, main phone par nahi bata sakta. Main aapse personally baat karna chahta hoon. Main 15 minute mein aapke ghar aa raha hoon.


Abhijeet: Mere ghar? Main abhi bureau ke liye nikal raha tha...tum wahin aake bataao.


Sachin: Nahi sir...mujhe aapse bureau se baahar hi baat karni hai.


Abhijeet: Kya hua Sachin, sab theek hai?


Sachin: Haan sir...


Abhijeet: Theek hai, aa jaao. Main tumhara intezaar karta hoon.


After 15 minutes Sachin arrived at Abhijeet's doorstep.


Abhijeet: Tumne naashta khaya?


Sachin: Haan sir.


Abhijeet: Toh main chai banata hoon..adrak wali.


Sachin: Rehne dijiye sir...


Abhijeet: Kya hua...bohot serious lag rahe ho.


Sachin: Sir, main CID chod raha hoon.


Abhijeet: Kya? Achanak kua hua tumhe?


Sachin: Sir, main thak gaya hoon...har din wahi laashein, khoon, forensic, shootouts...kuch aur nahi bacha humari zindagi mein.


Abhijeet: Lekin hum agar thak jayenge toh public ko criminals se kaun bachayega?


Sachin: Jo aap keh rahe hain, woh theek hai lekin main apne aap ko motivate nahi kar paa raha hoon sir.


Abhijeet: Tum CID chodkar kya karna chahte ho?


Sachin: Pata nahi sir...shayad kuch din world tour par chala jaaonga...uske baad main police training academy mein faculty ke post ke liye apply karoonga.


Abhijeet: Tum kuch din ke liye chutti le lo, par chuttiyon ke baad CID mein hi waapas kyon nahi aa jaate?


Sachin: Nahi sir...aaj kal kaam mein mann nahi lagta. Aap apne aap ko motivate kaise kar lete hain?


Abhijeet: Meri zindagi mein CID ke alva kuch aur hai hi nahi...main apni yaadasth kho gaya tha...uske baad CID mein aane ke baad mujhe ek nayi zindagi mili...main ise kabhi nahi chod sakta...ACP saab, Daya...Freddie - inhone hi mujhe ek normal insaan banaya.



Sachin( looks sad) : Mere paas aisi koi wajah nahi hai. Main kuch aur karna chahta hoon.


Abhijeet(understands something): Tumne faisla kar liya hai?


Sachin: Haan sir. Main aaj ACP sir ko bataaonga. Lekin mujhe darr hai ki woh meri baat nahi manenge. Kya aap ACP ko mn sakenge?


Abhijeet: Sachin, tum ek bohot achche officer ho. Main tumhe khona nahi chahta, lekin agar tumne jaane ka faisla kar hi liya hai toh main ACP sir ko mana loonga. Lekin meri salah yehi hai ki tum 4-5 mahine ke liye break le lo. Agar uske baad tumhe lage ki tum CID chodna hi chahte ho, toh hum tumhe nahi rokenge.



Sachin: Sir, main toh resignation type karke aaya tha...


Abhijeet: Jaldbaazi mein koi faisla nahi lete. Main ACP saab se tumhari chuttiyon ke baare mein baat karta hoon. Waapas aane ke baad apna aakhri faisla sunana.



Sachin: Theek hai sir...shayad aap theek keh rahe hain.


Abhijeet: Sachin, in 6 saalon mein agar anjaane mein humse koi galti ho gayi ho, toh maaf karna.


Sachin: Yeh kya keh rahe hain sir...aap mere senior hain...mujhse maafi kyon maang rahe hain.


Abhijeet: Bas aise hi, Sachin. Main ummeed karta hoon ki tum waapas aaoge. 😊


Sachin: Pata nahi sir...





Later:


Daya: Boss, yeh kya...ACP saab ne Sachin ko 5 mahine ki chutti de di! Aur tumne ACP saab ko man liya?


Abhijeet: Haan.


Daya: Toh humein bhi chuttiyon ki zaroorat hai. Humare liye bhi baat karo na.,


Abhijeet: Yeh waisi baat nahi hai Daya. Sachin CID chodna chahta hai.


Daya: KYA! Lekin kyon


Abhijeet: Bas, keh raha hai ki kaam mein mann nahi lagta.


Daya: Achanak kya ho gaya use?


Abhijeet : Galti humari hai, Daya. ACP saab, tum, main Freddie...17 saalon se ek saath kaam kar rahe hain, ek parivar ki tarah. Mujhe dekho. Main CID mein aaj bhi kaam isliye kar raha hoon kyonki ACP saab, tum aur Freddie mere saath hain.


Agar tum sab nahi hote toh main CID mein nahi hota...aaj bhi usi bridge ke paas khada rehta ek zinda laash ki tarah.


Sachin 6 saal pehle aaya tha. Humne shayad kabhi use apne is parivar ka hissa hone ka ehsaas nahi dilaya. Kaam mein busy the aur usse dosti badhane ka mauka nahi mila. Kya tumhe pata hai ki Sachin ke family mein aur kaun hai?


Daya: Nahi...😔


Abhijeet: Wohi toh...Anjaane mein humse galti ho gayi. Shayad isi wajah se Vivek bhi CID chod diya.


Daya: Sachin ne tumhe yeh sab bataya?


Abhijeet: Nahi...maine bas aise hi uske mann ki baat padh li.


Daya: Toh ab kya karen?


Abhijeet: Agar woh waapas CID mein aa gaya...toh hum apni galti sudhaarenge. Aur agar nahi, toh is baat ka dhyaan rakhenge ki jo bhi naya officer uski jagah aayega...uske saath hum yeh galti nahi karenge.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Wow...OS on sachin.will read it soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
OS means what?
Own story?
Edited by swathi17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Lovely one Vis di...
What Abhijeet was saying...is right in our case too..
When a new officer comes, we especially i can't connect with the new one.
May be we should try to accept new cops with their new style too...😊
Absolutely loved the OS ❤️
Edited by AS-Rifi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Nice Di
Sooper Story
Aap ne Sachin bhai ki fan honey ka haq adaa kar dia
Adi ji dil ki baaton ko pehchan letey hein😳
ek hamarey dil pe nazar nahi daaltey😉
But ek baat he I hope you never mind
Seniors and Juniors me farq to hota hi he
Ye kia ke aap un se barabari ka sochein
Or Viwek ki to bohot achi friendship thi sab se yahan tak ke Freddy Sir se to nok jhonk bhi thi
Jis Epi me Abhi, Daya, Sachin or ek or officer (shayad Nikhil) ko kidnap kar lia tha
(I think CID giriftaar naam tha shayad, I forgot the name)
Us Epi me ye chaaron Ek car me bilkul doston ki tarha hanstey huey ,baatein kartey huey ja rahey they
Or phir Friendship ke liyeKhood se pehel karni padti he
I hope U and other members never mind my Orguments
Bas kuch baatein dil me aai theen OS parh ke
to Keh deen
Sorry If u Mind😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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absolutely apt concept in this ongoing situation di
yah Sachin was seriously a bright glow in CID family, but he was never treated like that
its sad but true😭
yah we miss him
but somewhere its may be the production, who might have unable to use him or treat him as per his talent just like Vivek
thoughtful OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jis Epi me Abhi, Daya, Sachin or ek or officer (shayad Nikhil) ko kidnap kar lia tha
(I think CID giriftaar naam tha shayad, I forgot the name)
Us Epi me ye chaaron Ek car me bilkul doston ki tarha hanstey huey ,baatein kartey huey ja rahey they

its CID KI KIDNAPPING, Episode 898 - 15th December 2012 Kousar😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was not really personal. Ok, they had a chat and Daya asked Sachin to get married and all...but that was just a little chat like we have with office colleagues. Not really a friendship the way they show Abhijeet and Daya. They could have tried...it would have been nice to see.
Edited by visrom - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Amazing OS
Diii keep writing
I miss your stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Thanks for the story Di.
It was a story with a deep thought and i liked it very much.
short but sweet. I too didn't like him in the beginning like most of us but had started to like him with time. And now his absence doesn't feel good.
I wish your open ended story ended with a happy note...though I know that is never going to happen in reality.😔

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Posted by: Prashant025 · 1 months ago

Rate the episode guys😊

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